Prince of Pagans King of Paupers

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Prince of Pagans King of Paupers

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(For those who don't get me, know that I hate the main stream industry and how they extort artist.. read through the lines)

More a matter of authenticating how the raw scent is scraping
Scintillating since awakened from a freshly rinsed abrasion
Dawned the Prince of Pagans but crowned the King of Paupers
bring up a raw verse whose words were stings of authors
With sins that charter and accept all denominations
An audible abomination
This case is a slam dunk; now watch as I palm the nation
With freshly turned earth resting above graves of those finely equipped
Fighting the violent urge to finally buy me a crypt
Signing the script with the X like an illiterate mogul
Whose heroes pose near mountains of coke and exhibit a nose-full
Who live in an oval made of shimmering opal & a thousand facets
Endowed with “the green” thoughts between dreams doused in acid
Giving a pound to Baptists and a kilo to Catholics and that’s only half the mix
With a half mixed attractive chick turning tractor tricks
In a half ass attempt to manufacture whips
A near miraculous tactic keeps the rap affixed
To radiators with chains
Crazy neighbors refrain
From criticizing what I’m writing or pay me later with pain
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this shit wasnt bad homie. im glad people are waking up knowing pagans are all around and everything is corrupted. this was a solid drop, i just wish you could have went a little bit longer.
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Post by IntrinsicCadence »

Your fast becoming one of my favorite writters on the site Riggz. The uniqueness of this piece oozes from every line. Your vocab use is elevated, but clear and concise. Your message is layered, not simple and just complex enough. However your flow was a little hard to find, made this come off more like a piece for the poetry forum rather than the written rhyme forum. Overall though, damn good.
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Post by JDR »

Nice drop. i'm feelin this piece. I like when ppl come wit stuff you don't hear everyday and thats this. Vocab and flow was structured very nicely in this. Also, loved the "book smarts" factor in any drop. Showing knowledge and being this consistant is rare so Im diggin on it.

Giving a pound to Baptists and a kilo to Catholics and that’s only half the mix
With a half mixed attractive chick turning tractor tricks
Love this bar. The multies were niceee.
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Post by king nep »

this is mad skill i lov it riggs u talented boy!!
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Post by K KiLLaH »

Riggz you a BAMF for this shit was different and showed intellegence flow was on point i sensed all the pauses n swag in ya bars def feeling ya POV
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