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LIFE I LIVE(2xs advice)

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LIFE I LIVE(2xs advice)

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alright well hommies here it is 2xs gave me some advice so i tried it and this is the outcome jus neeed more practice with it
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Quality Is MUCHHHHHH Better. Sits On Tha Beat And Mixes Alot Better Than What I've Heard From You. Still Need To Work On Riding The Beat Better Tho Bro. Also, You Fell Off On Tha Hook. Need More Energy Too Bro. Seems Monotone Real Bad In Tha 2nd Verse. Overall, Decent Listen As Far As Quality Goes. You Getting There Man. Just Don't Put Too Much Emphasy On The Supporters. Remember, Use Them To Support The Lead Vocals, Not To Overpower It.
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Re: LIFE I LIVE(2xs advice)

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^thanx 2xs il keep workin on it
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