"Crucial" First Track Off My Mixtape (Life Lessons Vol. 1)

[Livenlearn]

Thanks For Listening, Leave Feedback, and Enjoy!

http://www.reverbnation.com/#!/artist/s ... ls/6708922

Mixtape Drops Sunday Night, plz download you won't be disappointed

[Slicka]

alright i like the beat first off.....vocal is mixed nice lyrics are good gots a good flow....fits together nicely.....nice drop fam

[Livenlearn]

Thnx for the feed man, def. be sure to stop by 2mar and download the mixtape...

[Sentus]

Pretty dope song, I might check out the mixtape. You had a good swag about your voice. Good flow too, lyrics weren't bad but I didn't really like some of the young money style punchlines you had. Good song though, it sounds better than anything I could make.

[Kause mc]

hey dude, i like the sample at the start, fits well with the beat. awwwwesome flow, suitable delivery. different style but its def up there man props. ill def download ur mixtape. im listening to rhythm of my life. lol great sampling if its your beat??

anyways 8/10 for crucial bro

[Livenlearn]

Glad you liked "Crucial" man, and thnx for peepn the mixtape, hopefully their some tracks you like on there, and Ill def. peep your tracks and give feed

[2xS]

Really Likin Tha Message In Tha Intro. . .Damn Yo, You Got MAD Quotables In This. . .Hold On Lol

"If The Sky Is The Limit. . .Don't Understand Chicks" ---SMOOTH MULTIS AND CONNECT NICELY!! GREAT WAY TO START THE TRACK OFF!!!!!

"Penguins, Fly As Can Be" ---I LOL'd At This One. Good Shit

"Flow Is An Ocean. . .U.S. Open" ---Good Concept!

"Jokers Getting Aced. . .Watever Tha Cards Dealt" --- LOVE This Concept/Metaphor

"Paddle To Ya Chest. . .Cardiac Arrest" ---AND ANOTHER Good Concept!

Man. . .You Brought It Good On This One. Mixing Is Clear! Crisp, And Smooth. The One Thing I Did Notice Is You Can Tell You Punched In At The "Yo I Think I Need Therapy" Bar Cuz Your Vocals Come In Lower Than The Originals Do. Not Sure If You Wanted To Take That Approach, Or Just Went With It. I Think It Sounds Decent, But Others Might Disagree. Overall, REally Good Listen Man. Lookin Forward To Whatever We Do In The Future

[Deciple]

first off just like 2xS said.. the quoteables are awesome.. you came good with them.. i liked your flow also man.. i love how you just keep going and going and going but a hook would be nice in this.. but imma def check out that mixtape you got out.. you got talent..

[Livenlearn]

Lol, Thnx for listen guys, and yea Deciple, def. take a listen at the mixtape and tell me what you think....2xs yea I def. punched in at that point, and I didn't want it to be too noticeable so I probably should've uppd the vocal...It s just that i never remember my lyrics b4 I drop so I got read off notepad and the verse went too long on notepad to continue flowin, but yea Ill try an fix that...glad you guys enjoyed it and def. peep the mixtape @ http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/life- ... 20168.html