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There you go. Expect my verse within the due date.

voted in slicka vs blok b and rugged vs cee4..


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Watch me expose this impostor when I show ‘em I flow like a monster
Cause I’m the one with the crazy spit; That’s why you only mad, doctor.

I’ll leave this krayfish laying at the base of a lake and nobody look for you.
Always frontin, known for nothing. So, I don’t mean the BBC show when I say, “Dr. Who?”

Even James Brown don’t know ka-razy!

And I’ve heard of lazy but who the fuck falls asleep texting a verse?
Although, that’s ironic cause I fell asleep reading your boring collection of words.*

For whatever it’s worth I’m the best; you’re the worst. Get a clue, kid.
Though the truth is: I’d go crazy, too, bitch, if I flowed as bad as you did.

He had a dream of beating me but his nightmare might bare the Freudian.
See, you’re really Dr. “Do Little” and this lion you’re talking to is your Dr. Kevorkian!


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dr-krayzie wrote:Smh i fell asleep while textin...

from his battle with Slicka http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/slick ... 20061.html

Everything else should be pretty self explanatory.

Ayo..homie ur spits pack a MILD EMANCIPATION...so if lion thinks he can beat doc?we know Hes got a wild imagination!!

Ur bars hav "Poor construction",faggot ura STrANGER TO WEALTH!!!...and Its awful the way "man your smellin" ,,,itis a fuckin DANGER TO HEALTH!!! cow-dung...


Il hav ur beard smitten..all ur shxt is ''AUK-WORD" lyk weird writtens..
Bro il hit ur clan until ur crew aint CONNECTIN CLOWN!!!my jabs hurt "pride of lion" and i aint jus Talkin of a COLLECTIVE NOUN!.....

Make a feast of this WEAKLY PREY...kats url beta Stay tuned to TV EY,cos da only tym u'll see "kau won!" is when watchin BBA...

...dickriding is the only tym ur fag ass COCKS CONSISTANT..see how i'llchop his organs and have "li on-hand" at my disposal lyk hes THE DOCS ASSISSTANT...

EXPO:
1.emancipation is used as deliverance in ths context
... kau-won= kaone ,a guy who was in bba,big brother africa which is a show..i cant do em links u may google it..
2. Lion hand = li on-hand,i took lion and cut it short..li.
3.manure = man your..its cowdung use as fertilizer..
4.aukward=akward, auk is kau flippled
.5 pride of lions is a collective noun for many lions...he's crew is collectively ill...

If you dont get sumthang pm me...

VOTES UP!!!

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Kau
Watch me expose this impostor when I show ‘em I flow like a monster
Cause I’m the one with the crazy spit; That’s why you only mad, doctor.
2.5 the set up was weak, multies basic, and punch fell short of the target
I’ll leave this krayfish laying at the base of a lake and nobody look for you.
Always frontin, known for nothing. So, I don’t mean the BBC show when I say, “Dr. Who?”
2.5 Once again, poor set up as if you’ve already thought of the punch and all you want to do is set up the rhyme for it. It doesn’t flow into the punch at all. Punch was weak asking a question with a statement. Needs rewording
And I’ve heard of lazy but who the fuck falls asleep texting a verse?
Although, that’s ironic cause I fell asleep reading your boring collection of words.*
3 Not a bad personal. Best bar so far
For whatever it’s worth I’m the best; you’re the worst. Get a clue, kid.
Though the truth is: I’d go crazy, too, bitch, if I flowed as bad as you did.
3 The multies were basic, punch didn’t have much umph to it, but it made me giggle
He had a dream of beating me but his nightmare might bare the Freudian.
See, you’re really Dr. “Do Little” and this lion you’re talking to is your Dr. Kevorkian!
3 Gave that for effort since I liked the multies, but could’ve delivered the punch better
14/25
Doc
Ayo..homie ur spits pack a MILD EMANCIPATION...so if lion thinks he can beat doc?we know Hes got a wild imagination!!
2.5 Intro starting off a little too short. Your lines appear to be very short for a complete bar.. just FYI
Ur bars hav "Poor construction",faggot ura STrANGER TO WEALTH!!!...and Its awful the way "man your smellin" ,,,itis a fuckin DANGER TO HEALTH!!! cow-dung...
2.5 funny you speak about “poor construction of bars”, anyway, the set up was weak, and the punch was just as weak. Nothing packing a punch here… looking for that OH effect
Il hav ur beard smitten..all ur shxt is ''AUK-WORD" lyk weird writtens..
didn’t know if this was a bar, so I didn’t count it, plus it would put you over bar limit.
Bro il hit ur clan until ur crew aint CONNECTIN CLOWN!!!my jabs hurt "pride of lion" and i aint jus Talkin of a COLLECTIVE NOUN!.....
3 This is better, I liked the pride of lion/collective noun punch. Set up needed work, but punch was creative
Make a feast of this WEAKLY PREY...kats url beta Stay tuned to TV EY,cos da only tym u'll see "kau won!" is when watchin BBA...
3 I used to watch BBA so that was funny. And dug the multies in this for the most part
...dickriding is the only tym ur fag ass COCKS CONSISTANT..see how i'llchop his organs and have "li on-hand" at my disposal lyk hes THE DOCS ASSISSTANT...
3 another decent name play and punch
14/25
Wow, that didn’t work out as planned, so the only thing I have left to go off of is flow. And Since Kau took that category in my opinion (Doc your lines were either too short or just choppy for me as the reader) he gets my vote.

close battle guys - vote Kau

Thanks for taking the time, Riggz. Uppin.

My vote is for Kau.
Krayzie, I liked some punchlines, but having to explain references just took the bite out of it. Good drop, but in my opinion, he got you.
Respect to both of you though.

That's 3 - 0. Good battle, Doc.

this was nyc reali,word bro...

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vOTE; kAU

kAU gets my vote cuz DJ's shit was hard to follow and pretty choppy. Some decent attempts at punches and metaphors but all in all the lines were not connecting. KAu takes this with the more consistant, well thought out verse!

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