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ayo...il cut ur brain and let it DeTER AND THEN SMOTHER!...FUCK CHRISTMAS..we only say *ho ho ho* wen we REFER TO UR MOTHER..
U YELLIN UR SMARTER?..I bring heat FAg..HELL IS A STARTER!..dyke U "cudnt raise the bar" if u put ur CELL IN THE CHARGER!..
My spits are CANCEROUS,MAYBE..Its festive season..plus im GENEROUS LATELY!..SO 4 a gift il giv u an "L En" but not that DEGENERES LAdY!!!
Ur spits are OFF PACE G!!!motherfùcker TAKE THREE..even if i "shaved santa" he stil wudnt be *BOLD* enough to FACE ME...

Im rusty bro..do ur thang

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lol.. i'ma spit ..trust me

-- Thu Dec 30, 2010 7:49 pm --

first off: ya posted this battle all wrong! you're fired from Ill..
but i guess the rules don't apply to you since they're required with skill..
i'll wire ya grill, that shit you spittin needs to die & go fly off bird..
cuz whatever lines doc say are nothin more than a Microsoft Word..
i'm knocking ya off herb, and leaving blood trails on whatever ya lay-on..
so this next line will have your blood all over it.....written in Kray-on..
your social days stay gone! cuz with broads ya don't see dates..
girls treat u like old Nintendo games.....they never play with D, K?

-quick kill, and don't worry my dude.. when i have the time i'll go get where you bit those bars from homie.. i kno exactly where too.. e.z, vote up kiddos

DR

ayo...il cut ur brain and let it DeTER AND THEN SMOTHER!...
FUCK CHRISTMAS..we only say *ho ho ho* wen we REFER TO UR MOTHER..

^Its ok, but her names not Santa. Close enough i guess. punch was ok, nothing special.

U YELLIN UR SMARTER?..I bring heat FAg..HELL IS A STARTER!..dyke U "cudnt raise the bar" if u put ur CELL IN THE CHARGER!..

^ That charger line sounds familiar, but funny. The "hell starter" threw me off.

My spits are CANCEROUS,MAYBE..Its festive season..plus im GENEROUS LATELY!..SO 4 a gift il giv u an "L En" but not that DEGENERES LAdY!!!

Mult(y) was ok, Nice name play but the degeneres lady didnt inpact the punch

Ur spits are OFF PACE G!!!motherfùcker TAKE THREE..even if i "shaved santa" he stil wudnt be *BOLD* enough to FACE ME...

^ again with the x-mas thing. Bold/bald i get it, but whats that have to do with facing you? Weak ending imo. p.s. shes a girl, avy gives it away.

eN

irst off: ya posted this battle all wrong! you're fired from Ill..
but i guess the rules don't apply to you since they're required with skill..

^ good solid opener

i'll wire ya grill, that shit you spittin needs to die & go fly off bird..
cuz whatever lines doc say are nothin more than a Microsoft Word..

^I see what your getting at with the microsoft doc, but its kinda weak. Internal rhyming was decent.

i'm knocking ya off herb, and leaving blood trails on whatever ya lay-on..
so this next line will have your blood all over it.....written in Kray-on..

^ nice rhyming but its lacking a good punch. I chuckled that you used Crayon as name play.

your social days stay gone! cuz with broads ya don't see dates..
girls treat u like old Nintendo games.....they never play with D, K?

^ I actually did laugh. Nice name play again.

All in all my vote goes to eN. her flow was better, nicer name play, and some better punches. Good job both of you

dr-krayzie:

ayo...il cut ur brain and let it DeTER AND THEN SMOTHER!...
FUCK CHRISTMAS..we only say *ho ho ho* wen we REFER TO UR MOTHER..

2/5 Set up was nonsensical. Punch was played.

U YELLIN UR SMARTER?..I bring heat FAg..HELL IS A STARTER!
..dyke U "cudnt raise the bar" if u put ur CELL IN THE CHARGER!..

2/5 Again, with a played concept in the punch. Again with the terrible set up.

My spits are CANCEROUS,MAYBE..Its festive season..plus im GENEROUS LATELY!..
SO 4 a gift il giv u an "L En" but not that DEGENERES LAdY!!!

3/5 Decent punch but you're forcing multies to make your rhymes and it's making everything look weak.

Ur spits are OFF PACE G!!!motherfùcker TAKE THREE..
even if i "shaved santa" he stil wudnt be *BOLD* enough to FACE ME...

3/5 the one time you didn't force the multi it was too simple. Punch was weak.


10/20 Pretty weak overall. Tried for some name play but generally failed.



eN Santana:

first off: ya posted this battle all wrong! you're fired from Ill..
but i guess the rules don't apply to you since they're required with skill..

2/5 Wasn't aimed at Krayzie. Wasn't hard hitting at all.

i'll wire ya grill, that shit you spittin needs to die & go fly off bird..
cuz whatever lines doc say are nothin more than a Microsoft Word..

3/5 It was a creative concept but the execution was lackluster. The multie didn't really work for me either. And essentially made the set up sound awkward. Die and then go fly off? Also, calling him a bird?

i'm knocking ya off herb, and leaving blood trails on whatever ya lay-on..
so this next line will have your blood all over it.....written in Kray-on..

3/5 Decent concept but could've been executed better. Set up was meh.

your social days stay gone! cuz with broads ya don't see dates..
girls treat u like old Nintendo games.....they never play with D, K?

4/5 Now this is some good shit. Def your best bar. Good for a closer, too.


12/20 Not great but had some decent concepts. Got better as it went along.


Overall, Santana came with some fresher concepts and that's what won her this battle IMO.

+eN Santana

Flow - eN
Multies - Doc
Punches - eN
Name Play - eN
Most enjoyable - Doc (believe it or not, his delivery kept me interested, had some crazy shit in there tho that cost him the battle ie santa/bold)

quotes: Doc - "My spits are CANCEROUS,MAYBE..Its festive season..plus im GENEROUS LATELY!..SO 4 a gift il giv u an "L En" but not that DEGENERES LAdY!!!"


eN - "i'm knocking ya off herb, and leaving blood trails on whatever ya lay-on..
so this next line will have your blood all over it.....written in Kray-on..
your social days stay gone! cuz with broads ya don't see dates..
girls treat u like old Nintendo games.....they never play with D, K?"

Vote = eN for more direct and harder punches.

Props on voting. Thanks.

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