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alright you posted a call out section saying anyone so i think the rules were 8 bars no fliping 24 hours to respond.


so if so then.......this is my check

-- Fri Dec 31, 2010 8:24 am --

your not the king of shit, get the lingo, i dismantle pussys, lke the bitch that you is/
as we speak, your flippin weak, leave ya career gone..... like injured gymnist/

you think you hot "shit" but on average...... you couldnt sell piss/
reminisce leave you gone worse then jadakiss"Death KISS"/

empty clips, ta kill clicks, kill this kid, like magicians im good at KILLIN TRICKS/(kinglingo)
dishonorbale unmoral worth nothin like blood girls fucking crips/

leave ya bars exposed like strippers in the nude here i have a few cents/sense/
your a cop for jackin flows, so here.... bite this...chasin my bars im over the fence/

Last I checked.. you couldnt drive without a license so why he test driving a benz?
He'd lose control on cruise control so why he saying he can contend?

See I'm a benz... you a buick..I'm a 10... you a Lose Quick!
Bend you all up like a Toothpick. Bitch, you cleaning tool sweep my shoes.. Broomstick (haha)

His name slicka cuz he use ta slide down poles.
Yo remember that nigga? Coming to the stage.. A Blue eyed ho!

ha. Dude your nothing but an E-Thug... Cuzz? Just because you wear a blue bandana you aint Cripped Up! (his avatar)
See I'm Rippin Fags, Pushing Gats, moving weight with crunching abs that'll turn around and crunch his fag! (no homo!)

-- Thu Dec 30, 2010 10:17 pm --

good luck pimp

for your career lol jk

alright good luck 2 you 2.......Uppin 0-0 5 votes to win 3-0 to k.0

Alright, Im going to break this down for you guys...

Slicka's Verse

your not the king of shit, get the lingo, i dismantle pussys, lke the bitch that you is/
as we speak, your flippin weak, leave ya career gone..... like injured gymnist/

I like the wordplay involved in this and the delivery of the bar itself. Good opener.

you think you hot "shit" but on average...... you couldnt sell piss/
reminisce leave you gone worse then jadakiss"Death KISS"/

I like the wordplay in this one too, but somehow the delivery on the punch wasnt as ill as I know it could have been. Good concept but also a universal punch, really.

empty clips, ta kill clicks, kill this kid, like magicians im good at KILLIN TRICKS/(kinglingo)
dishonorbale unmoral worth nothin like blood girls fucking crips/

This is a great concept, but just misses on the delivery IMO. You are staying sick with the wordplay, and I like that alot fam. I'm a huge fan of wordplay, its what helped build hip hop to where its at now. People often forget this.

leave ya bars exposed like strippers in the nude here i have a few cents/sense/
your a cop for jackin flows, so here.... bite this...chasin my bars im over the fence/

I liked the idea here too, but some peeps might not get the fence/bars reference. Might think about how you are bringing you delivery. Once again, you are flipping wordplay thru the bars. Over-all I think you should would on being more direct with your verse to your opponent, not using 'universal' lines, and work on your delivery. Other than that, you're in great shape.

Lingo's Verse

Last I checked.. you couldnt drive without a license so why he test driving a benz?
He'd lose control on cruise control so why he saying he can contend?

This is a good personal, and I like how the punch was brought. Nicely done.

See I'm a benz... you a buick..I'm a 10... you a Lose Quick!
Bend you all up like a Toothpick. Bitch, you cleaning tool sweep my shoes.. Broomstick (haha)

I like how you tie your verse to the last bar. However, the punch isnt working for me. Kinda lame, but I like the style of it. I use it from time to time myself. Just seems like you were building into something a bit harder...

His name slicka cuz he use ta slide down poles.
Yo remember that nigga? Coming to the stage.. A Blue eyed ho!

This is a personal as well, and kinda funny so it workes. I feel you could have done a little more with this though as well.

ha. Dude your nothing but an E-Thug... Cuzz? Just because you wear a blue bandana you aint Cripped Up! (his avatar)
See I'm Rippin Fags, Pushing Gats, moving weight with crunching abs that'll turn around and crunch his fag! (no homo!)

This is alot more jammed up than your last bars and knocks the flow off a bit for me. Another personal, yet not really hitting with the punch. TO EVERYONE ON THE SITE, THIS IS A PERFECT EXAMPLE OF HOW YOU CAN WIN THE PERSONAL CATAGORY AND NOT WIN THE PUNCHES CATAGORY!!!!.



Aight now, Ill even break it down for catagories because I want to see you all continue to get better. Improvment is everything.

Multi's- Slicka, flowed more smoothly, but he does audio, so its also more likely
Flow - Slicka, wouldve been a tie until that last bar of Lingo's verse threw it off.
Personals - Lingo, definitely came at his opponent more on the personal tip
Punches - Slicka, his were more consistant and better delivered IMO.
Wordplay - Slicka, dude had wordplay in ever fucking bar...


Over-all MVGT Slicka, but this was a nice battle and close in most catagories. I would like to see a round two in a couple months, just to see the progression and the activity. Good job on both parts. One.

1-0 me uppin appreciate the time murk

Ight nice fair with expo... I'll work on that... drop a few frees in the cypher section to get some practice.

KingLingo wrote:Ight nice fair with expo... I'll work on that... drop a few frees in the cypher section to get some practice.

Word. It will help fam. Thats what it's all about.

multies=slicka
flow=tie
personals=kinglingo
punches=slicka
wordplay=tie

im giving my vote to slicka. kings verse just didnt compare in most aspects in my eyes. and the toothpick line realy threw me off to begin with. keep elevating guys. nice battle.

Slick - very misdirect. barely any of your punches attacked or diss king. but your flow was there and you had okay multies. a very basic drop.

King - your flow was every where, your inner multies didnt connect with your wordplay our your ending multies. no direct punches to Slick either, and your flow was way off. Advice: NEVER EVER use (no homo) in your drops, thats plain homo and basic.

Overall: you both need to work on attacking your opp. with harder punches and wording your lines. a very meh battle, Slick had a little something to work with he gets the win. Vote: Slicka

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