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8 Bars

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Blind Verse/No flips.

-- Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:54 am --

Dude steppin to me? I know dude's buggin
When I saw his avy I thought.. Wait.. respusha cousin?

See i told him 8 bars cuz when i put him in my lyrical cell
He get "lightning speed" punches in my mythical hell

Vampires and Dragons.. Admire my Actions, just to show a nigga "Got Quicks"
He be Duckin in fashion and when these Fuckas be askin he like 'I aint heard of shit'

I mean really trick? You a silly bitch.. Slower than malassis.
Yeah your names Quix... but only time you got speed is when you lace weed but you still aint speedin past this..SPEEDTRAP!!

-- Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:25 pm --

12 hours already...

1 bar= 2 lines. U've only written 4 bars...

sorry fam, i'll just match your bar limit


you don't attract the dames ... cuz like dudes who don't get head, this fag is Lacking Brains
have you Grasp the pain, cuz you got more 'broken lines' than Highway Passing Lanes

this chumps insane to test Quix cuz i'm insane with Text bitch nigguh you a Lame at best!
one of the strangest heads ... so i'm a send out my goon squad to 'capture king' like a game of Chess

this bitch is Useless .... so sit back and watch Quix abuse-em
face it kid you ain't hard .. and couldn't 'dump on Q' taking a shit to music

stop playing hommie ... cuz you ain't tight, yous an Actor kid
we got a lot of weak bitches here .. but 'you seem to stand out' like 10 White dudes at hazzards crib

vote=quix

just had some stronger punches and flow was much better.

"this chumps insane to test Quix cuz i'm insane with Text bitch nigguh you a Lame at best!
one of the strangest heads ... so i'm a send out my goon squad to 'capture king' like a game of Chess" - game was over after that bar

vote = Quix

King, I would suggest working on more creative punches. Run a background check on your opps to get creative with the personals too. Also, try to aim your bars at your opps directly so no one can say you just dropped some "universal" (or pre-written) verse.

g/l man.

Quix had better name play, solid"er" punches, and flow was consistant. King, you were kind of all over the place. I did notice some nameplay, but they lacked in the punches department.

See i told him 8 bars cuz when i put him in my lyrical cell
He get "lightning speed" punches in my mythical hell

^ I probably like the name play referance with "lightning speed" here the most, but its rather weak in full punch.

this bitch is Useless .... so sit back and watch Quix abuse-em
face it kid you ain't hard .. and couldn't 'dump on Q' taking a shit to music

^ Not your best bar, but i liked the angle of it, original.

Vote goes to Quix

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