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12 lines = 6 bars
Due Sunday, Midnite.

Cheque!!!

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Due date changed upon Omni's request.

-- Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:11 am --

did you forget? lets drop tonite.

-- Tue Jan 04, 2011 6:40 pm --

he hadnt got back to me yet.. idk if this gonna happen..

It's happening...ill get to a pc tomorrow...I don't wanna drop it on my phone, it sucks

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when do u plan on dropping? i dont like wasting verse..

4 bars, fuck it...I'm dropping this quick then knocking out...didn't wanna leave this open too long...

eN Santana wrote:when do u plan on dropping? i dont like wasting verse..

Wether I drop or not, your verse is wasted, I bring around the hearse for your words, it's mayday
So it's death to ya raps cuz I'm deadly, it's fact…'bitch Imma kill you' lyrically and I surely aint 'shady'

'Belle' of the balls, you can take mine and swallow them whole, 'beast'ing’s my mission
You winning? You tweakin’...so I'm finna start beating this chick like middle eastern traditions

Ya gets no respect on Illest, so gtfo bitch or pull out the teats and feed us
Female dog, animal, eat you raw, cannibal, fuck a femcee…now watch me eat ya fetus

Ya rappin is weak, cunt…get stabbed with the meat, fucked a third time? Guess it's left up to me
This must be American Me, cuz...Santana fly? Only when getting tossed off a balcony*

*Movie=American Me, Santana is the boss of the Mexican Mafia. At the end he gets stabbed and thrown off a balcony. Everything else is easy.

I've voted on plenty battles before this battle was set up...
Rugged VS Cee4
Murk VS eN Santana
...and some more, if a vote is REALLY needed, I'll do it tomorrow. G/L Santana. One.

I'ma slaughter ya ugly ass, killing with iron blows that's attached to glacial leechers..
watch the ether bleach ya, then OMNI ya in the face....just to match ya facial features..
how you gonna let a bitch beat cha? when ya broke ass cant even pull hoes honey?..
tried to pimp a hooker...and ended up the one having to OMNI..
but whats funny, is that i peeped ya history and dude got killed by Murk's mob of bosses..
I lost too, but i had my loss close...and you're just close to losses..
ya dont spit ya lips glosses, cuz you're gay giglo with a makeup set generic..
so y hide ya cock suckin ways to measure up to niggas?.....when ever last one of em metric..


(I'm a knee/OMNI - Owe money/OMNI - met trick/metric)

Flow - eN (Omni some of yours had to many fillers in one bar)

Punches - Omni: "Ya gets no respect on Illest, so gtfo bitch or pull out the teats and feed us
Female dog, animal, eat you raw, cannibal, fuck a femcee…now watch me eat ya fetus"

Name/word Play - eN: "how you gonna let a bitch beat cha? when ya broke ass cant even pull hoes honey?..
tried to pimp a hooker...and ended up the one having to OMNI.." that was funny

Multies - Omni by a hair

Personals - eN by a hair with the Murk losses (i guess)

eN took 3/5 cats to Omni's 2/5 on my scoring card... eN takes this by a weave.

OMNI:

Wether I drop or not, your verse is wasted, I bring around the hearse for your words, it's mayday
So it's death to ya raps cuz I'm deadly, it's fact…'bitch Imma kill you' lyrically and I surely aint 'shady'

3/5 I was digging the flow here a lot. Wordplay and punch were ok but nothing spectacular.

'Belle' of the balls, you can take mine and swallow them whole, 'beast'ing’s my mission
You winning? You tweakin’...so I'm finna start beating this chick like middle eastern traditions

3/5 Again, sick rhyme scheme with a mediocre punch.

Ya gets no respect on Illest, so gtfo bitch or pull out the teats and feed us
Female dog, animal, eat you raw, cannibal, fuck a femcee…now watch me eat ya fetus

3/5 See the above comments.

Ya rappin is weak, cunt…get stabbed with the meat, fucked a third time? Guess it's left up to me
This must be American Me, cuz...Santana fly? Only when getting tossed off a balcony*

3/5 This is the only bar where I felt your flow fell off a little bit. Your punch finally got a little bit personal with the nameplay but still wasn't hitting too hard.


12/20 Not bad. Consistent, overall. Sick rhyme scheme for the most part. That was definitely the stand out category of this verse.



eN Santana:

I'ma slaughter ya ugly ass, killing with iron blows that's attached to glacial leechers..
watch the ether bleach ya, then OMNI ya in the face....just to match ya facial features..

2/5 Honestly, this hardly made sense. WTF is a glacial leecher? And also, what will match his facial features?

how you gonna let a bitch beat cha? when ya broke ass cant even pull hoes honey?..
tried to pimp a hooker...and ended up the one having to OMNI..

3/5 Kind of funny and was creative nameplay. Rhyme was weak, though.

but whats funny, is that i peeped ya history and dude got killed by Murk's mob of bosses..
I lost too, but i had my loss close...and you're just close to losses..

2/5 Not feeling it. Seems as much a personal against yourself as it is against Omni.

ya dont spit ya lips glosses, cuz you're gay giglo with a makeup set generic..
so y hide ya cock suckin ways to measure up to niggas?.....when ever last one of em metric..

3/5 This was a great punch wasted on a terrible set-up. It hardly qualifies as a rhyme, too.


10/20 Had some decent wordplay that was lost in shoddy set-ups and weak rhymes.



Overall, I have to give this to OMNI. His verse wasn't aimed at Santana too much but he made for it with some slick rhyming and at least decent punches. Santana was swinging and missing, IMO.

+1 OMNI

ph.d..

Multies en flow - en , came closest to multies wit dat facial features bar
punches - omni
metaphores- omni..
Consistency - omni was beta, but nun was reali consistent..
I wont giv santana nameplay coz omni and owe money dnt sound the same,all ur plays were forced dang..met trick was too simple ...tho il giv it 4 wordplay
...
Overall vote - omni
he came harder

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Omni leads en Santana 2-1 This battle needs votes

OMNI's verse

Wether I drop or not, your verse is wasted, I bring around the hearse for your words, it's mayday
So it's death to ya raps cuz I'm deadly, it's fact…'bitch Imma kill you' lyrically and I surely aint 'shady'

This was alright wordplay IMO. I like how you worked it in, but you didn't really come at her with the bar it seems. And the first line isn't really leading into your punch, doesn't have anything really directed at her, and doesn't tie into your wordplay on the second line at all.. Seems filler...

'Belle' of the balls, you can take mine and swallow them whole, 'beast'ing’s my mission
You winning? You tweakin’...so I'm finna start beating this chick like middle eastern traditions

See, the first line, albeit weak, has some wordplay going in it. I liked the punch, though I feel you could've came harder with the concept itself. This is more creative though.

Ya gets no respect on Illest, so gtfo bitch or pull out the teats and feed us
Female dog, animal, eat you raw, cannibal, fuck a femcee…now watch me eat ya fetus.

This is kinda cool. I liked the flow throughout this bar, how it was brought together. More of a graphic punch, which can be good to throw in your battles. Adds diversity.

Ya rappin is weak, cunt…get stabbed with the meat, fucked a third time? Guess it's left up to me
This must be American Me, cuz...Santana fly? Only when getting tossed off a balcony*

This is more of what I'm looking for. Your best bar throughout, no doubt, and it ties strictly toward her, some wordplay built in, and your first line was relevant. Nice closer.


Santana's verse

I'ma slaughter ya ugly ass, killing with iron blows that's attached to glacial leechers..
watch the ether bleach ya, then OMNI ya in the face....just to match ya facial features..

First line doesn't get it for me, but I liked the punch. Saying it, the wordplay can come clean with the right delivery. In text, maybe not so much. I haven't read anyone else's votes (I rarely do when voting), but I could see if someone wasn't feeling this. However, I liked the twist. It was a fresh nameflip.

how you gonna let a bitch beat cha? when ya broke ass cant even pull hoes honey?..
tried to pimp a hooker...and ended up the one having to OMNI..

Owe money... Lol I like the concept. Seems you could come harder with it though... Not as good as your first bar IMO.

but whats funny, is that i peeped ya history and dude got killed by Murk's mob of bosses..
I lost too, but i had my loss close...and you're just close to losses..

I appreciate the shout outs in both verses lol. This one comes more with it though, as he has lost to a couple peeps in the crew, and you make a point of that. You even point out that you have as well, yet you turn it on him nicely to close it out. This was good IMO.

ya dont spit ya lips glosses, cuz you're gay giglo with a makeup set generic..
so y hide ya cock suckin ways to measure up to niggas?.....when ever last one of em metric..

Eh, this could've been worded differently to connect better IMO. I see where you are going with it, but the whole dick sucking/fag concept/small dick shit could've been done better, especially from an actual female's angle, IMO.





At the end of this, I had to go back and check through stuff... Then decided I needed to break down the catagories...

Punches - Tie
Personals - Slight edge to Santana with more nameflips and direct personal lines
Flow- OMNI
Wordplay - Slight edge to Santana for more originality
Multi's - Eh, pretty much a tie on this one too...

MVGT - Santana for a more direct, creatively done verse.

Wether I drop or not, your verse is wasted, I bring around the hearse for your words, it's mayday
So it's death to ya raps cuz I'm deadly, it's fact…'bitch Imma kill you' lyrically and I surely aint 'shady'

weakkk.

'Belle' of the balls, you can take mine and swallow them whole, 'beast'ing’s my mission
You winning? You tweakin’...so I'm finna start beating this chick like middle eastern traditions

played.

Ya gets no respect on Illest, so gtfo bitch or pull out the teats and feed us
Female dog, animal, eat you raw, cannibal, fuck a femcee…now watch me eat ya fetus

no.

Ya rappin is weak, cunt…get stabbed with the meat, fucked a third time? Guess it's left up to me
This must be American Me, cuz...Santana fly? Only when getting tossed off a balcony*

poopy.






I'ma slaughter ya ugly ass, killing with iron blows that's attached to glacial leechers..
watch the ether bleach ya, then OMNI ya in the face....just to match ya facial features..

nerp.

how you gonna let a bitch beat cha? when ya broke ass cant even pull hoes honey?..
tried to pimp a hooker...and ended up the one having to OMNI..

barf.

but whats funny, is that i peeped ya history and dude got killed by Murk's mob of bosses..
I lost too, but i had my loss close...and you're just close to losses..

poop squirt. bad.

ya dont spit ya lips glosses, cuz you're gay giglo with a makeup set generic..
so y hide ya cock suckin ways to measure up to niggas?.....when ever last one of em metric..

burp. not great.




vote/ OMNI

Punches = Omni
Personals - eN Santana
Flow - eN Santana
Multies - Omni

Hottest bar
ya dont spit ya lips glosses, cuz you're gay giglo with a makeup set generic..
so y hide ya cock suckin ways to measure up to niggas?.....when ever last one of em metric..

Vote - eN Santana
Real close battle. Thot this coulda went either way really. Thot Omnis openin bar was really nice with the blend of multies and flow he packed in. Really enjoyed Ens closer. Either way, close one.

That makes the votes tied up at three on this one.