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http://soundcloud.com/lyrical1/traumatic

Posted it b4, not sure if I did wit this link. IDK if they gonna open right, lol.

the beat is way nice.. First off i noticed was your energy and all.. even with the low quality, you just jump off a track.. the hook is decent after hearing it a couple times it got kinda old.. i dont like the repeated "Its Traumatic" in the beginning of the verses... again you got a solid flow and can ride a beat.. nice drop

I like ur style man, killer flow here, matches up with the style of the beat well. I wasn't feelin the hook though, kinda annoying both lyrically and delivery style. But the verses were ill with some damn creative lyrics interspersed in there... Again, I'd say u have a helluva lot of talent, u just need some better recording equipment...

thx, i can call myself out in sayin that Im not the greatest wit the hooks. I kinda rush thru just to get to the verses. Ima definitely work on that. Thx for the feedback

Ite. . .Verse Starts Off Raw. As Usual, I'm Just Used To It From You Now. "slaps The Blackness Off Of Zebras" LMFAO! Nice. You Got Good Energy N Flow, This hook Seems Like, Idk, Cannibalistic? That's The Only Thing I Cud Describe It with. 2nd Verse Is Grimey. "Call Of Duty" Lol. You've Got Good Lyrics N Delivery. It Wasn't Forced This time. "Get Traumatic" Is Annoying. 3rd Verse Is Really Hurting My Ears Tho, Idk, It Just Seems More "clippy" Than The Rest Of The Song. Good Joint Tho

^preciate the props playa, good lookin out on the fdbk

ay dude very powerfull delivery, couldnt understand a few lines but cool song all in all.. i no its not ur beat but this beat edited a little with a bridge for a bit of a break wouldnt hurt. but i no its not urs so considerring that nice work.

good looks kause, thx for the feed