dr-krayzie Vs KingLingo (Doc wins KO)

[KingLingo]

Rules:
6 bars
48 hrs

I will post after dr-krayzie does

[dr-krayzie]

Bra spit first..il retaliate!

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[KingLingo]

Technically you challenged me so why the fuck would I spit first?

Also if i go first you get a chance at flipping my shit.. I'm smarter than that.

[dr-krayzie]

Ayo..my bars Keep my RHYME CLEAN..u got no TIMIN! and bro U too uptight hence u "cant go with the flow" lyk havin a FUCKED UP RHYME-SCHEME...
Against me?see this GUY ..SHREWED.. ..you RULE?DONT even TRY DUDE..coz King ur not of royalty..we only c him "call to order" when he WaNA BUY FOOD..Hoe my punches DEFINE DAMAGE!!.SEE When i take a FINE BANDAGE?..I Shut his mouth to kill lingo and 'let my body do the talking' lyk SIGN LANGUAGE...
I'll Rip off ur FUCKIN KIDNEYS..Ur family is a "circus"..and i include ur MOMMY IN THIS..coz I stand next to king and "Smell a rat"..and i aint talkin bout no FUNNY BUSINESS...fag ur not a "real king",but a LOYAL FUCK!..for you, we dont c a #win on the cards# even if u had a ROYAL FLUSH..

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[KingLingo]

So Ima take you back to my lb format... haha

Flashing dudes? Cause for GENITAL EMANCIPATION.. my bad he just fillin in the GENERAL POPULATION that for 19.99 you can see this FAG GO WILD!

Time to BAG THIS CHILD! He upset his PENIS was left SLEEVELESS as supposed CLEANESS and he blames it on "cold air" when he GET IT IN!

He BRAGS CONSTANTLY.. even tries to SAG CONCIOUSLY say its because he couldnt FIT IT IN knowing he got enough room ta FIT TWO HANDS!

Word of advise... You cant get "krayzie wit wordplay"... they just not the PERFECT MATCH!

Even if he had MAD LIBS, a pack of "MAT-CHES"... he will never spark interest in a verse...So he be my predicate but never a SUBJECT AT RAP!

-- Thu Dec 30, 2010 10:41 pm --

my verse is 8 bars... just used a 5/8 style of rhyming that made it 5 different sections. But my multis on point lol

[Kuhlerblynd]

Guys, please see this thread... http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/text- ... t3038.html

Honestly, its hard as fuck to find your flows when you write like this, and it will help the flow of your votes in your battles if you just read it. Im sure you will understand once you read it. Okay, now to the battle itself...

Im giving Krazyie my vote, and here's why... He brought some nice wordplay into his lines and delivered better overall on his punches. Lingo, I liked this scheme of your verse better than the other I saw, but you could still tweak it to hit you punchlines better. See link above. To both guys, Im glad you joined Illest, and I want to see you improve. Keep bringing the personality to the site! Its noticed. One.

[Slicka]

alright well it was hard to follow because of the structure...

I think Krayzie out did you just a little bit with the wordplay

punches- niether one hit really hard but i feel like krayzie dropped some just a little bit harder/

flow- couldn really follow either one

vote-Krayzie...........

keep droppin both of you........best of luck

[Kau the Lion]

Both of these verse were very weak. Krayzie gets it for at least attempting some wordplay.

+1 Krayzie

[Riggz]

vote - Doc.. this line here did it for me: " Shut his mouth to kill lingo and 'let my body do the talking' lyk SIGN LANGUAGE... "

As folks mentioned above (and I see King edited his rhyme structure) you guys could work on the basics that help us as the reader follow you better. Krazie you had nice word play which may play to some voters, but I thought you lacked in the punch area and when I initally viewed your verse it wasn't structured well enough for me to follow.

g/l to both though and keep at it.

[aLb]

4-0 Close and Update this Mods

[Kuhlerblynd]

Thread closed and records updated.

Doc Kraz wins via KO.