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1st Poem i Wrote Lol

Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 6:56 am
by Momeijah
Well its inspired By The Movie "a Clockwork Orange". Basically About The Human Race Will Not Be Like robots And Orders Are Never Gnna Be Followed. And About Temptation Of Revenge But How it Can Only Be a Temporary Satisfaction And Can Come Back 2 Haunt u in The Long Term. So Basically its Based On That Movie Lol.

"Satisfaction-And-Greed", Mix When it "Comes-To-a-Crossroads" ..//
"Hacking-Plants-At-The-Seed", When u Can "Run-From-The-Cost-So" ..//
"Knowing-Enemies-is-Vital", Wits Can "Change-a-Man's-Fate" ..//
"Throwing-Felonies-All-Night-Long", Turn To "Face-a-Blank-Page" ..//
"Paths-Are-Chosen".."Raps-And-Poems".."Lap-The-Moments".."While-it-Lasts" ..//
"Attack-The-Coldness".."Slap-The-Flows" Onto The "Pad-Of-Broken-Hopelessness" ..//
Anything Goes..in a World Thats "Known-To-Be-Under-Heaven" ..//
Making The Most Of Little Resources "So-To-See-Thunder-Tellin" ..//
That Control Remains Above Us..We're All idle "Until-We-Make-it" ..//
"Choosing Directions".."Losing-Thy-Blessings".."it's-Apparent-Death-is-Facing-Us" ..//
"Lose-My-Complexion"..But Remaining "This-a-Far-And-Vengeful-Place-We-Must" ..//
Work Hardest To Stay Even With God..My Point is "We're-Dealt-The-Same-Hands" ..//
Some Decide The Way To Go is Health..Others "Are-Meant-To-Stay-Bad" ..//
The World Will Never Be What We Make Of it, Face it People Are "Not-Domestic" ..//
We'll "Talk-The-Best-Shit"..Over Years, While Others Will "Rot-in-Cells-Sick" ..//
The Opportunity Was Given And improving From "Scratch-is-Vital" ..//
Situations Arise For individuals But Try To Out "Match-Your-Rivals" ..//
Revenge is Sweet, Satisfying, But it Can "Cost-You-Over-Time" ..//
Take The High Road, And Beat Them Over Time, And Sleep in a "Coffin-Old-n-Fine" ..//

Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 7:24 am
by Onediversekid
Dope poem Man!

Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 7:27 am
by Lawgix
not bad....

Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 2:49 am
by -TraMaTiK-
o0o0o Domino NIce Man feelin it keep at it homie --1--

Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 6:29 pm
by complexity
I liked it as well.

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 1:27 am
by Invincible
Nice.

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 10:55 am
by drunken jesus
good shit looked more like a rap verse than a poem though

ill rhyme scheme

Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 9:40 am
by TwIzTiD
word

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 12:42 pm
by Momeijah
i Don't Remember Writing This Shit, Pretty Good Though i Could Redo it a Lot Better Now.

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 12:51 pm
by Dead Silence
then do it!lol

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 1:42 pm
by Momeijah
No im Too Lazy Plus i Think im Gnna Quit Rapping it Bores Me Unless im Dissing/Battling Someone.

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 1:44 pm
by Dead Silence
then go after sum1 like that jack-off kid lol

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 1:54 pm
by Momeijah
Lazy? i Just Signed Up For Guitar Lessons Today So That is My New Hobby.

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 4:38 am
by Dead Silence
haha nicce