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what have i done
Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 7:29 am
by Slicka
tryna do into some more depth
Re: what have i done
Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 11:23 am
by Deciple
This is my favorite track that you have introduced... Im way feeling this..
Good lyrics, great emotion and presences.. delivery is nice.. over all way good man.. only think i could say i want alot fond of is the hook.. imma give this a 8/10 track.. keep it up man
Re: what have i done
Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 4:33 pm
by Slicka
thanx fam appreciate it
Re: what have i done
Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 1:49 pm
by 2xS
Lol "slicka man". . .Sounds Like A Super Hero. YAAAAAA Quality Is Crisp, Best You've Done So Far. Delivery Is Good Until The Part After "I'm Only Human" After That I Feel You Fell Off Bad. Chorus Seems Really Forced, Except The "Love kinds Sucks" Part. That Shit Was Nice, But The Rest Sounded Ehhh. You Should Count Syllables And Try To Rehearse Riding The Beat Before You Record, That'll Help You Out Alot. "Get Tha Fuck Out My Crib" LMAO! Funny. AGAIN WITH THE ABRUPT ENDINGS MAN!!! Dude. . .Let The Beat Ride For Like 10 Seconds, And Gradually Fade It Out!!! That'll Make You Tracks End So Much Better!!! Decent Listen Tho