Hip Hop Forum

alright so heres the collab slicka chorus and v1 punk drunk v2 and BlOKB made the beat.......my verse i couldn change or i would of panned it like i did the chorus

you guyz are dope. this beat sucks. hahahhaaa. na great job guys. riiiiiiippppp iiittttt...

haha, PDA (punchd drunk) <-- word son.

Ok, the chorus is kew, good panning, but the volume might be too high in comparison to the beat. "like MLK, i was born to have a dream" <-- pretty dope. Your verse does sound a lil, "unmixed" for the lack of a better word. Second verse is too low compared to the rest of the song. I have to turn my speakers ups. His content sucked lol. Last part of the verse on him seemed forced. Slicka; pretty dope man. Its been fun. Better planning next time lol.

Song was a good drop for a first. The topic wasnt my strong suite, so maybe next track we'll tread into some depth.

(out of curiosity, you misspelt my name on purpose? maybe foreshadowing the next topic?)

Ite, I Like Tha Hook. Panning/Quality On It Is Decent. Seems Heavier On The Left Than It Does On Tha Right Thru My Monitors Tho. First Verse Was Decent. Nothin Too OMG Lyrical, But It Still WAs Good. On Topic, And Better Flow. The Verse Support Vocals Seems To Clash With The Lead Vocals At Times. That Can Be Fixed By Rehearsal And Making Your Vocals Match As Close As Possible. 2nd Hook Came In Forced, And Seems Slightly Faster Than It Should Be. 2nd Verse, Came In Nice, Like The Delivery. You Didn't Seem Low To Me, But Everyone Has Different Speakers To Listen Thru. I Also Felt You Were Off Topic For The Most Part, Idk, Armageddon Talk In A "Block Boy" Song Just Doesn't Fit The Bill For Me LOL. That Whole "ER" Thing You Did Kinda Got Old/Annoying Really Fast Lol Mainly Cuz At Times It Felt Like You Were Stretching The Flow And Just Filling In "ER" Words. Again, 3rd Hook Comes In Forced. I'm Sure It's Cuz Of The First Few Words "We Da Illest At This Shit, Illest To Ever Spit". Maybe Cuz U Tried To Speed Those Words Up. Blok, U Did A Decent Beat, Simple, But Catchy. It's A Learning Process, And You Gain Knowledge Through Experience. You're At A Good Start Tho, Cuz The Beat Seem Balanced To Me. In Due Time You'll Be Producin Industry Grade Beats . Overall Decent Listen, Just A Couple Things That Made The Track Sound Rough Around The Edges.

oh nah punch i ain mean spell it like that thats a typo lmao my fault

its cool to see illest artist collab...
the beat is plain.. not really my taste of hip hop beat..
the lyrics are pretty sick.. mixing could be better... presences needs something.. little fall offs on both verses.. but not to bad.. good stuff guys

like how you keep it home base on some real shit. Smooth drop.