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Already posted but I wanted to see if this sounded a lil better

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This is what im talking about.. the speed rap is way nice.. you did it real nice.. if the quality was better this track would be almost flawless.. some parts like you got short of breath or something cuz you kinda slurd some of your words.. but its def my fav from you that i have heard...
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i feel u, I typically dont flow quick, but i gave it a shot on this beat. Ima take care of that quality shit for sure wit my future tracks.

Good looks on that soundcloud homie
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Yeah, Beat Sounds Heavily Distorted Bro Lol. Sounds Do Tha Vocals, But You Know About The Quality. Fast Flow Is Nice, You Do A Good Delivery And Really Have Nice Pronunciation. Many Multi's In There, Fuckin Nice. Damn! Yo I'm Rockin My Head Bak N Forth Following Your Flow. It's Bouncy But Smooth! I'm Fuckin With That!!! Yo, Ur Multiz Are Deff On Point. I Think If You Had Better Quality, You'd Be A Force On This Site. Idk Bout The 1,2,3 Fire "Hook". . .Kinda Ehhh. . .Overall Tho Man, You Sed Sum Throwed Ass Shit. It Was So Fast I Couldn't Really Quote Anything Lol, Good Shit Tho Man. Jus Up That Quality And You'll Be Strait
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thx for the fdbk 2xS, much appreciated
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