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I assure this poor whore/ That he will not adore/ My rhymes anymore/ after I hit him with 44 jabs to the core/ I gotta bomb ready to deplore/ Got you washed up like rocks on the seashore/ Got writtins and verbs that you can't understand or even heard before/ Fuck it i'll leave you with a chance while your stuck in a demons trance/ Like cyclopsis I freeze you at first glance/ Quix i'm throwing bombs your throwing stones N sticks/ Like a transvestite you need a fix/ My flow is supercalifragilistic like Mike J Fox my flow is futuristic/ Like a man with no tounge your lyrics got no taste your shits garbage a fucking waste/ Real shit right here no copy N paste/

spit punches till Dapoets a ghost-kid; and you may be new here but i'm still Hateing this fake queer
your the targat. and the scope will show it before i 'smoke a poet' like Blazing with shakespear
I'm Breaking his Face here; welcome to illest ... where we hold Ruges and scope-hoes
this Dudes a joke, Go away nigguh cuz the 'only wins you'll get here' will be Due to No-Shows
yous a nurserry rhymer, while i Creep and shot Groupies; fuck this chump, i can't Believe he talked to me
cuz i'm a embarras this fag ... and really show you a 'Dead poets society' like Ethen HAwk Movies (movie: Dead Poets Society, Starring Robin Willimas and Ethen HAwk)


should be good enough ... but try to be a bit more direct with your punches and less basic. keep at Poet

yeah i would have to give this to quix just because he had some actual punches in there. that last line was killer.


gotta give it to poet for stepping up. just try using a better rhyme structure and try using some wordplay or some name flips in there. you came a little too basic. just peep some other battles and get the feel of things.

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DaPoet, i take it you're new to this so I would suggest going to this link here : http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/text- ... t3038.html to learn a little more about text battling. You're lacking in several major areas of battling including rhyme structure, punchlines, name play, and personals. As for now, I can say you've been handed an L by one of the most battling textcee's here.

Nice bar here Quix - "yous a nurserry rhymer, while i Creep and shot Groupies; fuck this chump, i can't Believe he talked to me
cuz i'm a embarras this fag ... and really show you a 'Dead poets society' like Ethen HAwk Movies" -

vote = Q

DaPoet
You were a little hard to follw, structure wise for a battle. The rhymes you chose were different, like adore, seashore. All your bars were general, nothing really direct towards Quix. As for the futuristic bar, i dont get it. Heres a definition i found for supercalifragilistic

–adjective
(used as a nonsense word by children to express approval or to represent the longest word in English.)

So i dont know if you have a different definition for it, or you were just plugging words, but it lost me.
Quix
Not the best ive read from you, but good enough. Dead poet society line was good. The double rhyming was on que, so good job with that. Not much else i could say when i know you didnt try much.

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3-0 Quix

thanks for voting

cuz i'm a embarras this fag ... and really show you a 'Dead poets society' like Ethen HAwk Movies (movie: Dead Poets Society, Starring Robin Willimas and Ethen HAwk)


^ punch seald the battle....punches =quix with a landslide.....also structure and flow was better.....dapoet keep improving......

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