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Everlasting enigmatic steady currents dropping deadly on the earth cursed by the magic
laughing as the sand from the clock drops Eternally,guap got knowledge like the kids in fraternities

centuries i been devouring,weak-minded cowards,couldnt come clean on the track if they showered
sours what i taste when i listen,im so high i got 9 lifes just like my kitten,

in the ocean,submarine king,aqualung 2 foot bong cause i aint no square or a octagon
decepticons in a minute-man,robotic psychotics so much chronic i burn more then them pentagrams

Any Land i roam it,stoned,no boundaries,all trophies,never scared of the rain because i own it
constantly demolishing opponents,any moment,going to war continuously like the Romans

flows drop till every vicinities flooded,last time i seen beef was at burger-king so i hold No-Grudges,
mentality is realer than reality,the actuality is deep like dungeons

wondering,if anyones got the message yet,not stressing but blessing
stretching the truth to any of you,who turn raps into a Fucked-Up-Threat

guess whos next?that one cool VET,that never went insane or schizo
verses far from plain or retro,more futuristic than G5 plane or techno.

upping for some feedback

mmmmm you structure your bars good but shit was borin to me i dont do the text thing i hate reading i cant really tell flow when i read someone elses stuff so i say its a good start but what do i know im an audio head

thanks for the feedback gangstah, upping for more feedback