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Did This With My New Studio Setup!! Still Getting Used To It, So Any Input Towards Helping Would Be Greatly Appreciated!!!!

Lyrics:
Hook 1 @ :27]
Don’t Nobody Really Know Me N I Think It’s Just A Shame
So I’ll Take A Moment Here Just To Tell You All My Name
2xS
It Stands For South Side, That’s Everything I Rep
2xS
It Stands For South Side, I’ll Rep It Til My Death


[Verse 1 @ :41]
This Is Not An Introduction. . .This Tha First Impression
My First Confession, Just So I Cud Teach The Earth A Lesson
2xS, I Flipped Around
Hit Tha Ground Then Switched The Sound
Back On The Grind, No Sittin Down
Got Everyone Hot Wit Tha Friction Now
Wen I Spit A Noun, U Know Its Game
Adjectives, They Flow The Same
Metaphors? They Showed The Brain
Like Brittney Spears And Go Insane
Hold Up Mayne, Swap It Back
Let Me Loose To Hop The Track
Lace It Wit These Vocals Quick And Holla Back Ta Swallow That
I Gotta Rap, Gotta Flow, Gotta Make It Audible
This Is Something Real That These World Peers Have Got Ta Know
I’ll Always Keep It Humble (Yes), But Always Bring The Trouble (Yes)
Always Keep It Real, I’ma Always Keep It 2xS


[Hook 2 @ 1:23]
Don’t Nobody Really Know Me N I Think It’s Just A Shame
So I’ll Take A Moment Here Just To Tell You All My Name
2xS
It Stands For South Side, That’s Everything I Rep
2xS
It Stands For South Side, I’ll Rep It Til My Death
This Music Is My Message, Listen To It Loud
Resonate It Deeply As Ur Screaming With Tha Crowd
2xS
It Stands For South Side, That’s Everything He Reps
2xS
It Stands For South Side, He’ll Rep It Til His Death


[Verse 2 @ 1:49]
This Tha Rebirth Of A Reject, Reopened And Reintroduced
The Reason For Redemption, Read, Remixed , And Reproduced
Somebody Speed The Song Soon, The Sound Is Sorda Slow
So I Shouted, Started Screaming, Saying “South Is Gonna Show”
Take That Tempo, Treat It Tenderly, Then Tear It Til It’s Taught
By Things That Travel Tentively, I’m Talking Bout My Thoughts
Usually Unorthodox, Underrated, Undefined
The Universe‘s Underdog Jus Because I’m Undermined
And I Ain’t Really Worried Bout Temptations Cuz They Hurt Chu
I Sit Back N Wait My Turn, See, Patience Is A Virtue
This Music Is A Process, These Verses Are Just Kilobytes
Each Page I Made Is History, Sumthing Like The Bill Of Rights
Feel The Lights, Take The Stage, Steal The Mic And Break The Gaze
Make My Voice Heard Just So Everyone Can Shake The Rage
I’ll Always Keep It Humble (Yes), But Always Bring The Trouble (Yes)
Always Keep It Real, I’ma Always Keep It 2xS



A lot Of People Ask Who Am I?
I’m A Person With A Dream
A Person Who Came Into This Game Not Wanting Fame
Not Wanting Money
But As Someone Wanting To Earn Respect
Wanting To Have His Voice Heard.
And If U Listening To This Message Rite Now
I Wanna Say Thank You For Listening.
I Wanna Say Thank You For Helping Me Achieve My Dream. . .
I Just Wanna Say Thank You. . .


[Last Hook]
It’s Time To Make A Breakthrough, Rip Into This Game
And When I Get Into It People Gonna Know My Name. .
2xS
Ayo That’s South Side, He Made It From The Start
2xS
Ayo That’s South Side, He Does It From The Heart
I Give This Music Everything, Blood, Sweat And Tears
And All I Ask For Payment Is That Anybody Hears
2xS
Ayo That’s South Side, He Says It How He Feels
2xS
Ayo That’s South Side, He Says It Cuz It’s Real

Good energy and flow and beat was on point. Good drop.

second verse definitley outshines the first verse u might wanna rewrite that make ya bars longer and add more meta punchlines other than that hook was dope nice track aint rlly liking the beat but w/e stay up sonne

Energy is dope, second verse is ill, but i like the 1st one too. Your vocals seem too echo ish. Booth it up, or something, just sounds like a full beat but spread vocals, maybe turning them up would help? Dont really know the terminology of what im trying to explain, but its just really acoustic. Dope none the less man, nice to finally hear your voice.

@ Lyrical1. . .Thanks For The Feed Bro

@ Killah. . .Good Looks, And I Guess I Could Lengthen The Bars Up, But I Wanted To Approach Wit A Short N Fast Flow Just To Change The Delivery Up. We'll See What Happens With Future Experiments. Thanks For The Feed Though!

@ AMH. . .Yeah, I Don't Have A Booth Or Anything. Check Your PMs. Maybe It Was The Way I Recorded It? Cuz I Did 3 Layers Per Verse. One Was The Lead, The Others Were Supporters That Were Panned Left And Right. Then I Turned The Lead Vocals Up, And The Supporters Down. I Don't Know A Lot Of recording Techniques, So If You Can Help Me Out On Learning Different Styles And Which Effects Would Give Me A Clear Sound, That Would Be GREATLY Appreciated. The Only Thing I Really Use Is Compression, And The Occasional Delay.

@ Yezzir. . .Thanks For Feeding Bro. And Yeah, The Southern Influence Is There. I Try To Keep It Balanced Cuz I Don't Wanna Be Compared To Sum Of The Things That Are Coming Out The South At The Moment, But I Want People To Know That That's Who I Am At Tha Same Time. And I DEFF Agree With You About Feeling Yourself (No Homo) Lol. I Make It A Point To Always Have Energy And Delivery On Each Track I Make. I'm My Own Worst Critic, So If I Feel My Energy Is Lacking, I'll Scrap It And Redo It Til The Energy Is Correct. Even If That Means Downing 3 Red Bulls Simultaneously To Achieve That Energy. LMAO, Thanks For The Feed Tho!

this shit was hot as man, although i aint been feeding i have been listening to all your drops man they some good shit, i like your attitude and hype on this track you really delivered well man, the hook was some good shit, the verse were wrote well to get with the flow, packed the mutlies and the emotion and delivery were great, dope drop man i'll keep bumping this no doubt

Soon as I heard the beat I was like no... lol
But you Def brought Heat N did the beat justice,
Good presence, Delivery on point, Written cool..
Actually Liked your 1st verse more then the second
but thats me... Either way this was a Good track

Keep dropping

This is a sick track man.. the beat was perfect for ho you brought it... you worked well with this beat.. the 1st verse was nice and you delivered it nicely.. the 2nd verse was so sick

This Tha Rebirth Of A Reject, Reopened And Reintroduced
The Reason For Redemption, Read, Remixed , And Reproduced
Somebody Speed The Song Soon, The Sound Is Sorda Slow
So I Shouted, Started Screaming, Saying “South Is Gonna Show”
Take That Tempo, Treat It Tenderly, Then Tear It Til It’s Taught
By Things That Travel Tentively, I’m Talking Bout My Thoughts
Usually Unorthodox, Underrated, Undefined
The Universe‘s Underdog Jus Because I’m Undermined

This was so sick how you wrote this man.. Mad props.. keep it up man

Hell yeah! This is fire! This is the best track I've heard from you, one I'll definitely be listening to many times. I'd agree that the 2nd verse is the highlight, but from beginning to the end it's dope. Glad to see you got your audio set up now. When you get a chance to record our collab track PM it my direction and I'll get my shit recorded along with it.
Damn this is a stellar track.

@ Mutual. . .Good Looks On Tha Feed! Glad Ta Know You've Peeped All Ma Previous Tracks. Best Believe There's More Coming. I'm Loving This Board, And For The Couple Of Months I Been Here, I've Already Seen Development. Looking Forward To Makin More For U Ta Bump Too!

@ Haz. . .Thanks For Feedin Bro. I Hear You On The Beat, And We Discussed That Already! Everyone Has Different Tastes, So No Biggie! Glad Ta Know You Still Enjoyed It Tho.

@ Deciple. . .Thanks For Noticing The "RSTU" Word Scheme I Did In The Second Verse!!! That Was My Favorite Part, And While Writing The Song,It Was Originally Going To Be The First Verse, But I Decided People Would Get Bored Hearing The Same Delivery, So I Made The First Verse A Mix Of Slow/Fast Paced Flow. Thank You For Listening Too Man!

@ Intrinsic. . .Damn, You Must've REALLY Loved This Song LOL. Shit, Reading Feed Like That Makes Me Amped Up. Good Looks For Listening! And As For Our Track, I Started Laying Down The Vocals Yesterday. Still A Work In Progress As I Just Discovered A Slew Of New Effects To Clear Up My Vocals! (I Even Applied Them To This Song And Made It Sound Much Clearer!!) I'll Hit You Up Soon

yeah man this was pretty sick... u could feel the energy in the track... lyrics were pretty dope too... i would turn the beat down a notch cuz the beat over powers the vocals... and i don't hear an delay on it... might have put a subtle one on but i didn't listen to it close enough... but thats the only thing thats a bit of a issue with it is that the beats over powering you which is VERY BAD!!!! u want things to be equal... cuz if somebody listens to it on a system it might sound like shit... if their system doesn't sound like shit haha.... but yeah man i could feel the energy and where you were goin... dope concept bruh... keep droppin man u got some nice talent...

@ Lawgix. . .Good Looks On The Feed Man, And There Wasn't A Delay In My Vocals On This Track. When I Mentioned That To Intrinsic, I Was Basically Saying I Use Delay Effects On Vocals, But I Didn't Mean Necessarily THIS Track Lol. Ma Bad, Shuda Been More Specific. As For The Beat Being Loud, It Sounded Balanced Through My Reference Monitors. I'll Listen More Attentively Inna Few Minutes When I Go Back Into The File. Besides, I Already Cleaned It Up From What It Sounded Like By Removing Some Effects And Adding New Ones. I Did Some EQ Tweaks, And Dynamic Tweaks And Now It's More Clear. But Yeah Man, Good Catch On The Beat Being Too High. I'll Adjust That As Need Be.

@ Sequence. . .Thanks For Listening, And I'm Happy I Impressed

This Tha Rebirth Of A Reject, Reopened And Reintroduced
The Reason For Redemption, Read, Remixed , And Reproduced
Somebody Speed The Song Soon, The Sound Is Sorda Slow
So I Shouted, Started Screaming, Saying “South Is Gonna Show”
Take That Tempo, Treat It Tenderly, Then Tear It Til It’s Taught
By Things That Travel Tentively, I’m Talking Bout My Thoughts
Usually Unorthodox, Underrated, Undefined

Fucking sick as hell right here.

Most of the time when someone talks on a track, like you did towards the end, I dont care for it. But you brought a good message, and it picked up nicely back into your hook at the end. I liked the verses. Would like to see more of the Britney Spears lines and stuff, should had me laughing. You had a solid flow throughout, the beat was tight, and you definitely have put up a solid track here man. Keep doing you and dropping new shit! One!

yo i liked this shit fam the energy on this shits crazy.....liked the hook 2 look forward to hearin more of ya work