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alright so im trying to break away from my simple (this sounds good so im done with it) style and get more indepth while still keeping an abstract feel. i think i may have hit it. but it still sounds too simple to me. Any ideas? thanx.

When a verse is layed I think you should think about adding more to the beat like something clashing and shit so it sounds like the beats rising...cuz so far as a rapper I would attack this beat with momentum..then SNAP sumwhere n enter SPAZMODE converting from punchlies n wicked multies to HAYMAKERS

thanx man. u wanna do it? id love to hear an emcee besides myself on my track since i hate my recorded voice for some reason. lemme know dude. ill send you the beat if you wanna write and record a verse or two for it. id be honored.

Im down check ya pms if theres any others I got a team of emcees with diverse styles and Im very diverse anyways I strike all sujects for the most part

Alright man, I can feel this. The beat is smooth, easy to ride with. I think the addition of some low/deep piano keys would be killer, especially in that spot where the first verse'd fit. But I liked this a lot, nice energy to it.

hell ya dude im glad your feelin it. i feel like ive been trying to come into my own for a while now and im hoping on on the right track, it feels right thats for sure. thanx for listening bruh.

yeah like cadence said this could really use some piano some shit around the bassline + some upper chords in sections, basslines ill in this, synths have good patterns but i don't like the sounds they're too thin i'd use a different synth possibly an octave down maybe, i'd also consider adding some strings to this or possibly an organ cuz just with the low bassline & high synths theres nothing in the middle besides the drums & it sounds kinda empty, its pretty well done it just needs more added to it to finish it up

thanks for takin the time to listen jesus. much love.