Hip Hop Forum

can you replicate the noise blok makes?
if i say it once..... will you rock it eight?
while life works on great i confiscate my fate
forcing me to rake the leafs of branches that i break
im always late
arriving covered in a tempermental haze
segregating clears from greys in ways i cant explain today
youd say the same if you heard a track from Float or Labor Days
they changed my brain and might help you explain your name or game

Short... maybe putting in a cypher woud be better. Anyhow, your lyrical abilities are developing nicely. Although it seems like you made it short because you focused on the main rhyme and stoped once you ran out. Throw some crossovers in there and u'll be set. If it was longer, it might be a good read, but something this shorts more of a tease lol.

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honestly bro i hadnt posted in a few days, it was right before bed and i wanted to drop somethin, but your indeed correct at the same time cause if it kept goin in my head ida dropped more. thanx for reading and sorry for teasing. lol