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A little sumthin I did as a collab with a friend of mine's

Thomahawk
Gen (Me)

I summon the undertaker .....thats come to scrape up mother nature/
so push the buttons on the elevator/
she had her fuckin wrists slit thick wit devils razor/
so push the number 666 as hell awaits ya/
Im kinda twisted, im on a plot for vengeance/
like a rugrat ill do the deed and call up Dr. Lipshitz/
Apocolyptic............inventions by steward the toddler infant/
who hardly knows his father figure/
you rot in stiches, you can call me the orthopedic/
enforce the meaning of pain inside this torture sequence/
endorse the freak and the sane, the swine the whores and weaklings/
extort ya knees and ya brain, divide ya corpse and eat it/
Morbid Freak Shit!!!....ima stark raving madness/
leave you n bloody linen like im Mark David Chapman/
Hate wit a passion, ill take this sharp blade and slash ya/
Im rippin ya heart out in a R Rated Fashion/


With sharp razors I'm slashin fags with a passion plus bashin ya skull...
then snatchin Norman's spade to shovel dirt on ya casket below.... 1*
I put the ASS in the HOLE!!!...savage, cold, gashin souls...
abracadabra my foes.....dog we stay fly like gravity's broke...
I force a YES if you hit my ass with a NO...
irritate you until you sign us/SINUS, like I was scratchin the back of ya nose!!!
(Pause) savor ya last vestige of air, cause I'm pyroclastic with flows...
scorchin the lungs of these guys in Dracula mode...(f***in biters)
you're barely faster than slow....calm down...with ya feminine psalms clown....
we're bound to blow like volatile chemical compounds....
savage, fanatical, rabid, factual....
smashin ya clavicle bone with radical tactics, faggot I'm masterful...
we crush wives and massacre daughters...
........then kick back with a smirk, cmon now...we put the LAUGHTER in SLAUGHTER!!!
........I can look in ya eyes, and see that you're whack...
no hesitation, cause we kill on sight....read and react!!!

Hook-
Hang you up ten feet in the air, leaving you there...
so people can stare and grieve in dispair...
the reaper is here to teach you the meaning of fear...
and creep in the lair, preachin that there's no evil compared...

We beastin these queers, fry dikes and kick liars...
we bleed bleach from our ears, cry ice and spit fire...
I went to hell, ICED Lucifer then took his seat on the chair...
to show you faggots there's no evil compared...

1* Alfred Hitchcock's Psycho: Norman Bates hits "Mother" over the head with a shovel and kills her

Yo man, your writtends are fire... I was going to quote piece by piece but as soon as i read this line: "then kick back with a smirk, cmon now...we put the LAUGHTER in SLAUGHTER!!!", i was in fucking Awe. Im not savvy to if someones ever said it, or wrote it, so its first to my eyes, and its fucking good. Id like to hear the audio?

Thanx man, I'm glad you liked this piece. That line you quote is in my Top 10 best lines I've written. It's nice when you can write something that you haven't heard of before. It's one of the lines I've written where I can say the wordplay is original.

I can't put it on audio until I figure out how to loop the beat I wrote it to because the instrumental is too short. I may just spit my verse with the hook, the beat is long enough for me to pull that off. Hopefully I can get an audio of this up for ya man, thanx for the feed.

Gen, why don't u send me the beat, and ill take my best crack at it to loop it... if I can't well, then I can't. Lol. I guess a good question would be, why can't u just import, copy and duplicate to desired legnth?

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^^^Because I'm too lazy to do simple s*** like that lol but yea, I'll send it to you.

-- Tue Dec 14, 2010 5:15 pm --

Centillion wrote:Yeah that shit is fun, I got shit like "the the E.N.D. in friend - or - The R.E.M. in dream (rapid eye movement). This was pretty sick, had decent multi's and flow, I have a rug rat line sitting here like "only time you'll hear 'Rug-rat' in on Nickelodeon". The format at the end went complete audio, the abracadaba wasn't too good though, one of those words where you need the perfect line to not sound corny. Good drop.

^^^Thanks for the feedback.