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24 lines//12 Bars

24hours after Jacks Check

Check...

Jacks Back & Damn Imma open up on you son...

Looky...

It's a fact I'm nice on purpose, Call it ProJack cos when I rap ya twice as nervous
Mad at life? Ya worthless, So fuck this K Bull, like havin' Satellite Service

You tha last that I'm concerned wit, ya garbage so who the hell is for him?
I'll ring ya bells like Mormens, so understand I Son Killah like a Male Abortion

Killah gettin' swelled like foreskin, this battle anotha motion in sequence
So bring ya folks for the meetin', I'd be on both sides of K MEN like the Oceans & Beaches

Juss focus on breahtin', damn ya constant bitchin, obviously ya hands not for liftin'
Coz we see ya punches and understand that K Dense like a band compeition

C'mon fam, you can stop ya wishin', 17 wins and you all proud of these?
He made a promise to yall to pound a beast, but like his name shows, it’s juss small vowells to me!

Ya style sounds diseased, I seen you sucked when I heard you rhyme
And why’s this nigga bringin’ the 80’s back when he can’t keep up with the current time????

So pay attention, you’ve been played and finished, a defeated mess I take it
I believe ya text is basic, so no wonder I'm schoolin K Thru 12 like a completed education

Jacks the meanest head your facin’, this niggas pitiful and see this.
Battle you today, but I guarantee by Knight imma Silence K like the Principles of English

Cover up, like ya genitals & penis, a no name is this thug faggots best win
Im tough practice wit text kidd, & require no help to Pain Killah like drug addicts wit connections

Jack’s above average has left him, I can’t believe this dude has got so stupid
IYa views are not the smoothest, I’d make a case for Killah but would rather leave it to the prosecution

Ya seen and knew my drops was ruthless, death comes before this mans face
The Ghetto? He needs to let go of the Urban Talk like the Florida fan base

Go ahead and record ya damn tapes and any other shit blessed in a flow
Anything you spit, I bet it was wrote, cos the only time Killah go off the dome is the pic next to ya post!

Time to take this shit back...

ANTIMATTER OWNT YOU
JACK= SLANG for ROB, NOTHING, OR JERKOFF, or Jack Daniels liquor
YOU HO SHOW OR ONLY BATTLE NEWBS OR HASBEENS
IM SHOCKED YOU CALLED ME OUT




KiLLaH steps up to the plate does JDR have what it takes to K KiLLaH?....Hell fucking No!!


Dis "cake walk" is getting "grandslammed" wit "eyes battered"
I'm "PRO MASSacre" smacking ya worst than ANTI MATTER!!....

^^woah the wordplay on that one is out the park bob
haha....

Ima crack ya stature!!.... n get famed as Im ripping thru ya frame
"J"acking ya "D"ick "R"iders & INITIALS TO YA NAME!!!
Abuse it n switch it up I'll even flip it to a dames
Like watch me CHAN(t) JACKIE when Im KICKiNG IN YA BRAIN!!
Ima "waste jack" pissing liquor in the drain
Then black like a race track when I hit em with a train!!
Ya named after a KiLLaH, so I'll sonne ya get my AIM?
JR i gotchu ON LOCK like da MISSILES ON A PLANE!!
Im DERRANGED!!... but Ima find out WHOSE SANE// HUESSAINE
When I drag you out ya hole, n then show ya how to hang!!
Pitbull off da chains rippin RIPPA in my fangs
TAXING PUNCHLINE KINGS!!JACK DA RIPPA FOR HIS CLAIMS!!
Dropped How to rob the illest twice too scared ta list my name
Cuz iM Hotta then global warming n i'll strip em of his REIGN!!
Jack son leave jack offed like the greatest whoever sang
Jackofff couldn't off jack gun grippin on his WANG!!
I got a doube barrel body on da shoddy that I aim
Jacks a fighter? *CLICK CLICK* Ima show him how ta *BANG*
I mean he ran from scott james , He's only besting the newbs
K's KiLLaH leave JACK KNIFED liked da WRESTLING MOVE
So get the fuck up out my area "dawg i'll sonne" the inferior
BURY YA "JR NAPPIN" like Jacking Jack Russel terriers...

haha R>I>P RIPPA

Hot battle fellas. Very entertaining…
I’m giving the punches & personals to Jack for these:
It's a fact I'm nice on purpose, Call it ProJack cos when I rap ya twice as nervous
Mad at life? Ya worthless, So fuck this K Bull, like havin' Satellite Service

C'mon fam, you can stop ya wishin', 17 wins and you all proud of these?
He made a promise to yall to pound a beast, but like his name shows, it’s juss small vowells to me!

Ya style sounds diseased, I seen you sucked when I heard you rhyme
And why’s this nigga bringin’ the 80’s back when he can’t keep up with the current time????

So pay attention, you’ve been played and finished, a defeated mess I take it
I believe ya text is basic, so no wonder I'm schoolin K Thru 12 like a completed education

Ya seen and knew my drops was ruthless, death comes before this mans face
The Ghetto? He needs to let go of the Urban Talk like the Florida fan base

Multies and flow go to K for these:
Dis "cake walk" is getting "grandslammed" wit "eyes battered"
I'm "PRO MASSacre" smacking ya worst than ANTI MATTER!!....
Ima crack ya stature!!.... n get famed as Im ripping thru ya frame
"J"acking ya "D"ick "R"iders & INITIALS TO YA NAME!!!
Abuse it n switch it up I'll even flip it to a dames
Like watch me CHAN(t) JACKIE when Im KICKiNG IN YA BRAIN!!
Ima "waste jack" pissing liquor in the drain
Then black like a race track when I hit em with a train!!...
…and he just kept going with the rhyme structure and flow.. very ILL

Wow factors:
Jack - Ya seen and knew my drops was ruthless, death comes before this mans face
The Ghetto? He needs to let go of the Urban Talk like the Florida fan base

Killah - Dropped How to rob the illest twice too scared ta list my name
Cuz iM Hotta then global warming n i'll strip em of his REIGN!!

The WTF? Factors:
J’s – “Jack’s above average has left him, I can’t believe this dude has got so stupid
IYa views are not the smoothest, I’d make a case for Killah but would rather leave it to the prosecution”

Killah – “Jack son leave jack offed like the greatest whoever sang
Jackofff couldn't off jack gun grippin on his WANG!!
got a doube barrel body on da shoddy that I aim
Jacks a fighter? *CLICK CLICK* Ima show him how ta *BANG*”

Creativity – Jack had a creative punch in about 11 of his 12 bars, while K fell short on a few bars including the 2 bars I mentioned, but he did a hell of a job keeping his rhyme structure and flow going in a 12 bar battle.

This battle was extremely close in my opinion but I think Jack edged it a bit with a few more “whoa’s” than Killah. This could really go either way when it’s all said and done though! Hellova battle.

uppin for votes

-- Tue Dec 14, 2010 7:55 pm --

Riggz wrote:Killah – “Jack son leave jack offed like the greatest whoever sang
Jackofff couldn't off jack gun grippin on his WANG!!
got a doube barrel body on da shoddy that I aim
Jacks a fighter? *CLICK CLICK* Ima show him how ta *BANG*”

lol my bad dude theres a typo *Double Barrel Body*

I want to vote here and I give unbiased votes,but unless I vote for JDR heads will think that I'm hatin because I just received and accepted a challenge from JDR.I'm not giving away who I'll vote for,I'm just asking permission from the lyricists here to post a vote and my thoroughgoing reasons as to WHY I vote that way.If you guys think Iwon't be objective? Fine.Lemme know.If you're cool with me voting and know of my extensive vet's record as nuetral,logical voter? Then I'd be happy to give a vote to this hella slept on battle.Lemme know.Outro.

-- Fri Dec 17, 2010 11:05 am --

Bar by bar comparison and breakdown...

Jack Da Rippa wrote:Jacks Back & Damn Imma open up on you son...

Looky...

It's a fact I'm nice on purpose, Call it ProJack cos when I rap ya twice as nervous
Mad at life? Ya worthless, So fuck this K Bull, like havin' Satellite Service
The first half of your opening bar ending with "nice on purpose" is weak,and serves as filler with serving only the purpose of keeping the rhyme scheme and sound manipulation up until you hit with your ProJack punch--which could've been set up better--and your K Bull Satellite punch,which was a solid punch.Your bars weren't as punch dense as they could have and should have been imho.

KILLAH'S OPENER:

Dis "cake walk" is getting "grandslammed" wit "eyes battered"
I'm "PRO MASSacre" smacking ya worst than ANTI MATTER!!....
The "eyes battered/ANTI MATTER" punch was both significantly more creative and significantly more powerful than JDR's because it's a far more fresh concept requiring more rareified skill and knowledge to handle deftly.Unfortunately the typos weaken this bar,and the PRO MASSacre wordplay--while I know what you meant--is textcee through and through.It weakens what would've been a slaughterhouse opener and dilutes a bar that--if you handled it better--would've bitch slapped JDR's opener no questions asked.The PRO MASSacre punch is inept and is failed wordplay,but the words literally make sense.JDR's "nice on purpose" is klunky,poor word choice...but intelligible.If the PRO MASS and "nice on purpose" nonsense that each dropped nullify each other,that moves us on to the punches wherein JDR threw two: the ProJack punch and the K Bull Satellite punch.The ProJack punch was also poorly set up,but had madd potential.Although I get the meaning,it doesn't carry very clearly or cleanly due again to poor word selection and equally poor setups.This is another minus for JDR.The "Mad at life? Ya wortheless" part was also poor word choice with again the glaringly obvious purpose of sound manipulation and rhyme scheme maintenance until you hit with that hard KBULL punch;but the ANTIMATTER punch is fresher,more rare,more creative,more knowledge based,less predictable and thus more powerful.Had JDR pulled off his missteps he would have won the opener,and if KILLAH had stacked his first line/bar with more potent punches he'd've run away with the opener.As it is? OPENER: KILLA

JDR'S 2ND BAR-COUPLETTE

You tha last that I'm concerned wit, ya garbage so who the hell is for him?
I'll ring ya bells like Mormens, so understand I Son Killah like a Male Abortion

Again,that SON KILLAH punch is a solid punch but suffers from horrible set ups: the first bar was anus and the opener of the second bar--the Mormons punch which he misspelled--is played more than PS3 and XBOX combined.JDR is shooting himself in the foot here.His punches have madd potential and I can see that he's got actual skill,but maybe he really ISN'T worried about KILLAH like his bars says he's not because he surely seems unfocused and his bars lack the power that his finishing punches suggest that he could wield should he focus.

KILLAH'S 2ND BAR-COUPLETTE:
Ima crack ya stature!!.... n get famed as Im ripping thru ya frame
"J"acking ya "D"ick "R"iders & INITIALS TO YA NAME!!!

Excepting for the "get famed" part of this bar-couplette--which was ANUS,c'mon KILLAH you know better than THAT--KILLAH completely owns JDR.His multis,flow,and creative punch use cleanly outperforms JDR's comparable couplette.KILLAH clowns JDR's dickryders and JDR using his own initials without making it klunky or sacrificing punch power or making use of played ideas.KILLAH is taking every couplette so far.

Jack Da Rippa wrote:
Killah gettin' swelled like foreskin, this battle anotha motion in sequence
So bring ya folks for the meetin', I'd be on both sides of K MEN like the Oceans & Beaches
..

Again,the BOTH SIDES OF K MEN/OCEANS AND BEACHES punch woulda been MADNESS but it suffered from complete BS setups.Come on JDR man..."swelled like foreskin" is HELLA PLAYED man. And "this battle anotha motion in sequence" IS COMPLETE NONSENSE MAN.I mean...UTTER DOOFICITY.You're BETTER than that...the proof is the creativity and power of your K MEN/CAYMAN punch.That was TITE son.But you really weakened it with your setups,man.

KILLAH'S 3RD BAR-COUPLETTE
Abuse it n switch it up I'll even flip it to a dames
Like watch me CHAN(t) JACKIE when Im KICKiNG IN YA BRAIN!!

That was total trash,KILLAH.i KNOW WHERE YOU WERE GOING WITH IT,BUT YOU "KILLED YOURSELF" with the first bar and then you added that wakk textcee punch on JACKIE CHAN's last name.I love Jackie Chan...I hate textcee punches.

JDR takes the 3RD BAR-COUPLETTE.Hold up,brb

JDR'S 4TH BAR-COUPLETTE
Juss focus on breahtin', damn ya constant bitchin, obviously ya hands not for liftin'
Coz we see ya punches and understand that K Dense like a band compeition

This is a pattern now.Wakk setup,klunky punch delivery which weakens what would've been a decent punch with K DENSE/cadence-band competition,but the setup and word choice was so poor that you could also be mistaken for giving KILLAH a COMPLIMENT,because DENSE also means HEAVY AND/OR SUBSTANTIAL.

KILLAH'S 4TH BAR

Ima "waste jack" pissing liquor in the drain
Then black like a race track when I hit em with a trainCompletely owns JDR.Not even close.And the sad thing is? This isn't one of KILLAH's better punches or better battles.But KILLAH's word selection,relentless multis and single-single-single rhyme scheme is cleanly taking JDR because JDR is shooting himself in the foot and KILLAH is not falling off at all.This is a nice use of nameplay, punches (JACK/BLACK JACK the liquor) and ganxta imagery. KILLAH TAKES THIS BAR-COUPLETTE

This pattern continues throughout the entire battle.JDR would have good ideas that get tripped up by horrible word selection,chopped up flow,poor execution and shoddy setups.KILLAH just keeps punchin JDR's lights out,and even where he slips up and makes a mistake,his mistakes aren't as egregious as JDR's by any measure.

PUnches: KILLAH
FLOW: KILLA by a GALAXY
WORDPLAY: KILLA
RHYME SCHEME:KILLAH
VOCAB:KILLA
CREATIVITY: KILLA
SOUND MANIPULATION: JDR (even though his flow was off,he kept up a slightly more sophisticated sound attack,which IS NOT EASY and HE DESERVES PROPS FOR THAT)
IMAGERY: KILLAH (JDR's poor setups cost him this one)

WINNER: KILLAH

Punches: Killah (by a hair. JDR had too much filler in his set ups and Killah just delivered a little meaner.)
Wordplay: JDR (Just more creative all around. Killah was nice in this category, too, though.)
Nameplay: JDR (Easily. This is where JDR always shines and here was no exception)
Personals: Killah (Just felt his personals hit harder and were more relevant.)
Flow: Killah (Shorter bars are almost always gonna flow better.)
Multies: Tie (JDR may have had a few more but I feel that was only because his bars were longer. Plus some of them felt forced on his end.)


Overall, it was a pretty close battle but I think Killah took it with some harder hitting punches. JDR was very creative but fumbled in his wording which reduced the effectiveness of some of his punches.)

+1 K KiLLaH

Punches: JAck Easy
Flow: killah
PErsonals: JAck ... close cat tho
multies: Jack
nameplay: JAck
Wordplay: Jack
Overall: JAck


JAk took this with his namplay/wordplay and punches ... Killah gave him a decent run tho. IMO JAck takes this!

3-2 Jack uppin for votes

wordplay - k killah..
Nameplay - jack..
personals - tie..
Multies n flow - jack..
Consistency - jack..
puns - tie..nun were great..
Punches - jack

vote JACK

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alright well punches go to jack...throughout the whole thing almost ever bar had something that caught my attentiion k kilah had some nice punches to was hard to decide
the flow goes to k killah
personals-jack;
multis k killah

favorite lines-

to me jdr punches connected better killah flow was better and multis were better and easier to follow but i didnt feel like killah personals jus completly cleaned jdr...like jdrs education line felt that was pretty clever....overall this battle came down to the wire

vote=jdr

BOTB

Jacks the meanest head your facin’, this niggas pitiful and see this.
Battle you today, but I guarantee by Knight imma Silence K like the Principles of English

Cover up, like ya genitals & penis, a no name is this thug faggots best win
Im tough practice wit text kidd, & require no help to Pain Killah like drug addicts wit connections

Jack - you were exteremly repeative, every punch ended in a metaphor. get more creative.. decent with the nameplays but too much.. wordplay was decent too

KK - change that struct, ugh, soooo 98! gun talk is whack in text btw, flow was very nice tho, caugbt a couple of rhyme schemes in there and little wordplay. But very basic, some lines weren't direct they just were self-hype which is a big no no.

Vote: Jack The Rippa - more creative and polished than Killah's verse.

RTF: me vs. OMNI