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This one of the songs thats gonna be on my first album. Rugged shot me a beat which he thought would be dope. i heard it, and quickly wrote sumtn down. my boy heard the beat one day and offered to remake it, so he did. this is what the outcome was. shouts to J.R. FX. Lemme know what yall think. leave a link if you want sumtn fed. thanks in advance amigos

Good to hear another track from u Loon. This is one of the best tracks I've heard in awhile. The flow is great, the meaning of the concept is soulful, and the hook is solid too (although I'm not a fan of the beginning of the hook, with the way you sing 'could', but otherwise the hook is real emotional which I like). The highlight for me is definitely the content. Overall, this'd be an easy 10/10 in my book...

Lil Ass Loon! Was up Chico? Beat was nice all around. Good shit Ruckus. Delivery was on point as always Loon. The hook is questionable (you not the best singer LOL Was that a vibrato???? LMFAO), but I liked the words in it. The flow was tight sometimes you out rode it though.
Sounded like the volume went down a bit around the 3 min mark.. maybe it's just me.

You still da man Loon. Good shit!

You know my MSN.. holla back amigo! I'm ready to take the mic out again. Give these cats some more Barry White!

Dude, way to bring it man.. this is what it means to take your heart and lay it out as a track... i was feeling everything you were saying.. and i know you were talking about your life but i saw this relating to alot of people i knew also.. good stuff man.. leaving your mark bro.. keep doing you..

Hey good lookin out fellas. I was goin for sumtn new on the hook. Sumtn different. Imma try to really get a mix of alotta shit on this album. Thanks again tho! Ill return the favor soon as i hit home

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real good shit... like the beat... really u never disappoint on a track... keep it up fam

Hey thanks man! I appreciate it!

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Liked the beat... Cool flow, good emotion , hook was cool.
Liked the Emotion displayed, Consistent, Keep Up the good work

Heeeeey i forgot bout this! Good look on the feeeeeed ill get bak at ya fellas gracias

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you got fucking talent bro. thats all ima say.

Ite, I'm Loving Tha Beat. ,Feels Emotional. Your Quality Is Good. I Wuda Turned The Chorus Down A Little Bit, But That's Just Me. I Like How You Keep It Real Throughout The Song "Paychecks Are Far N Few". Good Delivery And Pain. "close My Eyes, Re-alize" Loved How U Flowed That. Granted You're Not The Singing Type, The Chorus Got STuck In My Head, And I Found Myself Humming Along With You By Hook 3. Good Job Man! Love This Shit, And Can't Wait Til We Knock Out Our Collab

nice clean soundin beat..

haha right from the ycget deliv and quality R good..a Tru talk type track ....

that hook is tight...you can hear the emotion..the fact your not a singer helps keep that rawness in it ..

this is a well thought out track..well put together..good Sgyt Loon no doubt...1