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good luck
pat drops first

Your a still a rookie, i been through a lotta shit
They call me Patriarch that means im ur father bitch
This is a waste of time, So go ahead n do me a favor
Ask your girl how come when you fuck you have to pay her

Sir Justin its a tournament no turning back here
Go act queer,I got your girls pussy open like a papsmear
Kid probably holds guns but is afraid to bust um
After the battle its gunna say Pat Sir'ved Justin.

I did not try goodbye

Rookie my ass,
Been on the grind since the police took me for cash,
Went from stealin to hustlin on the smash,
Divide the stash to collect it,
Atleast ten times better then you Respect it,
My rhymes got me on the shyne you still feel neglected,
I click the uninspected to get ya set hit,
So check it,
The crowns mine im denicated to defend it,
So you should run while i let you slide,
Or for some funs have a man wita gun pop you n watch you die,
Your drop was wack u shoulda took it back,
Now I look chiniese Because I Cooked this Cat....

i'mpretty sure the rules stated no feeding...but whatever

Wordplay:justin
Punches: patriaich
Personals: patriach
Metaphors: none
Flow:NONE...but patriach
Nameplay Punches: none

pat:3/6
justin:1/6


TOM ur a fucking comedian

yah, i said no feeding, but i'm not going to punish him, because he really didn't do much. and apparently it didn't help much

wat r u high.. justin didn't get wordplay.. pat did.. justin did have flow btw

and pat got personals too.. use ur head silly.. either way pat won that

OpticalPerspective wrote:wat r u high.. justin didn't get wordplay.. pat did.. justin did have flow btw

and pat got personals too.. use ur head silly.. either way pat won that

*in a silent voice*
whateva whateva i do what i wawnt
respect my authority....

pat used wordplay twice one was a lil stretched justin did once... this battle wasn't that great at all though, upping for votes

"shut up imperial! and get back in office-sir"//
"take a look" instead of makin calls-with-blur//

atleast u voted right.. but u should be dropped kicked for categories lol..(knows who'll hate against me now!) muahahah

oh lord...no more free posting people

pat's leaving 1-0 upping votes in this mother fucker.. cmon judges get to it!

i'll delete all the freeposts once somebody else votes

Can we please get this over with

Ha,
Flow- SirJustin
Wordplay- Pat, though it wasnt really needed since it didnt hit hard
Punches- Pat
Personals- Pat
Metaphors- None, i'll define that term later.
Nameplay Punches- Pat

Metaphor- A comparison between two things usually using like or as

This battle wasnt really worth my while but that all comes with judging.

SirJustin, do you know what a battle verse is? Next time dont 'brag' about yourself, it'll get you nowhere in a battle

And for both of ya'll making senseless shit up about what your going to do to that person wont get you nowhere either, feed off of what they post (check the old forum) Just use what you know abut them against them...
Need me to explain anymore?

Stay Active...
Manifest.

And, I did my categoried based on what I.know did (Mr.Head Judge), need me to change up the categories? No biggy.