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QwarterZ
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And I'm Done

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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-bOIfhtI ... re=related[/video]

you just gotta wait for it.....

yea...


wait for it


Some say I stay partial to the alumni
run by with one arm raised with a gun high
waitin' to smoke the sky, let one off, one eye
aimed at the competitors, I've become fly
some come by just to air out their opinions
but I'm fittin' to become the line untied...
some might see me as the one roastin' dominions
companions who thought I was just a minion
get filet'd, minon, if y'all don't get it, supply...
the beef and I souflee up your noodle, sum dum gai...
please excuse the apparel, I'm far from a pharoah
bottom of the barrel, I'm top of the line, compare yo
prices to vincent, my voice just seems distinguished
wrapped in old english, sinkin' into a link with...
the past, grasp society by the brass, and sink so fast
Atlantis, the planters of the peanut, just bag it
scrap it, and then damage anything left on the planet
let the water run free, until I return to discuss me
don't let it get ugly, and let God tell you he don't love me
I crush dreams without even knowing the meaning of rug b
trust me, I'm just a unloaded gun with the magic bullet
if you have the guts to pull it make sure u aim at the pulpit
take down the preacher and the man behind the silence
behind the violence who decides what "War" at the right time is
my rhymes is timeless and sometimes my mind is kinda mindless
so while I'm tryna find it your going to deal with the run on's
and every other thread I cum on will only be topped by one thought
I am, will, and continue to be the greatest to rip through pages
and still be stubborn enough not to go back and change shiiiiiitttttttt......
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Re: And I'm Done

Post by Alvin »

Good Drop man, why dont you audio some of this? I tried rappin to it, but kept fallin off, i guess its not my style much. Id like to read some topical shit sometime man. Maybe all them rhymes you write about current polotics or somin, keep droppin homie
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