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kill um all

Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 11:13 am
by eMCee Havic
bitch ass mother fuckers get slayed
falayed with 10 inch seraded blades
fuck a renegade i'm sickness i'm AIDS
watch these mitch bades get sprayed
wit pellet bomb grenades, fuck a hit list
i'm pickin up phone books with clenched fists
tellin these suckah emcees to get pinched
cause they all ready turning wit-ness
so get this i'm slick rich you just slick bitch
hoppin outtah town with a limp dick and a box a bizquick
it's business always personal thats my persona
i'll leave you in a shallow grave a spit on ya
you sown ya fate now step up to ya fate
yeah you think a lotta shit but never create
you fake suckah dodge and duckah
i know theres more than cops trying to bust ya
you a mis knomer an informer droppin dimes on his soldiers
you aint got no weight so whats this bout big boldas
a fake liar, you inspired? only to fuck dudes like them dudes on the WIRE
i spit fire, you'd get fired but dont have a job to get hired
so back up im bad stuff you act up get smashed chump
whats this punk puppy claim dog when his leg dont lift up?
this what your moms gonna be crying to
so bow down now clown or shes gonna be dying too..

lol a lil battle rap free.. feed it or not

Re: kill um all

Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:26 pm
by QwarterZ
this was ok...it seems more gangsta-ish to me then it does a battle rap...battle raps are used to usually embarrass the other person or to degrade them...I guess the whole questioning of credibility works...but it does seem cliche at times...either way you have multis scattered around this piece really good stuff here and there...some of it was meh..but it kept the flow going...cool drop overall...keep writing brah

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Re: kill um all

Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2010 6:10 pm
by The Man
Good stuff, better than the last couple of drops you made.