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You’re all pouts and puppy eyes...
What u tryin to seduce a site of full young guys? and your supposed to go wild in Denver?
Fuck outta here, Mr. moody for the camera, by looks u only ‘pose a threat’ as a child molester!!

Get riled when i test ya, my hits make a clearing, as a battler u don’t git clout or cheering
Peak reached? only expect ‘Rugged to reign/terrain at the top’ on a trip mountaineering!!

I got shit u be fearing, keep hold of that wack spin, Rugged Eros got no wins worth rankin
U beat no one decent, if its ‘R.E. tha/Aretha greatest’ they mean the soul singer Franklin!!
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aretha_Franklin

Ya tag raps go in the trash bin, Jack n Jesus spit with elocution, u dropped shit as retribution
Illest witnessed an execution, Rugg a god? like creationist theories u got ‘dismissed with Evolution!!’
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/round ... 18308.html

Fuck a diss ya disillusioned, playin the thug to im-press, man this dud is distressed
Just one punch from Cee, n we`ll ‘find Ruggs/drugs bodied’ without a blood or piss test!!

This mug just aint blessed, any real battle u lost the fight, i`ll target n boss this dyke
Embarrass him! leave ‘Rug red and seein stars’ like welcome carpets on Oscar night!!

Defrost ya hype, any boasts are strange when you talk, coz I’ve arranged a new loss
Swagger jacker!, the only ‘Rugged Man’ that’s dope in rap is R.A. from New York!!
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/R.A._The_Rugged_Man

Ya defeat record says 6...
You better take it off quick, and put ‘7 up’ like the soft drink! man it’s great to thwart
When judged...like a date in court, Illest says ‘Rug be/rugby wack’ like we hate the sport!!

Tough guy...
Ya claims just don’t strike us, u got jailed for like 3 days, u aint stay with the lifers
But ya asshole still ‘received more prison males/mails’ than Lil Wayne did at Rikers!!

Your pain don’t excite us, you`ll be gone next so listen, just conserve ambition
Get a life! coz you`ve been spendin more ‘time on site’ than a long served optician!!

Rugged:
* You fucking blow at rapping, that's why ya momma never gotten you a mic
So "Cee Level's" only rise cuz ya'll herbs keep letting this 'fossil' fuel the site
[3.5 – Set up wasn’t great but the punch was on point.. LMAO]
FLAKE! this bomb's Hazard-ish! - punchlines suck so much that it schaeff's
Actually, Cee4's jokes are like Haz's relatives... they just "BLOW UP in his face"
[2.5 – I don’t think anyone’s going to be able to pronounce schaeff and make it rhyme with “in his face”. Seemed forced Rugg]
** Ain't nobody take this Tim Westwood serious, fuck BBC & London TV
I'll 'Pimp C', cuz only way you'll find a 'G in the UK' is if ya cop a Bun B CD
[3 – HA, I hate Bun B.. nice punch]

His black & white avy will look just like this sissies murder scene photo
Cuz w/ my ''bare hands'', I'ma "Crush C"... like the Cinci University Logo
[2.5 Well the UC has a U with a funny looking C inside of it.. I guess that was ok..but too forced Rugg]

*** BAM! I ain't giving Cee-KY, my shit is raw-dog, come blow something
This aint a battle, I'm 'steppin on C-4' n all I hear is soft bones crunching
[3 – set up was ok, delivery was better]
U Cee what I Cee? where's the eye doctor???

Pull out the fly swatter, bitch will look like the after effects of a suicide bomber
Charcoal him, top the Turkey off w/ some 'Black Cee' & a round of ice water
[2.5 - Ok, The Black Sea is cold and sits north of Turkey and very cold.. I get it, but it’s still forced]

He only "thanks giving" when he gives it up to his dick riding faggot voters
Still ya'll bitches know 'deep down' I put C-4 in the dirt.... like Iraqi Soldiers!!!
[3.5 – had this set up and punch had a few multies in it, it would’ve damn near been perfect]
Cee's two-E Z...

My fuse bigger than your's, how ya bomb when ya still live at ya moms crib?
Ruggz is 4-wheelin' - find 'C4 stuck under my ride' like an amateur Mob hit!!!
[3.5 I liked the mob hit punch.. just finished watching Casino]
Better yell for doctors!!!

This bitch in Winchester will get hit w/ the Winchester... get pelt w/ MONSTERS!
My bulls-eye seeing red, so look out for the 'Copper-4'.. n' I ain't talking helicopters
[2.5 wasn’t feelin’ the set up and didn’t feel like you put much into the punch either]
(Winchesters shoot Copper bullets muffa rukka)

***** So run to your friends, don't come here again, or get punched in the chin
Now you're the "one t(w)o step" bitch.. the infamous 'Cee-era' has finally COME TO AN END!!!
[2.5 Set up felt like a Dr.Suees book, usually I’m more impressed with your closers.. but that whole Ciara pull off seemed forced]
Maybe you thought toooo much for this battle Ruggs.. didn’t let it flow like you usually do.
29/50 Slightly above Average

Cee 4:
You’re all pouts and puppy eyes...
What u tryin to seduce a site of full young guys? and your supposed to go wild in Denver?
Fuck outta here, Mr. moody for the camera, by looks u only ‘pose a threat’ as a child molester!!
[3 – He does look like a child molester in that pic.. but I couldn’t bring Denver/Molester together in the rhyme scheme.. no matter how I pronounced it]
Get riled when i test ya, my hits make a clearing, as a battler u don’t git clout or cheering
Peak reached? only expect ‘Rugged to reign/terrain at the top’ on a trip mountaineering!!
[2.5 – Forced punch Cee.. probably could’ve delivered it better]
I got shit u be fearing, keep hold of that wack spin, Rugged Eros got no wins worth rankin
U beat no one decent, if its ‘R.E. tha/Aretha greatest’ they mean the soul singer Franklin!!
[2.5 – I said this like a dozen times and couldn’t get it to gel. I’m still seein’ forced punches]

Ya tag raps go in the trash bin, Jack n Jesus spit with elocution, u dropped shit as retribution
Illest witnessed an execution, Rugg a god? like creationist theories u got ‘dismissed with Evolution!!’
[3.5 nice multies, nice personal.. good punch]

Fuck a diss ya disillusioned, playin the thug to im-press, man this dud is distressed
Just one punch from Cee, n we`ll ‘find Ruggs/drugs bodied’ without a blood or piss test!!
[2.5 - What?]
This mug just aint blessed, any real battle u lost the fight, i`ll target n boss this dyke
Embarrass him! leave ‘Rug red and seein stars’ like welcome carpets on Oscar night!!
[3 Set up was ok, punch was a little better.. multies kind of fit]
Defrost ya hype, any boasts are strange when you talk, coz I’ve arranged a new loss
Swagger jacker!, the only ‘Rugged Man’ that’s dope in rap is R.A. from New York!!
[2.5 – Again What??? New Loss/New York? Did I miss the rhyme here? Must be the British accent]

Ya defeat record says 6...
You better take it off quick, and put ‘7 up’ like the soft drink! man it’s great to thwart
When judged...like a date in court, Illest says ‘Rug be/rugby wack’ like we hate the sport!!
[2.5.. I’m sorry who the hell uses “thwart” in a battle, Cee? LMFAO I’ll fuckin’ THWART you! HAHA!]
Tough guy...
Ya claims just don’t strike us, u got jailed for like 3 days, u aint stay with the lifers
But ya asshole still ‘received more prison males/mails’ than Lil Wayne did at Rikers!!
[3.5 now that was a funny ass personal. Damn! LMFAO]
Your pain don’t excite us, you`ll be gone next so listen, just conserve ambition
Get a life! coz you`ve been spendin more ‘time on site’ than a long served optician!!
[3 – the punch was ok, but I still don’t like rhyming ambition/with optician.. maybe the set it up with “hot mission”, or stop dissin or crop kissin’ or something]
28.5/50 Slightly above average
Close battle by two of the better battlers on the site.. however, I expected more from the both of you..
Rugg wins by my talley of (.5)

uppin some votes please

Rugged:

* You fucking blow at rapping, that's why ya momma never gotten you a mic
So "Cee Level's" only rise cuz ya'll herbs keep letting this 'fossil' fuel the site

4/5 Decent wordplay and nameplay. Flow was ok. Set-up was fillerish.

FLAKE! this bomb's Hazard-ish! - punchlines suck so much that it schaeff's
Actually, Cee4's jokes are like Haz's relatives... they just "BLOW UP in his face"

3/5 Ok overall. Just felt like it was making fun of Hazard more than Cee.

** Ain't nobody take this Tim Westwood serious, fuck BBC & London TV
I'll 'Pimp C', cuz only way you'll find a 'G in the UK' is if ya cop a Bun B CD

4/5 Nice wordplay on this one.

His black & white avy will look just like this sissies murder scene photo
Cuz w/ my ''bare hands'', I'ma "Crush C"... like the Cinci University Logo

4/5 I def need to read the expo on this one but the wordplay is pretty good.

*** BAM! I ain't giving Cee-KY, my shit is raw-dog, come blow something
This aint a battle, I'm 'steppin on C-4' n all I hear is soft bones crunching

2/5 Wasn't feeling this.

Pull out the fly swatter, bitch will look like the after effects of a suicide bomber
Charcoal him, top the Turkey off w/ some 'Black Cee' & a round of ice water

2/5 I get that the Black See is above Turkey but I'm not sure what the hell you're talking about here.

He only "thanks giving" when he gives it up to his dick riding faggot voters
Still ya'll bitches know 'deep down' I put C-4 in the dirt.... like Iraqi Soldiers!!!

3/5 Decent but not that hard hitting.

My fuse bigger than your's, how ya bomb when ya still live at ya moms crib?
Ruggz is 4-wheelin' - find 'C4 stuck under my ride' like an amateur Mob hit!!!

3/5 I thought this was pretty good but not great.

This bitch in Winchester will get hit w/ the Winchester... get pelt w/ MONSTERS!
My bulls-eye seeing red, so look out for the 'Copper-4'.. n' I ain't talking helicopters

2/5 Not sure what pelt with monsters is supposed to mean, exactly. Also, I don't imagine anyone referring to him as simply 4 so that punch falls short, IMO.

***** So run to your friends, don't come here again, or get punched in the chin
Now you're the "one t(w)o step" bitch.. the infamous 'Cee-era' has finally COME TO AN END!!!

4/5 The wordplay and punch was there but the set up was weak.

31/50 Overall not bad but could've been better.


Cee4:

What u tryin to seduce a site of full young guys? and your supposed to go wild in Denver?
Fuck outta here, Mr. moody for the camera, by looks u only ‘pose a threat’ as a child molester!!

4/5 The first line made me laugh. Punch was ok.

Get riled when i test ya, my hits make a clearing, as a battler u don’t git clout or cheering
Peak reached? only expect ‘Rugged to reign/terrain at the top’ on a trip mountaineering!!

3/5 I liked the wordplay but not much else.

I got shit u be fearing, keep hold of that wack spin, Rugged Eros got no wins worth rankin
U beat no one decent, if its ‘R.E. tha/Aretha greatest’ they mean the soul singer Franklin!!

2/5 the pronunciation on the punch doesn't work at all.

Ya tag raps go in the trash bin, Jack n Jesus spit with elocution, u dropped shit as retribution
Illest witnessed an execution, Rugg a god? like creationist theories u got ‘dismissed with Evolution!!’

5/5 Nice shit.

Fuck a diss ya disillusioned, playin the thug to im-press, man this dud is distressed
Just one punch from Cee, n we`ll ‘find Ruggs/drugs bodied’ without a blood or piss test!!

3/5 Eh.

This mug just aint blessed, any real battle u lost the fight, i`ll target n boss this dyke
Embarrass him! leave ‘Rug red and seein stars’ like welcome carpets on Oscar night!!

4/5 Pretty good all around.

Defrost ya hype, any boasts are strange when you talk, coz I’ve arranged a new loss
Swagger jacker!, the only ‘Rugged Man’ that’s dope in rap is R.A. from New York!!

3/5 Could've been a good punch if the rhyme was better.

Ya defeat record says 6...
You better take it off quick, and put ‘7 up’ like the soft drink! man it’s great to thwart
When judged...like a date in court, Illest says ‘Rug be/rugby wack’ like we hate the sport!!

2/5 Multi was forced as hell. Punch was ok. Flow was off due to that little lead in but with out it the set-up wouldn't make any sense.

Ya claims just don’t strike us, u got jailed for like 3 days, u aint stay with the lifers
But ya asshole still ‘received more prison males/mails’ than Lil Wayne did at Rikers!!

5/5 Nothing to critique here.

Your pain don’t excite us, you`ll be gone next so listen, just conserve ambition
Get a life! coz you`ve been spendin more ‘time on site’ than a long served optician!!

3/5 Kind of a lackluster closer.

34/50 A decent verse with some high and low points.



Overall, I have to give this one to Cee4. Rugged was very consistent but never managed to land those really hard hitting punches. He tends to get a bit overcomplicated in his wordplay which can make it hard to feel the impact. Cee 4 had a few duds but overall had the strongest punches.

+1 Cee4

This is a close battle so I think I'mma need to do a bar by bar breakdown to determine who to vote for.

Rugg's Verse
* You fucking blow at rapping, that's why ya momma never gotten you a mic
So "Cee Level's" only rise cuz ya'll herbs keep letting this 'fossil' fuel the site
4/5 I like this opener, creative and funny wordplay in the second line there.

FLAKE! this bomb's Hazard-ish! - punchlines suck so much that it schaeff's
Actually, Cee4's jokes are like Haz's relatives... they just "BLOW UP in his face"
2/5 Eh.

** Ain't nobody take this Tim Westwood serious, fuck BBC & London TV
I'll 'Pimp C', cuz only way you'll find a 'G in the UK' is if ya cop a Bun B CD
2.5/5 I wanna like this line more, it is a decent personal punch at his country, some decent wordplay, but it's just okay.

Call me Vitor w/ how I Belt-Four(Belfort).

His black & white avy will look just like this sissies murder scene photo
Cuz w/ my ''bare hands'', I'ma "Crush C"... like the Cinci University Logo
2/5. Yeah, not really feelin it. Flow is off, punch is pretty weak.

*** BAM! I ain't giving Cee-KY, my shit is raw-dog, come blow something
This aint a battle, I'm 'steppin on C-4' n all I hear is soft bones crunching
2/5. Nah, not feelin it again. Flow feels forced and not too fluid, punch is kinda weak.

U Cee what I Cee? where's the eye doctor???

Pull out the fly swatter, bitch will look like the after effects of a suicide bomber
Charcoal him, top the Turkey off w/ some 'Black Cee' & a round of ice water
1/5. This is worded funny, the wordplay feels way too forced, and the flow doesn't feel quite right.

He only "thanks giving" when he gives it up to his dick riding faggot voters
Still ya'll bitches know 'deep down' I put C-4 in the dirt.... like Iraqi Soldiers!!!
3/5 Decent bar. Creative wordplay. Personally aimed. The flow still feels too forced though.

Cee's two-E Z...

My fuse bigger than your's, how ya bomb when ya still live at ya moms crib?
Ruggz is 4-wheelin' - find 'C4 stuck under my ride' like an amateur Mob hit!!!
3/5. The flow feels better in this bar. The punch is decent. Wordplay is good.

Better yell for doctors!!!

This bitch in Winchester will get hit w/ the Winchester... get pelt w/ MONSTERS!
My bulls-eye seeing red, so look out for the 'Copper-4'.. n' I ain't talking helicopters
1/5. I get what ur attempting with the wordplay here, but just doesn't connect into a punch imo. I don't like the flow in this bar either, there isn't really one except the end word rhymes and the syllable count is similar.


***** So run to your friends, don't come here again, or get punched in the chin
Now you're the "one t(w)o step" bitch.. the infamous 'Cee-era' has finally COME TO AN END!!!
3.5/5. The flow feels pretty good here, the punch is solid and personally aimed. The wordplay is creative but not crazy complicated. Good way to end it.

Overall: 24/50... This is far from the best battle verse I've read from you. Usually I like ur verses a lot more than this one. I felt that the flow was off, the wordplay was creative but not really on point, and the punches had some decent stuff but not enough.



Cee4's verse:
You’re all pouts and puppy eyes...
What u tryin to seduce a site of full young guys? and your supposed to go wild in Denver?
Fuck outta here, Mr. moody for the camera, by looks u only ‘pose a threat’ as a child molester!!
3.5/5. Not bad, its funny and has a decent punch. And the flow is good. Think it wasn't necessarily perfect for an opener though.

Get riled when i test ya, my hits make a clearing, as a battler u don’t git clout or cheering
Peak reached? only expect ‘Rugged to reign/terrain at the top’ on a trip mountaineering!!
3/5. Had a lot of potential. The wordplay is well done, the punch is pretty good. Wish the first and second line connected together better though. But pretty good.

I got shit u be fearing, keep hold of that wack spin, Rugged Eros got no wins worth rankin
U beat no one decent, if its ‘R.E. tha/Aretha greatest’ they mean the soul singer Franklin!!
1.5/5. The wordplay would've been good if the pronunciation of 'R.E. tha' and 'Aretha' was actually the same. The rest of the bar is kinda weak.

Ya tag raps go in the trash bin, Jack n Jesus spit with elocution, u dropped shit as retribution
Illest witnessed an execution, Rugg a god? like creationist theories u got ‘dismissed with Evolution!!’
5/5. I think this is a killer bar. U set it up and bring it home with a solid personal punch with creative wordplay. And the flow is good too. This bar is awesome.

Fuck a diss ya disillusioned, playin the thug to im-press, man this dud is distressed
Just one punch from Cee, n we`ll ‘find Ruggs/drugs bodied’ without a blood or piss test!!
2/5. Too bad ur killer bar above is surrounded by bars that may be ur weakest. The wordplay doesn't work too well here. The flow is okay, which prevented this bar from getting a lower score. The punch isn't really much.

This mug just aint blessed, any real battle u lost the fight, i`ll target n boss this dyke
Embarrass him! leave ‘Rug red and seein stars’ like welcome carpets on Oscar night!!
4/5. I thought this was pretty creative. The flow was nice. The punch was very much a punch, and it was solid.

Defrost ya hype, any boasts are strange when you talk, coz I’ve arranged a new loss
Swagger jacker!, the only ‘Rugged Man’ that’s dope in rap is R.A. from New York!!
2/5. Had potential, but the flow felt forced, and loss and York don't rhyme at all. The punch was almost good, but felt stretched across too many words for a relatively weak punch.

Ya defeat record says 6...
You better take it off quick, and put ‘7 up’ like the soft drink! man it’s great to thwart
When judged...like a date in court, Illest says ‘Rug be/rugby wack’ like we hate the sport!!
2.5/5. Lot of potential again, but just didn't quite do it. 'man it's great to thwart' seems unnecessary in general. 'rugby wack' is decent wordplay, but grammatically feels strange which takes away from some of its potential. The flow is good though.

Tough guy...
Ya claims just don’t strike us, u got jailed for like 3 days, u aint stay with the lifers
But ya asshole still ‘received more prison males/mails’ than Lil Wayne did at Rikers!!
3.5/5. Creative, personal, and solid punch. Funny too. Solid bar.

Your pain don’t excite us, you`ll be gone next so listen, just conserve ambition
Get a life! coz you`ve been spendin more ‘time on site’ than a long served optician!!
2/5. Damn, I keep getting let down after ur best bars, always seemed to be followed by bars that just don't strike. This is not a good way to end the verse, doesn't bring it to a close at all, kinda think the bar above this should've been the last one.

Overall: 29/50. Not a bad verse, but had the potential to be so much more. The good bars were real solid, but the weak bars really brought the full verse down a lot.


MVGT------------ Cee4

I can't be fucked breaking this down so I'm gonna quote the strongest and weakest bars from each, among other things.

Rugged's strongest:

He only "thanks giving" when he gives it up to his dick riding faggot voters
Still ya'll bitches know 'deep down' I put C-4 in the dirt.... like Iraqi Soldiers!!!

Cee's two-E Z...

My fuse bigger than your's, how ya bomb when ya still live at ya moms crib?
Ruggz is 4-wheelin' - find 'C4 stuck under my ride' like an amateur Mob hit!!!

Rugged's weakest:

Pull out the fly swatter, bitch will look like the after effects of a suicide bomber
Charcoal him, top the Turkey off w/ some 'Black Cee' & a round of ice water

This bitch in Winchester will get hit w/ the Winchester... get pelt w/ MONSTERS!
My bulls-eye seeing red, so look out for the 'Copper-4'.. n' I ain't talking helicopters

Alright as we can see here, u were relying heavily on nameplays for this and that's alright if ur punches are witty as fuck but those 2 weak ones I quoted were a prime example of how u tried to be too clever and it didn't raise an 'oooh' or 'lol'.

Cee4's strongest:

I got shit u be fearing, keep hold of that wack spin, Rugged Eros got no wins worth rankin
U beat no one decent, if its ‘R.E. tha/Aretha greatest’ they mean the soul singer Franklin!!
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aretha_Franklin

Ya tag raps go in the trash bin, Jack n Jesus spit with elocution, u dropped shit as retribution
Illest witnessed an execution, Rugg a god? like creationist theories u got ‘dismissed with Evolution!!’

This mug just aint blessed, any real battle u lost the fight, i`ll target n boss this dyke
Embarrass him! leave ‘Rug red and seein stars’ like welcome carpets on Oscar night!!

Cee's weakest:

Fuck a diss ya disillusioned, playin the thug to im-press, man this dud is distressed
Just one punch from Cee, n we`ll ‘find Ruggs/drugs bodied’ without a blood or piss test!!

Defrost ya hype, any boasts are strange when you talk, coz I’ve arranged a new loss
Swagger jacker!, the only ‘Rugged Man’ that’s dope in rap is R.A. from New York!!

Tough guy...
Ya claims just don’t strike us, u got jailed for like 3 days, u aint stay with the lifers
But ya asshole still ‘received more prison males/mails’ than Lil Wayne did at Rikers!!

They were all just too basic, not the simple and effective shit that stings they were just duds.

Overall both of u were mostly using nameplay, Cee came marginally more personal and the quality of his punchlines and execution stood out a lot more. Rugged had some good shit but he overcomplicated a lot of would-be good bars too.

I'm voting Cee4 for the above reasons.

3-1 Cee4.

RUGGED

* You fucking blow at rapping, that's why ya momma never gotten you a mic
So "Cee Level's" only rise cuz ya'll herbs keep letting this 'fossil' fuel the site
^^^ nice wordplay and nameplay, meh on the flow, and maybe it should have been "momma's never gotten..." but im not here to correct grammar...3.5/5

FLAKE! this bomb's Hazard-ish! - punchlines suck so much that it schaeff's
Actually, Cee4's jokes are like Haz's relatives... they just "BLOW UP in his face"
^^^ again meh on the flow, wasn't attacking cee, more haz, but it was funny...2.5/5

** Ain't nobody take this Tim Westwood serious, fuck BBC & London TV
I'll 'Pimp C', cuz only way you'll find a 'G in the UK' is if ya cop a Bun B CD
^^^ nice wordplay, kinda personal, flow was ok...3.5/5

His black & white avy will look just like this sissies murder scene photo
Cuz w/ my ''bare hands'', I'ma "Crush C"... like the Cinci University Logo
^^^ nice flow, peeped the link and i liked and understood where you took it...4/5

*** BAM! I ain't giving Cee-KY, my shit is raw-dog, come blow something
This aint a battle, I'm 'steppin on C-4' n all I hear is soft bones crunching
^^^ i liked the flow, ok punch...3/5

Pull out the fly swatter, bitch will look like the after effects of a suicide bomber
Charcoal him, top the Turkey off w/ some 'Black Cee' & a round of ice water
^^^ wasnt feeling it plus it felt forced...1/5

He only "thanks giving" when he gives it up to his dick riding faggot voters
Still ya'll bitches know 'deep down' I put C-4 in the dirt.... like Iraqi Soldiers!!!
^^^ couldnt get into the flow, but it was a nice punch...3/5

My fuse bigger than your's, how ya bomb when ya still live at ya moms crib?
Ruggz is 4-wheelin' - find 'C4 stuck under my ride' like an amateur Mob hit!!!
^^^ dont consider this a personal(first line anyway), but i thought it was creative, ok flow...3/5

This bitch in Winchester will get hit w/ the Winchester... get pelt w/ MONSTERS!
My bulls-eye seeing red, so look out for the 'Copper-4'.. n' I ain't talking helicopters
^^^ flow was off IMO, maybe using winchester 2x, creative punch but agree with kau on referring to him as 4...2/5

***** So run to your friends, don't come here again, or get punched in the chin
Now you're the "one t(w)o step" bitch.. the infamous 'Cee-era' has finally COME TO AN END!!!
^^^ weak set up, but i liked the punch and nameplay...3/5

28.5/50

CEE4

What u tryin to seduce a site of full young guys? and your supposed to go wild in Denver?
Fuck outta here, Mr. moody for the camera, by looks u only ‘pose a threat’ as a child molester!!
^^^ haha...funny, average punch and flow...3/5

Get riled when i test ya, my hits make a clearing, as a battler u don’t git clout or cheering
Peak reached? only expect ‘Rugged to reign/terrain at the top’ on a trip mountaineering!!
^^^ nice wordplay, flow felt forced. the whole bar couldve been clever if you set it up differently...2.5/5

I got shit u be fearing, keep hold of that wack spin, Rugged Eros got no wins worth rankin
U beat no one decent, if its ‘R.E. tha/Aretha greatest’ they mean the soul singer Franklin!!
^^^ wasnt feeling this. fow was off, and punch didnt attack opponent. wording was weird...1.5/5

Ya tag raps go in the trash bin, Jack n Jesus spit with elocution, u dropped shit as retribution
Illest witnessed an execution, Rugg a god? like creationist theories u got ‘dismissed with Evolution!!’
^^^ perfect bar. everything came together nicely. no need to explain. best bar of the battle...5/5

Fuck a diss ya disillusioned, playin the thug to im-press, man this dud is distressed
Just one punch from Cee, n we`ll ‘find Ruggs/drugs bodied’ without a blood or piss test!!
^^^ ok flow, nothing else stood out, wasnt feeling the punch...2/5

This mug just aint blessed, any real battle u lost the fight, i`ll target n boss this dyke
Embarrass him! leave ‘Rug red and seein stars’ like welcome carpets on Oscar night!!
^^^ ok flow, but a nice punch. above average...3.5/5

Defrost ya hype, any boasts are strange when you talk, coz I’ve arranged a new loss
Swagger jacker!, the only ‘Rugged Man’ that’s dope in rap is R.A. from New York!!
^^^ wtf!!! nope, flow/rhymes didnt match. weakest bar of your whole verse...1/5

Ya defeat record says 6...
You better take it off quick, and put ‘7 up’ like the soft drink! man it’s great to thwart
When judged...like a date in court, Illest says ‘Rug be/rugby wack’ like we hate the sport!!
^^^ flow was off on the first line and it seemed streched, ok punch, nothing special though...2/5

Tough guy...
Ya claims just don’t strike us, u got jailed for like 3 days, u aint stay with the lifers
But ya asshole still ‘received more prison males/mails’ than Lil Wayne did at Rikers!!
^^^ funny personal and punch, nice flow...3.5/5

Your pain don’t excite us, you`ll be gone next so listen, just conserve ambition
Get a life! coz you`ve been spendin more ‘time on site’ than a long served optician!!
^^^ flow was ok, not a great closer, ok punch...3/5

27/50

Overall...an average but close battle. after reading CEE4's battle against JDR i thought he would murder RUGGS, but he held his own. both had nice wordplay and creative punches, but ive seen much better from both. acording to my tally...RUGGED takes the win.

3-2 gentlemen...

Rugged's verse

You fucking blow at rapping, that's why ya momma never gotten you a mic
So "Cee Level's" only rise cuz ya'll herbs keep letting this 'fossil' fuel the site

This is a solid opener. Had me cracking up. Good personal.

FLAKE! this bomb's Hazard-ish! - punchlines suck so much that it schaeff's
Actually, Cee4's jokes are like Haz's relatives... they just "BLOW UP in his face"

I like the joke, but the punch is directed at Cee as much as it seems to be a swing at Haz.

** Ain't nobody take this Tim Westwood serious, fuck BBC & London TV
I'll 'Pimp C', cuz only way you'll find a 'G in the UK' is if ya cop a Bun B CD

Lol this was a pretty cool flip. Nice concept.

His black & white avy will look just like this sissies murder scene photo
Cuz w/ my ''bare hands'', I'ma "Crush C"... like the Cinci University Logo

This was alright. Doesnt hit that hard to me, but I see what you were getting at. Couldn't flipped this better IMO.

BAM! I ain't giving Cee-KY, my shit is raw-dog, come blow something
This aint a battle, I'm 'steppin on C-4' n all I hear is soft bones crunching

This was a cool play. Maybe it wouldve done better to reword the beginning of the last line like this battle was over before it started or something like that.

Pull out the fly swatter, bitch will look like the after effects of a suicide bomber
Charcoal him, top the Turkey off w/ some 'Black Cee' & a round of ice water

This was a good flip, esp with the play on turkey at this was posted up around thanksgiving.

He only "thanks giving" when he gives it up to his dick riding faggot voters
Still ya'll bitches know 'deep down' I put C-4 in the dirt.... like Iraqi Soldiers!!!

Lol this was funny to me. Better than the other c-4 line IMO, but both were good.

My fuse bigger than your's, how ya bomb when ya still live at ya moms crib?
Ruggz is 4-wheelin' - find 'C4 stuck under my ride' like an amateur Mob hit!!!

This is funny too, but the C-4 punches are getting a little redundant. Might have been better to space them out more.

This bitch in Winchester will get hit w/ the Winchester... get pelt w/ MONSTERS!
My bulls-eye seeing red, so look out for the 'Copper-4'.. n' I ain't talking helicopters

Not as solid as some of your other bars.

So run to your friends, don't come here again, or get punched in the chin
Now you're the "one t(w)o step" bitch.. the infamous 'Cee-era' has finally COME TO AN END!!!

This was a nice flip. The set up was bad though, especially when I know you like to have good set ups in your verse. The punch was a good way to close this out though.

Cee 4's verse

What u tryin to seduce a site of full young guys? and your supposed to go wild in Denver?
Fuck outta here, Mr. moody for the camera, by looks u only ‘pose a threat’ as a child molester!!

This was funny. Nice opening bar. Had me laughing definitely.

Get riled when i test ya, my hits make a clearing, as a battler u don’t git clout or cheering
Peak reached? only expect ‘Rugged to reign/terrain at the top’ on a trip mountaineering!!

Damn, this is some solid wordplay mixed into your punch. Nice bar here, no doubt.

I got shit u be fearing, keep hold of that wack spin, Rugged Eros got no wins worth rankin
U beat no one decent, if its ‘R.E. tha/Aretha greatest’ they mean the soul singer Franklin!!

This is another good punch with solid wordplay involved. Im not so sure the actual personal is true though. Ive never seen who Rugged beat. Either way, a good flip.

Ya tag raps go in the trash bin, Jack n Jesus spit with elocution, u dropped shit as retribution
Illest witnessed an execution, Rugg a god? like creationist theories u got ‘dismissed with Evolution!!’

This was a nice punch. I like how it was worded.

Fuck a diss ya disillusioned, playin the thug to im-press, man this dud is distressed
Just one punch from Cee, n we`ll ‘find Ruggs/drugs bodied’ without a blood or piss test!!

The concept is cool, but doesnt really hit as hard as some of your other stuff IMO.

This mug just aint blessed, any real battle u lost the fight, i`ll target n boss this dyke
Embarrass him! leave ‘Rug red and seein stars’ like welcome carpets on Oscar night!!

Ive seen alot of Rug punches. Not sure if you have, but this wasnt flipped as good as some of the others Ive read.

Defrost ya hype, any boasts are strange when you talk, coz I’ve arranged a new loss
Swagger jacker!, the only ‘Rugged Man’ that’s dope in rap is R.A. from New York!!

This was a fresh flip. Good punch. Only thing is that your flow is off to me. Loss/york dont rhyme at all IMO, but your accent might make a difference when being said. Took away from this bar for me though.

You better take it off quick, and put ‘7 up’ like the soft drink! man it’s great to thwart
When judged...like a date in court, Illest says ‘Rug be/rugby wack’ like we hate the sport!!

This punch was pretty funny IMO. The set up was shitty to me though.

Ya claims just don’t strike us, u got jailed for like 3 days, u aint stay with the lifers
But ya asshole still ‘received more prison males/mails’ than Lil Wayne did at Rikers!!

Lol. Good punch here.

Your pain don’t excite us, you`ll be gone next so listen, just conserve ambition
Get a life! coz you`ve been spendin more ‘time on site’ than a long served optician!!

This is a solid bar, but you couldve cloed it out with one of your funnier lines, ya know?

ALright, I think this was a pretty dope ass battle. Both guys came correct, and really could go either way. I reviewed my review, and it just seems that Cee-4 was more consistant with his punches. Rugged had better nameflips, IMO, but those couple bars that missed hurt. Both had solid flows and did well with the wordplay, no doubt, but I liked how Cee-4 incorporated his into his verse. Kind of a fresh look on things. You guys should do a round two, no matter who is declared the winner. This was a dope battle to read.

Vote- Cee 4. Based more more consistant punches and personals.

-- Tue Dec 21, 2010 11:59 pm --

Oh and would you gentlemen be kind enough to review this battle when you get the chance? It would be great if you could take a few minutes and break it down. Thanks.

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4-3 Cee4...the saga continues

nyc battle duns..url both came sick n it was reali close....

Personals -c4
Multies n flow -c4
nameplay- rugged came harder
consistency-tie,url both maintained nyc concepts n kept the flow stable
punches -c4
wordplay -c4 rugged to reign was mo creative and sounded beta than cee.era
puns -rugged,i liked da amateur mob attack pun/punch and the c4 in the dirt pun/punch..greatness...

Overall i vote: c4

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5-3 i win
someone close this please