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10 lines due monday night sometime depending on what u got doing this holiday weekend

Well shit, I wasnt expecting the due date to be so soon lol. Its not a problem though. I'll just go head and handle this.


Chiggity check.

i just moved it back a day before u posted cuz i seen u said something about it in the chat

Word thats whats up

-- Fri Nov 26, 2010 3:40 pm --

A PHLEBIAC is from the comic series Spawn, for those that dont know... I'm not giving you a bunch of links, but there is a pic below.

Yeah bro, we-can-match-wits, unlike you I dont needs hell's fire to keep-the-match-lit
Its obvious this fag-is, a fag, cuz we know you aint gettin pussy when you know what a phlebiac-is!!!! ( I mean, seriously...)

Since we-combatants, I say 'Wii'-'get-active', I'll light this joint and pass~it~crazy
You come to this site jumpin on this dawg's nuts is how we know this PHLE BI ACting~shady!!! *

Anyone here wouldnt have to try-to-rape-ya, this guy might even like-the-finger
Check the avy, this fuck couldn't manage a single hit in this match if he deemed himself Violator!!!! **

If a bitch gettin with duke she drinkin a whole-bottle in a whole-swallow with no-gargle
Because I'm betting bitches cant stand the look of you when this is ya fuckin role-model!!!



This guy thinks he's a comic? Stop~it, you more like Dave~Crockett, matter of fact, WHO ARE-YOU????
You bustin a musket, but get shanked by a harpoon, you better think radio if you wanna be a car-tune!!!! ***


*- (flea be acting)
**- (Violator Management had several 'stars' on their roster, but never was able to succeed while they had that roster)
(Violator is the name of the most known Phlebiac brother in the Spawn comic book series)
***- (Cartoon. Car tune... I mean, I dont think I should have to state the obvious, but w/e.)

Phleb's A Monster,Wit Mallet In Hand Know This Aint A Fair-Fight
Personals'll Have Ya "Lines Recede" Farther Than Your Hairline


Ya Bars~Be~On~Some~Gay~Flows,..Bet He Probably Got Caught-In-The-Covers
Only time U See ME March'n~On~A~Rainbow, I'll Literally Be Stomp'n-On-Kuhler

What Do U Battle-4? You Lack The Nadds-For-War, You'd Crap-Ya-Draws
While We "Watch You Pity Yaself In Your Written Rhymes" Like This Was Chaper Four

Cmon Man...Save-It-For-The-Fake, 12_3? Obviously "Blynd Never Made-It"-To-The-Greats!
N E 1 Else Notice 'Kuhler Fallin Off The Boards', Quicker Than "Paint'n In The Rain?

Im Wreck'n'em-Wit-Skilled-Bursts, High Is The Opposing Direction-That-His-Skill-Works
MurkKey Flows, Was A "Thing Of The Past", Since The Invention-Of-The-Filter!

I'll break this down by bars that I liked rather than going through catagories

Murk had 1 appealing bar to me: "If a bitch gettin with duke she drinkin a whole-bottle in a whole-swallow with no-gargle
Because I'm betting bitches cant stand the look of you when this is ya fuckin role-model!!!" - that was funny looking at the picture. Nice personal

Phle actually had two bars that were pretty good with a nice personal: "What Do U Battle-4? You Lack The Nadds-For-War, You'd Crap-Ya-Draws
While We "Watch You Pity Yaself In Your Written Rhymes" Like This Was Chaper Four

Cmon Man...Save-It-For-The-Fake, 12_3? Obviously "Blynd Never Made-It"-To-The-Greats!
N E 1 Else Notice 'Kuhler Fallin Off The Boards', Quicker Than "Paint'n In The Rain?"

Gotta go with the newbie (Phlebiac) on this one. Nice work Phlebiac

Yeah bro, we-can-match-wits, unlike you I dont needs hell's fire to keep-the-match-lit
Its obvious this fag-is, a fag, cuz we know you aint gettin pussy when you know what a phlebiac-is!!!!
first line was hella tight, second line was ok cept the fag-is a fag part was to repetitive and sorta spoilt the flow, but none the less a decent punch.

Since we-combatants, I say 'Wii'-'get-active', I'll light this joint and pass~it~crazy
You come to this site jumpin on this dawg's nuts is how we know this PHLE BI ACting~shady!!! *
nice flow in this one, with an ok nameplay, this hits

Anyone here wouldnt have to try-to-rape-ya, this guy might even like-the-finger
Check the avy, this fuck couldn't manage a single hit in this match if he deemed himself Violator!!!! **
bit of humuour and a generic style punch but ok

If a bitch gettin with duke she drinkin a whole-bottle in a whole-swallow with no-gargle
Because I'm betting bitches cant stand the look of you when this is ya fuckin role-model!!!
LMAO i like this bar

This guy thinks he's a comic? Stop~it, you more like Dave~Crockett, matter of fact, WHO ARE-YOU????
You bustin a musket, but get shanked by a harpoon, you better think radio if you wanna be a car-tune!!!! ***
multis wer on point in first line till it got to who are you, i see a resemblence to a personal with comic and cartoon being his names a character from cartoon/comic.
vs
Phleb's A Monster,Wit Mallet In Hand Know This Aint A Fair-Fight
Personals'll Have Ya "Lines Recede" Farther Than Your Hairline
attempt at a personal i felt wasnt so good due to the set up being off the topic of the punchline itself

Ya Bars~Be~On~Some~Gay~Flows,..Bet He Probably Got Caught-In-The-Covers
Only time U See ME March'n~On~A~Rainbow, I'll Literally Be Stomp'n-On-Kuhler
ok,

What Do U Battle-4? You Lack The Nadds-For-War, You'd Crap-Ya-Draws
While We "Watch You Pity Yaself In Your Written Rhymes" Like This Was
must be missing something wasnt any good, first line was good but fell right off

Cmon Man...Save-It-For-The-Fake, 12_3? Obviously "Blynd Never Made-It"-To-The-Greats!
N E 1 Else Notice 'Kuhler Fallin Off The Boards', Quicker Than "Paint'n In The Rain?
ok

Im Wreck'n'em-Wit-Skilled-Bursts, High Is The Opposing Direction-That-His-Skill-Works
MurkKey Flows, Was A "Thing Of The Past", Since The Invention-Of-The-Filter!
WTF didnt rhyme, no relation of set up to punch, flow was realy bad weak finisher in my opinion.

erm, right i felt youse both came to this battle average, no real 100% stick out bars that make the reader go WOW. i think the punches were lacking effect aswell on both sides, murk had some humerous and personals that did make up for lack of dope punches. so my vote goes to murk, in my opinion he was more consistent with punches,personals,funny lines. keep elivating both of you'se

MVGT MURK MCNASTY, no hard feeling phelbiac some good shit just not good enough keep excelling

peace

I enjoy giving thoroughly thought out votes,but I'm on a cellie not the PC and therefore have to be brief: MURK WON. Both threw punches but Murk's setups,sound manipulation,and rhyme scheme are superior. ESPECIALLY SETUPS. Murk's ''fag is/combatants'' flow is sound manipulation,an insufficiently appreciated skill usually evinced by us live spitters and should be lauded,esp. If the opponent didn't have any or sufficient quality sound manipulation.

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gosh darn .. maybe i should try harder

Phlebiac wrote:gosh darn .. maybe i should try harder

you have real promise,dawg. Just use punches as setups to other punches,have flips for peeps rippin your name,and regularly go 2 rounds. You'll improve so much in 10 battles that you'll surprise yourself

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Yeah bro, we-can-match-wits, unlike you I dont needs hell's fire to keep-the-match-lit
Its obvious this fag-is, a fag, cuz we know you aint gettin pussy when you know what a phlebiac-is!!!! ( I mean, seriously...)

HMM, not really feeling this, pluys you used match twice in your multies. meh average 2.5/5

Since we-combatants, I say 'Wii'-'get-active', I'll light this joint and pass~it~crazy
You come to this site jumpin on this dawg's nuts is how we know this PHLE BI ACting~shady!!! *

seemed hella forced, nice punch tho 3/5

Anyone here wouldnt have to try-to-rape-ya, this guy might even like-the-finger
Check the avy, this fuck couldn't manage a single hit in this match if he deemed himself Violator!!!! **

Multies were off, agian average punch 2/5

If a bitch gettin with duke she drinkin a whole-bottle in a whole-swallow with no-gargle
Because I'm betting bitches cant stand the look of you when this is ya fuckin role-model!!!

nope, hella forced again, multies were off, punch wasn't up to par

1.5/5

This guy thinks he's a comic? Stop~it, you more like Dave~Crockett, matter of fact, WHO ARE-YOU????
You bustin a musket, but get shanked by a harpoon, you better think radio if you wanna be a car-tune!!!! ***

your best bar imo ... 3.5/5

12.5


Phleb

Phleb's A Monster,Wit Mallet In Hand Know This Aint A Fair-Fight
Personals'll Have Ya "Lines Recede" Farther Than Your Hairline

LMFAO nice personal - 4/5

Ya Bars~Be~On~Some~Gay~Flows,..Bet He Probably Got Caught-In-The-Covers
Only time U See ME March'n~On~A~Rainbow, I'll Literally Be Stomp'n-On-Kuhler

not really feeling this, average lil punch tho 2/5


What Do U Battle-4? You Lack The Nadds-For-War, You'd Crap-Ya-Draws
While We "Watch You Pity Yaself In Your Written Rhymes" Like This Was Chaper Four

didn't ghet this bar at all ... 1/5

Cmon Man...Save-It-For-The-Fake, 12_3? Obviously "Blynd Never Made-It"-To-The-Greats!
N E 1 Else Notice 'Kuhler Fallin Off The Boards', Quicker Than "Paint'n In The Rain?

haha nice ^ 4/5

Im Wreck'n'em-Wit-Skilled-Bursts, High Is The Opposing Direction-That-His-Skill-Works
MurkKey Flows, Was A "Thing Of The Past", Since The Invention-Of-The-Filter!

lil forced but nice punch 2.5/5

13.5



vote: Phleb

Keep The Vote's Come'n Peeps

(3)Punches - Murk (Nothing really special; Phle's were a bit straight forward)
(3)Personals - Tie (Phle had more nameplays but none really hit)
(2)Rhymes - Phle (Better use)
(1)Flow - Phle (More original)
(1)Other - I like Murk's style, not of writing, but just the personality he brings with his battle verses

V/ 4-3 Murk

Def seen both drop harder. Off day for Murk and Phle was shaking off rust.

I don't want to break this down, it obviously isn't going to get me high. But I would have to say overall I gotta give it to Murk, his battle had more creativity to it. Both verses were alright, but Murk had the edge, Phelb was a little sloppy, his stuff didn't really make sense.

4-2


Uppin for votes