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just a piece a keyed up, and really started to feel.


holla


its November so
lets rememeber, virtues are essential so lets Treasure patients
make better staements, improve yourself cuz Pleasures Waiting
used tah sever greats when the gun flexed, left the leather shaking
used tah treasure weight, n saw more 'green' than the weather station
leave yah stash box on the dresser vacant ... but i'm starting to see the bigger picture
near death experience got me wanting to flip the scriptures
for what the shits worth, drop dah gun play and switch dah slick words
to affect and flip herbs, to respect a Quix verse and about the knowledge
got amazing amounts of class andf yet still dropped out of college
applied myself, and strived for perfection, tryed to survive the election
cuz politics had me appauled a bit, used to relie on the weapons
as for the music, I now use-it to disguise my aggrestion
won't compromise my attention untill i die and subside as a legend
put my name in the hall of fame, i'll go down in history
got in touch wid the emotions but all i found was missery

Ok, this was ill for a free. Your multis were on point and you had a couple of lines that stood out to me:

sed tah sever greats when the gun flexed, left the leather shaking
used tah treasure weight, n saw more 'green' than the weather station
^^^That was original

to affect and flip herbs, to respect a Quix verse and about the knowledge
got amazing amounts of class andf yet still dropped out of college
applied myself, and strived for perfection, tryed to survive the election
cuz politics had me appauled a bit, used to relie on the weapons
as for the music, I now use-it to disguise my aggrestion
won't compromise my attention untill i die and subside as a legend
^^^This whole part was ill from top to bottom. I'm feelin that college punch and the last 4 lines were nasty. The rhyme scheme along with the slew of multis was well thought out duke.

Keep droppin, I enjoyed this freestyle.

Not bad for a lil' key up, multies were a bit forced at times but that's gonna happen when you're just freestylin, structure was on point, flow was mad nice, overall som decent shit, stay up.

thanks to both yah, ya dig?

Word, Quix I was feelin this, especially since it was freestyled. I appreciate the real unveiled personal reflection u got goin on, its straight from your experience without any sort of front, just the truth. The structure of the flow is real fluid too, keepin the rhythm propellin forward nicely. Well done...

I was really diggin this bro; even though it was a keystyle it had 'realness' to it that just made it sound sick. keep droppin