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Its Etched into Stone so Let it be Known Im the Next to Explode,
Wit Perfection thru Flow, you'll see the Reflection of Ghost,
Im forever Reppin the ROWE, wanna get neck broke? jus Step in the Road,
A killer Severin Bones, its all about that, Cheddar & Gold, im great like December is Cold,
Its a Question of Life, Lesson of Strife jus Messin wit Mics,
Get the Concept of the Fight, cuz i can get COMPLEX when i Write,
So its Like your Testin the Fight, of a pitbull Ready to Strike yuh Neck witta Bite,
Yall Bettin on Hype, Im the Adrenaline Type who will leave yuh Dead in the Night,
No Time for the Games, cuz ill put yuh Mind in a State of panic, FlatLined in a Daze,
They say Crime doesnt Pay, but im stealin the Light from yuh Stage witta Rhyme fulla Rage,
The only way youll getta 10 is by puttin a Dyme on a Page, im still sick, Minus the Plague,
I get on the Grind when i Blaze, the mic like your chick when she sticks her Behind in my Face,
I can Keep Goin, Im so ill I can Sleep Flowin, droppin cold shit like Sleets Snowin,
In the Streets the Heats Showin, this Industries a Bleek Motion for geeks to keep Deep Throatin,
My Inks Loadin Free Flowin you beg to Be Chosen, but im the MC known as the Beast- Note IT!,
You keep yuh Sheets Golden, pissin the bed cuz yuh Dreams Holdin fake E-motions of Cheap Potions,

overall it was alright nice multies 8.5 outta 10

it was dope, nice multies in there, some spots get a tad repatative, but the flow is tight as hell and some of the punches were nice

9/10

thanx yall, i havent been writin lately, these were my first 2 besides the tourny verse that ive writtin in like a month or so....

Yah. Make sure you shorten your bars. So its easy when you want to write on beats etc.
It will be easier for us to read as well.
Good shit. This was a nice read. I also enjoyed the reference to me.

yeah i dont know why i write like that, but i do for some reason, prolly cuz one line is my line i spit to the beat, but thanx for the points of advice