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Scamming imposters, damn the thoughts of
a new world who plan disaster, damage prospered
the land is tossed up..into scrutiny, losin' me
my liability is only those composed to suitin' me
usually, I shoot 2 and 3 to king my aim and heat
anyone who claims the changin' me, stay in peace
rearrange the feet, and try to continue to exchange....
this piece, fame ya see ain't what it's meant to be
I vent and leave, return refreshed, my senses clean
losing your temper means, the temperment is hasta luego
thats that el fuego, I leave em all in trance and peril
is just the chance appareal ain't suitin' the nuicance
I use this music to boost the loose fitted jeans, ooO so abusive
smack a broad for asking for two figures, let the news hit cha
boost credentials, whose suspenseful but one you would listen to
watch me use this pencil, to retract and just say screw the symbols
if you as simple as a few words getting placed on a pad then use instrumentals
got a lot of pain that I really just couldn't bandage up
to out my mind to be ever taken advantage of, or used for love
I'm screwin' up, swervin' on this planet on the newest dust
tryna get my mind right till I lost it when I threw it up
stars and angels dangle from a ceiling in a house I don't know
babies crying, a girl I just met bout to leave but I won't go
I won't show, any emotion not knowin' where this route is goin'
I'm startin' to slow down, but the bottle keeps pouring for my opponent
whats going on? I can't seem to find a spot to get a lil' security
the only cure in me is to make myself seen in this impurity
wash myself off and take a step out that door and find the worth in dreams
I'm so lost, I can't find the patients, Arkham Asylum just had a break in
now I'm tryna figure out what I'm tryna say in this statement
I guess the only real thing to say now is I'm looking for inspiration....

Man I really liked this, and followed it really well with the beat. Once again, you seemed on your peotic shit, but this was on topic and written really well. I especially like how you opened and closed this. Maybe you couldve reworded some of the middle to help fit the flow more. Nice drop though fam. Keep em coming. One.

Yea, I liked this one QZ. Started off strong, kind of fell flat in them middle but ended it well. One to keep in the vault for audio. Flowed well.

Was kind of like a blowjob in a public bathroom, smells horrible, but makes you feel good anyways. Nice drop.