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She's Got Eyes Like The Ocean Deep..You Know What I Mean,The Blue Sea
She Looks Good In Everything She Wears Even When Its Fitting Her Loosely
Making Me Feel Like The Sun's Always Shining,Lights Up The Night When She's With Me
Smile Wide Everytime I Look Into Her Eyes,She's The One Reason Im Living
My Heart Beats Like A Bass Drum,This Girls Got Me Hooked Im Falling In Love
Cos Im Doing This For Me And You,All Of This Its Being Done For Us
Il Do Anything To Make You Happy,Havent Got Much But What I Have Its Her's
Trying To Pick Her Up When She's Low,Thats The Reason Im Writing This Verse
Cos I Love You Girl And I Dont Care If The Whole World Know's It
So I Guess This Is One Of The Many Way's That Im Willing To Show It

i like the concept..........sound like you in love hommie lol

Damn fam. This piece is really solid. Has a great flow to it, nice with the imagery and the emotional tip. I like how you worded everything. I mean, this just comes together. Great job here. One of the best pieces Ive seen from you.

cheers for the feed fellas.....yeah man i am

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Not a bad joint. Would've really been a closer had you put a twist to it (other than loving weed cause that's never been done before), but other than that. Solid flow.