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Okay, this beat is garbage in my opinion. Your flow needs work too, I hate slow flows that slow. I mean, it could work, you just need to add more to it. Lyrically it's not bad. The delivery needs work, it sounds VERY monotone. I'd say just work on the delivery and flow, it sounds like you have the lyrics part on point, but tried forcing the flow when you were writing this. Keep it up!

Thnx for the listen and feedback man. I'll take ya feed into consideration. Srry you didn't like beat, not sure if the song itself was your type of song, but overall monotone and flow are things independent to the song so if your noticing issues then they probably exist. So I'll try an add more life and energy to my flow, and hopefully produce a better song. It's kinda wierd hearings this response after I've heard a lot of great ones from people I don't know, but your response will be duly noted and taken into consideration. Thank you.

the beats kinda ill IMO... goes hella hard... nice choice of beat... ya flow sounds really good... need to up the vocals tho... i would have turned the beat down... just a hair more... n iuno what effect u had on the chorus but i really didn't like it... thats the only honest down fall u had was on the chorus... other than that bruh it sounded nice... keep it up...

it's like a suicide watch, they can't leave me alone.. hard line

the mix on the hook came in a little cloudy with the adlib tracks.. maybe lower the singin a bit, otherwise def feeling the direction you're taking with it

a living gps.... real cool lines. cool talk tracks under your verses.

i like this alot. i felt the beat matched your deivery nicely. good work bro.