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Sliding Through with it, holla.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fY7hsnS584k



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-- Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:05 am --

I dint like the hook at all and how you presented it. the verses were pretty nice, the rhyme scheme is nice, delivery is nice, good multi's in the bars.. idk just the hook takes the potential of the verses away IMO...

Fair enough, thanks.

Nice drop man, the hook was a little different. Maybe having a female singing with you and making your voice track lower would be SICK. All in all, not my style of rap, but definitly good word usage and delivery. Also listened to Over Yall- "ill stop your every move like your battling a mirror" shits nice dude. Side note, song seemed low, maybe youtube quality, but your hype track is a little too loud, scared me a couple times in headphones. Do your thing man.

I see where you were going as far as the hook was concerned, so its all good. Verses were cool and fit wit the topic of the track. Props, keep doin ya thing

I wasn't really feeling your flow and delivery on this one. You have the type of voice that makes me want to listen to you, so you have a lot of potential, lyrics were a weak point though. Try using some multis and some wordplay and your lyrics would stand out more.

Dang I need to hit this site up more.. ^^and thanks!! Lyrics are strait forward I know just "Sliding through" but thanks for the view holla where you need my ears.