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HATE HOW FUCC BOY RAPPERS N SHIT BRING THE GAME DOWN GOT TO LIVEN IT UP A LIL BIT

THIS BITCH IS TALKIN SHIT " LIKE HES REALLY REPPIN/
HOW YOU GUNNA KILL ME IF YOU'VE NEVA HAD A WEAPON?/

SWEARIN THAT YOU HOOD BUT ALL YOU DO IS TEXTIN/
THROWIN ALL DEM PUNCH-LINES BUT NONE OF EM CONNECTIN/
(SWITCH UP)
I SEE YOUR ALWAYS WHINING LIKE A HORMONAL BITCH/
STOP BLEEDIN OUT YA MOUTH ON SOME PERIOD SHIT/

YOU TALK ABOUT KIDS BUT TRUTH IS YOUR JUS A KID/
STOP BEIN A PUSSY WIT ALL THE DICK THAT YOU RID/

IF YOU WANNA FIGHT THE CHAMP THEN YOU KNOW WHO IT IS/
IL GO A WHOLE ROUND ON FIRE UNTIL I RIP YOU AGAIN/

YOUR RHYMES ARE LIKE YA GIRL ITS SOME CHEATIN ASS SHIT/
HOW THE FUCK YOU EVEN A RAPPER WHEN HALF YA LYRICS IS BITTEN?/

I SAY R.I.P BITCH REST IN PISS/
YOU ABOUT TO SEE FATE WHEN YOU CUMMMIN AT SLICK/(YOU FAGGOT)

IM LIKE A MENTAL PATEINT IM TO PAST SICK/
GO AHEAD N DUCK THIS TOPIC LIKE THE PUSSY YOU IS

This was aight. You had your bars structed well and it flowed nicely. Some of your punches and concepts were on point, and some missed because of how the sentences were worded... IMO. This is definitely better than anything Ive seen of his though, so if he does get at this, Im sure it wouldnt be close. That dudes real wack aha. Anyhow, keep elevating bro.

Oh and if you have time, would you leave some feed on this piece? Thanks.

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Eh... bunch of pussy/period like punches are never good for usin' in disses unless you connect in some sort of unique way that isn't played out.. This was iigh'.. Maybe you got at dude w/ a few personals but i dunno cuz I'm new on this site.. But iigh' diss doe..