Hip Hop Forum

Here's a lil sample of Boston Dutch
http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_5379573

First off, I think gettin someone to mix your vocals better is an important step to elevating this. The flow is fine, no qualms there. Lyrically, I'm not feeling it. Your delivery style is alright, with a bit better vocal mixing I think ur style 'd match up well with the beat. Overall, not a bad drop, not the kinda track I'm gonna listen to more than once, but decent for what it is...

thanx more feedback please

the mix is rough but man i used to stay in the bean and im feelin this flow.... "MAKE ME EIFFLE TOWER.." brain dance, lmao... the loose bowels line was a lil cliche tho homie but it's all good. clean the mix up and keep the bars coming. always keep your words fresh. what are you recording on? the mix gets real murky at the end and thats taking away from what would otherwise be a ill delivery.. catch me rollin, thru the streets of boston.

dorcester standup, roxbury standup, randolph standup

Yeah definitely get some1 to mix this better and it would improve this a whole lot.. You got that energy and voice to make this a killer of a track, lyrics were decent, you rode the beat pretty well.. the beat was pretty sick also.. overall this is dope.. good stuff

If you can feed back on these to tracks
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/windy ... 14296.html

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/dead- ... 15922.html

Also any other you just see floating in the chamber.. Appreciate it

thanx 4 tha feed back ppl keep it comin....