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word. check.

-- Fri Oct 29, 2010 11:31 am --

u got 24 hrs to check in

Expos:
ScottJames is a biter? http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/scott ... 13182.html

ScottJames interview dissin on Evolution

Complexity wrote: Ekoms or Evolution?

ScottJames wrote:missing. over rated. retired? versatile, friendly

Wanting to go big on text-ceeing?

ScottJames wrote:man u know i really hope to make it someday. i really wanna read my battles over the radio and become the first textcee to make it big!

Oh yea, and I can't upload his picture but y'all can look it up on the ScottJames vs. M-vario battle... for point of reference, dude has chubby cheeks.

Verse
this bitch is known for "stealin to copy"-- but he gets away with winnin his battles "scott-free"
although the "bitch in scott james" is screaming you COTT ME!

you ain't even in the top 3- it's gotta hurt this stupid dude that he's fallen off
cuz the "belt looks funny on you" like persecuted jews in the holocaust

remindin me to check in TWICE? yo illest, time your watch
this dude "hangs around the site" more than i-candy or mo-zilla firefox

i'll flip and smash this aristocrat- leave this guy-cold (geico) with the "whip and lash"
don't diss "evolution" cause after i wreck you, you'll look JUST LIKE yer autistic dad
vvvv
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=48eo2D76Zjo

Don't trip in fact cause there's no way that you could battle with me
Won't be the first James to lose to "better shots" cuz you couldn't "handle the Heat"

Dude is deprived of his talents, no need for "findin his balance"
you could be on "even ground with ya competition"... still couldn't "rise to the challenge!!!"

you'll be text-ceein for months and weeks, still never be readin a public piece
you'll only "blow up" battlin "cee4" again or feedin your chubby cheeks

fuck a battle... you sway more decisions than George Bush stackin Florida votes, dude
plus you got so many dickriders, your "ballz are draggin" more than Goku's (Dragon Ball Z)

-- Mon Nov 01, 2010 3:11 pm --

48 hrs for your response

i will post tonight.

-- Tue Nov 02, 2010 9:44 pm --

Blah..







Knowmad?
Nah, Hes MAD n he KNOWS That He BLOWS More Than The CRACK IN HIS NOSE..
Cuz If A Bitch Is Screamin "OHH KNOW" Then She Prolly ACCIDENT PRONE!!
Nomad Go BACK TO YA HOME!! Cuz Like Cell Phones Ya TEXT IS PREDICTIVE..
Ya CHECKS IS RESTRICTED, Cuz U Aint A Nomad.. U Jus Constantly GETTIN-EVICTED!!
Ya HEAD'LL GET LIFTED!! So Listen, U Aint Takin My Belt, I Dont CROWN QUEERS..
Leave This CLOWN SMEARED! Cuz Take A Look, Ur The Only "KNOW Name" AROUND HERE!!
POUND SPEARS Down Ya Mouth, Ironic, Cuz I Heard U Gotta PASSION TO SWALLOW GAYS
Plus I've Heard Ya Audios, U Got Less Male/Mail Delivery Than NATIONAL HOLIDAYS!!
SMASHED When I MAUL YA FACE! Yeah I Spit That MALARIA FLOW To BURY THIS HOE..
I'm The Champ.. You Couldnt Touch Number 1 If U Was Dialin Outta AREA-CODE!!
He In Denail, He SEES NO CLARITY Plus His Lyrics R Poor, They NEED A CHARITY..
Youll Never Get Airplay, Only Time Ya Rhymes R Radio Active Is On CHEMO THERAPY!!
Tempt My EGO-SPARINGLY.. Cuz My FLOWS SMASH THIS FUCK Low BLOWS SHATTER GUTS
This OLD RAPPER SUX!! Text, Audio, Fists, Shit U Couldnt Beat Me KNOWMAD-OR-WHAT!!
So Fuck This ABERRATIONAL TEEN.. U Couldn't See Me With A NAVIGATIONAL SCREEN..
I Bet His Ass Is Hard, Cuz Peep His Avatar, Its Obvious This Dude Has A FASCINATION FOR ME!!

Knowmad

this bitch is known for "stealin to copy"-- but he gets away with winnin his battles "scott-free"
although the "bitch in scott james" is screaming you COTT ME!
::: first lines cool 2nds nameplays real forced not feeling it - b cup

you ain't even in the top 3- it's gotta hurt this stupid dude that he's fallen off
cuz the "belt looks funny on you" like persecuted jews in the holocaust
::: don't get his line, maybe you mean the arm thing? i dunno - a cup

remindin me to check in TWICE? yo illest, time your watch
this dude "hangs around the site" more than i-candy or mo-zilla firefox
::: eh pretty cool concepts been used before but not bad - bloated b cup

i'll flip and smash this aristocrat- leave this guy-cold (geico) with the "whip and lash"
don't diss "evolution" cause after i wreck you, you'll look JUST LIKE yer autistic dad
vvvv
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=48eo2D76Zjo
::: last syllable makes the 1st's wordplay off, not really a personal in the second since its just the same name btw that guy on the vid killed it so - b cup

Don't trip in fact cause there's no way that you could battle with me
Won't be the first James to lose to "better shots" cuz you couldn't "handle the Heat"
::: james/heats pretty predictable still not badly done - c cup

Dude is deprived of his talents, no need for "findin his balance"
you could be on "even ground with ya competition"... still couldn't "rise to the challenge!!!"
::: eh this is ok - b cup

you'll be text-ceein for months and weeks, still never be readin a public piece
you'll only "blow up" battlin "cee4" again or feedin your chubby cheeks
::: shit he said was obviously in jest so not a very potent personal - b cup

fuck a battle... you sway more decisions than George Bush stackin Florida votes, dude
plus you got so many dickriders, your "ballz are draggin" more than Goku's (Dragon Ball Z)
::: heard the dbz concept before it was set up better than most lines i've seen though so - c cup

overall you didn't do bad but should've realized it wouldn'tve been enough to win against somebody like scott, i expected you to be better in text some lines seemed a lil too forced textcee-ish coming from one of the better audio guys on the site, in the future i'd work on solid lines that flow smoothly & effectively you tended to cram a lil too much in and didn't have too great a rhythm/structure overall

ScottJames

Nah, Hes MAD n he KNOWS That He BLOWS More Than The CRACK IN HIS NOSE..
Cuz If A Bitch Is Screamin "OHH KNOW" Then She Prolly ACCIDENT PRONE!!
::: solid nameflip end of the set-up lines kinda forced though unless he really has a crack in his nose - b cup

Nomad Go BACK TO YA HOME!! Cuz Like Cell Phones Ya TEXT IS PREDICTIVE..
Ya CHECKS IS RESTRICTED, Cuz U Aint A Nomad.. U Jus Constantly GETTIN-EVICTED!!
::: good line not sure predictive is a word but anyway good enough so - c cup

Ya HEAD'LL GET LIFTED!! So Listen, U Aint Takin My Belt, I Dont CROWN QUEERS..
Leave This CLOWN SMEARED! Cuz Take A Look, Ur The Only "KNOW Name" AROUND HERE!!
::: eh decent flip but nothing impressive - b cup

POUND SPEARS Down Ya Mouth, Ironic, Cuz I Heard U Gotta PASSION TO SWALLOW GAYS
Plus I've Heard Ya Audios, U Got Less Male/Mail Delivery Than NATIONAL HOLIDAYS!!
::: fairly universal but i liked it overall - c cup

SMASHED When I MAUL YA FACE! Yeah I Spit That MALARIA FLOW To BURY THIS HOE..
I'm The Champ.. You Couldnt Touch Number 1 If U Was Dialin Outta AREA-CODE!!
::: another universal punch wordplays ok but wasn't feeling it too much - b cup

He In Denail, He SEES NO CLARITY Plus His Lyrics R Poor, They NEED A CHARITY..
Youll Never Get Airplay, Only Time Ya Rhymes R Radio Active Is On CHEMO THERAPY!!
::: liked the wordplay set-up could've been better still the best line i've seen so far so - d cup

Tempt My EGO-SPARINGLY.. Cuz My FLOWS SMASH THIS FUCK Low BLOWS SHATTER GUTS
This OLD RAPPER SUX!! Text, Audio, Fists, Shit U Couldnt Beat Me KNOWMAD-OR-WHAT!!
::: set-ups real fillerish wordplay doesn't really connect at the end - a cup

So Fuck This ABERRATIONAL TEEN.. U Couldn't See Me With A NAVIGATIONAL SCREEN..
I Bet His Ass Is Hard, Cuz His Avatar, Its Obvious This Dude Has A FASCINATION FOR ME!!
::: alright line could've been worded alot better though - b cup

not too bad overall obviously not up to snuff with your usual drops though, seemed a bit rushed and fillerish with alotta the rhymes but you had a few good jabs and did enough to take it via consistancy

vote - Scott James nicer tits overall

this bitch is known for "stealin to copy"-- but he gets away with winnin his battles "scott-free"
although the "bitch in scott james" is screaming you COTT ME!

Clean, I thought. 4/5

you ain't even in the top 3- it's gotta hurt this stupid dude that he's fallen off
cuz the "belt looks funny on you" like persecuted jews in the holocaust

Cause Jews were skinny or something? Not really connecting. 2/5 for multis

remindin me to check in TWICE? yo illest, time your watch
this dude "hangs around the site" more than i-candy or mo-zilla firefox

I thought this was clean, too. 4/5

i'll flip and smash this aristocrat- leave this guy-cold (geico) with the "whip and lash"
don't diss "evolution" cause after i wreck you, you'll look JUST LIKE yer autistic dad
vvvv
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=48eo2D76Zjo

wordplay was good, but the punch didn't really land cause like jesus said, that guy fuckin killed it in the video. 3/5

Don't trip in fact cause there's no way that you could battle with me
Won't be the first James to lose to "better shots" cuz you couldn't "handle the Heat"

I thought it was put together nicely. 4/5

Dude is deprived of his talents, no need for "findin his balance"
you could be on "even ground with ya competition"... still couldn't "rise to the challenge!!!"

Universal as fuck, but it all fit together well. 3.5/5

you'll be text-ceein for months and weeks, still never be readin a public piece
you'll only "blow up" battlin "cee4" again or feedin your chubby cheeks

3.5/5 yeah the dude was kidding, but he still flipped it nicely.

fuck a battle... you sway more decisions than George Bush stackin Florida votes, dude
plus you got so many dickriders, your "ballz are draggin" more than Goku's (Dragon Ball Z)

5/5 that hit fuckin hard to me

Scott James



Knowmad?

Nah, Hes MAD n he KNOWS That He BLOWS More Than The CRACK IN HIS NOSE..
Cuz If A Bitch Is Screamin "OHH KNOW" Then She Prolly ACCIDENT PRONE!!

4/5 haha. had me laughin

Nomad Go BACK TO YA HOME!! Cuz Like Cell Phones Ya TEXT IS PREDICTIVE..
Ya CHECKS IS RESTRICTED, Cuz U Aint A Nomad.. U Jus Constantly GETTIN-EVICTED!!

4/5 hahaha yup, yup

Ya HEAD'LL GET LIFTED!! So Listen, U Aint Takin My Belt, I Dont CROWN QUEERS..
Leave This CLOWN SMEARED! Cuz Take A Look, Ur The Only "KNOW Name" AROUND HERE!!

5/5 damn, clean name flip

POUND SPEARS Down Ya Mouth, Ironic, Cuz I Heard U Gotta PASSION TO SWALLOW GAYS
Plus I've Heard Ya Audios, U Got Less Male/Mail Delivery Than NATIONAL HOLIDAYS!!

3/5 I didn't feel this as much as the other ones.

SMASHED When I MAUL YA FACE! Yeah I Spit That MALARIA FLOW To BURY THIS HOE..
I'm The Champ.. You Couldnt Touch Number 1 If U Was Dialin Outta AREA-CODE!!

3.5/5 clean usage, but universal and didnt hit hard like the others

He In Denail, He SEES NO CLARITY Plus His Lyrics R Poor, They NEED A CHARITY..
Youll Never Get Airplay, Only Time Ya Rhymes R Radio Active Is On CHEMO THERAPY!!

5/5 damn.

Tempt My EGO-SPARINGLY.. Cuz My FLOWS SMASH THIS FUCK Low BLOWS SHATTER GUTS
This OLD RAPPER SUX!! Text, Audio, Fists, Shit U Couldnt Beat Me KNOWMAD-OR-WHAT!!

2/5 hmm..

So Fuck This ABERRATIONAL TEEN.. U Couldn't See Me With A NAVIGATIONAL SCREEN..
I Bet His Ass Is Hard, Cuz Peep His Avatar, Its Obvious This Dude Has A FASCINATION FOR ME!!

4/5 damn, this was clean... but coulda been flipped way better



Vote: scott

well since my vote dont count anyways cuz im new to this shit neva really heard of the whole text battlin shit kinda wierd jus do audio but heres how i broke it down,

this bitch is known for "stealin to copy"-- but he gets away with winnin his battles "scott-free"
although the "bitch in scott james" is screaming you COTT ME!
(the concept is cool but its a little forced)

you ain't even in the top 3- it's gotta hurt this stupid dude that he's fallen off
cuz the "belt looks funny on you" like persecuted jews in the holocaust
(this shit is way forced on tha 2nd half its to many words could you spit this on a beat??)

remindin me to check in TWICE? yo illest, time your watch
this dude "hangs around the site" more than i-candy or mo-zilla firefox
(clever)

i'll flip and smash this aristocrat- leave this guy-cold (geico) with the "whip and lash"
don't diss "evolution" cause after i wreck you, you'll look JUST LIKE yer autistic dad
(the aristocrat shit seem kinda played out like its been done so many times by so many artists...dont see much originality to it)

vvvv
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=48eo2D76Zjo

Don't trip in fact cause there's no way that you could battle with me
Won't be the first James to lose to "better shots" cuz you couldn't "handle the Heat"
( i like the 2nd half of this talkin bou lebron james n the heat nice punch sound like it came out my song on myspace though...www.myspace.com/slickaman1 and the song called the greatest)

Dude is deprived of his talents, no need for "findin his balance"
you could be on "even ground with ya competition"... still couldn't "rise to the challenge!!!"
(nice)
you'll be text-ceein for months and weeks, still never be readin a public piece
you'll only "blow up" battlin "cee4" again or feedin your chubby cheeks
(havent been around long enuf to know what that means)
fuck a battle... you sway more decisions than George Bush stackin Florida votes, dude
plus you got so many dickriders, your "ballz are draggin" more than Goku's (Dragon Ball Z)
(this is from a championship?? ya endin should be the hardest bars you got n that shit was whack to me) btw if this was audio it would be a 16 this textin shit jus diff i guess

-- Fri Nov 05, 2010 4:36 pm --

Knowmad?
Nah, Hes MAD n he KNOWS That He BLOWS More Than The CRACK IN HIS NOSE..
Cuz If A Bitch Is Screamin "OHH KNOW" Then She Prolly ACCIDENT PRONE!!
(wordplay is nice made me chuckle)
Nomad Go BACK TO YA HOME!! Cuz Like Cell Phones Ya TEXT IS PREDICTIVE..
Ya CHECKS IS RESTRICTED, Cuz U Aint A Nomad.. U Jus Constantly GETTIN-EVICTED!!
(you could of done more wit that^)
Ya HEAD'LL GET LIFTED!! So Listen, U Aint Takin My Belt, I Dont CROWN QUEERS..
Leave This CLOWN SMEARED! Cuz Take A Look, Ur The Only "KNOW Name" AROUND HERE!!
(again wordplay is cool but concept is aigh)

POUND SPEARS Down Ya Mouth, Ironic, Cuz I Heard U Gotta PASSION TO SWALLOW GAYS
Plus I've Heard Ya Audios, U Got Less Male/Mail Delivery Than NATIONAL HOLIDAYS!!
(AGAIN YA WORDPLAY IS SICK)
SMASHED When I MAUL YA FACE! Yeah I Spit That MALARIA FLOW To BURY THIS HOE..
I'm The Champ.. You Couldnt Touch Number 1 If U Was Dialin Outta AREA-CODE!!
(better)
He In Denail, He SEES NO CLARITY Plus His Lyrics R Poor, They NEED A CHARITY..
Youll Never Get Airplay, Only Time Ya Rhymes R Radio Active Is On CHEMO THERAPY!!
(you need ya punches to hit like this in ever bar)
Tempt My EGO-SPARINGLY.. Cuz My FLOWS SMASH THIS FUCK Low BLOWS SHATTER GUTS
This OLD RAPPER SUX!! Text, Audio, Fists, Shit U Couldnt Beat Me KNOWMAD-OR-WHAT!!
(i kinda like ya scheme n shit on this)
So Fuck This ABERRATIONAL TEEN.. U Couldn't See Me With A NAVIGATIONAL SCREEN..
I Bet His Ass Is Hard, Cuz Peep His Avatar, Its Obvious This Dude Has A FASCINATION FOR ME!!
(your ending went harder but still it needs to be the knockout punch that jus puts you on top hands down)

AGAIN I WOULD SAY THIS WAS A 16 IF IT WAS ON A BEAT AND YOU WAS DOIN AUDIO

preciate the votes so far. Slicka, u need 50 posts to vote but thanks for the breakdown, thats dope.

2-0 ME

hate to free post, but this is a text battle. forget the audio shit when you reading a text battle. two entirely different things.

^vote.

scott james cat sweep

i really dont want to break this down bar for bar so lets just say that slicka breakdown was accurate

vote james

yo its a wrap. close this ish up. thanx for the votes!

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If Knowmad wants to contest that the last two votes do not count due to no one breaking down the bars as explained, then I will have to re-open this up.


Knowmad, if you feel this was closed before it should have been, then send me a PM and I will open it back up. I haven't seen a complaint from you reguarding this matter, so Im assuming you agree this is closed.


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