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only explained votes count

no categories just whoever verse you felt was the best to win the battle

no DR, no flipping

due in 48hrs sonny

-- Sun Oct 31, 2010 7:22 am --

in Scopes Of Rifles is where im Smokin Rivals, DANG MY FLOW IS VILE/
and dawg you'll get 'beat with bars' like ya NAME WAS GOMER PILE!/
you ride with teks? you'll hear laughter when they say this HOMOS A THUG/
i dont think this Guys a Threat, so like a Piru Set ill have em THROWIN UP BLOOD/
You aint on the block SLANGIN DRUGS, if theres Beef you wont BANG THEM GUNS/
Yeah Real Recognize Real, so if you dont know who I am then your the STRANGER SON!/
Im Grippin a Glock, you trippin if you thinkin you can TEST ME, STOP IT!/
ill Hit em with Shots to put 'Quix' ina Box like a NESTLE PRODUCT/
you a gangsta? nah, never catch the METAL ON THIS DUDES HIP/
only time you get 'Two Thumbs Thrown Up' is when JEFFREY DAHMERS PUKIN!/
This bitch is Pissed I voted against him, man ima RIP YOU TO SHREDS/
and after i HIT EM WITH LEAD, he should change his name to QUICK AND THE DEAD!!/
To be honest ya RAPPIN IS JUST TOO LAME, ill CLAP AND GET THIS DUDE SLAIN/
so yall can watch 'Q' get put in a hole like SCRATCHING IN A POOL GAME!/
Damnit im an Animal, ill beat you with a fuckin HAMMER TILL YOU DEAD BITCH/
or Buck the Gauge an have em Stuck in Place like a Soldier STANDING AT ATTENTION/



alright sonny, where the fuck you at.

small disclaimer: the real recognize real line refers to his sig, unless he does a bitch move and changes it. the sig said "real recognize real, who the fuck is thenobleone"

if you dont understand any of my other lines then you have no business voting. i dont want to hear shit about caps, its what i do. lets try and keep this fair lol

-- Mon Nov 01, 2010 11:09 am --

i do believe thats two vote against you sir

tell scott to hurry with your verse so you can post it lol

HAHA, Pussy!


we don't need glasses to SEE THAT YOUR NOTHING; yous a closet fag, we'll never SEE-YA IN PUBLIC
in your DREAMS YOU GET FUCKED-WITH cuz the only time people 'screaming N.O' are BEING ABDUCTED
PLEASE, YOU AIN'T TOUGH KID. I'm a rip you apart from all ANGLES THEN I'LL BUST YAH NOSE
leave ya MANGLED AND WITH NOTHING HO! cuz we only see 'T.O with da Bills' when the BENGALS ARE IN BUFFALO
if we TANGLE I'M A BUCK THIS JOKE, thats a FACT AND A BRAWLS GREAT i'll leave you STABBED IN A HALL-WAY
In FACT i'VE BEEN CALLED GREAT so i'm a put more 'Red dots on your face' than when ALADAIN DOES BROADWAY
your bars WHACK AND THERE ALL GAY; ya'll say i fell off of mah game, but I STILL CAN BREAK THESE CHUMPS
so come up with some new shit ... cuz it seems to be the 'same old gay episode' like WILL AND GRACE RE-RUNS
i guess we can't blame you for those care bear raps ... cuz thats who someONE YOUR AGE MIGHT-HUG
you should be embarassed of wut ya TYPE-UP cuz your 'Bars only got soft punches' like UNDERAGE NIGHTCLUBS
if you asking ILLEST? i'm THE MEMBER TO HATE, but Noble beating Quix is something THEY NEVER WOULD SAY
i'm both CLEVER AND GREAT, so after this battle you'll put the 'Red Dot on yah own chest' like REMEMBERENCE DAY
you can't WEATHER THE WAY i rip yah organs out with the GEMS THAT I MAKE to send yah FRIENDS TO YAH WAKE
look, you can pretend to be straight, but like 'Neil Patrick Harris' your still just a FAG at the END OF THE DAY
i'm a king to you dog ... you should BOW IN-FRONT OF Q your weak so look dog, NOW I'M DONE WITH YOU
you got boy toys and 'Gay Friends' so watch me 'Hang TheN (obleone) like COW-A-BUNGA DUDE (hang 10 ... get it)

expos: They don't serve alcohal in underage sportsbars or nightclubs)

Buy underage sports bars or underage night clubs he prolly means underage dance clubs.

-- Mon Nov 01, 2010 10:00 pm --

Noble:
Your verse was straight... But why you talking about gun play when your doing JUST a TEXT BATTLE? Like for real dude talking about straps, gats, carrying heat, repping a set is really overrated online to me.

The line that stuck out too me was:

"To be honest ya RAPPIN IS JUST TOO LAME, ill CLAP AND GET THIS DUDE SLAIN/
so yall can watch 'Q' get put in a hole like SCRATCHING IN A POOL GAME!/"

^^^That was real nice.

Quix:
Dawg you had a lot of words in your verse lol, I really liked the word play, and I understood the underage night club line. To me it went both ways, when you was talking about his punch's hitting as hard as underage night clubs or some shit I took it as in they don't hit at all. lol

I liked this line from you:

"i'm both CLEVER AND GREAT, so after this battle you'll put the 'Red Dot on yah own chest' like REMEMBERENCE DAY
you can't WEATHER THE WAY i rip yah organs out with the GEMS THAT I MAKE to send yah FRIENDS TO YAH WAKE"

Really nice, maybe cut down some of the words in the bars? get it straight to the point?

Both MC's did there thing. But my Vote Has To Go Too

V/ Quix

To me both need to up on the Vocabulary.

Breakdown

Noble's Verse

in Scopes Of Rifles is where im Smokin Rivals, DANG MY FLOW IS VILE/
and dawg you'll get 'beat with bars' like ya NAME WAS GOMER PILE!/

Ha ha. This was a cool opener. Nothing personal, and a played concept, but flipped in an original way. I like this bar.

you ride with teks? you'll hear laughter when they say this HOMOS A THUG/
i dont think this Guys a Threat, so like a Piru Set ill have em THROWIN UP BLOOD/

Solid bar here. You kept to the concept thru the whole bar and I thought the punch was cool. Not sure if anyone knows what a Piru Set is, but if you know about gangs, then this punch is solid.

You aint on the block SLANGIN DRUGS, if theres Beef you wont BANG THEM GUNS/
Yeah Real Recognize Real, so if you dont know who I am then your the STRANGER SON!/

Not sure if anyone knows this as well, but this bar is a personal, since Quix says that he did (or maybe still does) sell drugs and so forth. I thought the concept for the punch was cool, maybe couldve been worded a little differently to hit harder though.

Im Grippin a Glock, you trippin if you thinkin you can TEST ME, STOP IT!/
ill Hit em with Shots to put 'Quix' ina Box like a NESTLE PRODUCT/

Lol this is a cool nameflip and a solid punch

you a gangsta? nah, never catch the METAL ON THIS DUDES HIP/
only time you get 'Two Thumbs Thrown Up' is when JEFFREY DAHMERS PUKIN!/

The 'gangsta' references are starting to be a little more redundant now... I like the punch here, but its pretty universal.

This bitch is Pissed I voted against him, man ima RIP YOU TO SHREDS/
and after i HIT EM WITH LEAD, he should change his name to QUICK AND THE DEAD!!/

Not hard hitting to me....

To be honest ya RAPPIN IS JUST TOO LAME, ill CLAP AND GET THIS DUDE SLAIN/
so yall can watch 'Q' get put in a hole like SCRATCHING IN A POOL GAME!/

Nice nameflip again here.

Damnit im an Animal, ill beat you with a fuckin HAMMER TILL YOU DEAD BITCH/
or Buck the Gauge an have em Stuck in Place like a Soldier STANDING AT ATTENTION/

For a closer, this wasnt really holding up. No personal or nameflip or anything like that.

Quix's Verse

we don't need glasses to SEE THAT YOUR NOTHING; yous a closet fag, we'll never SEE-YA IN PUBLIC
in your DREAMS YOU GET FUCKED-WITH cuz the only time people 'screaming N.O' are BEING ABDUCTED

Okay, when I first read this bar, I was reading it as N, then O, just because of the way you have it typed out. After reading it again, I saw it lol. Pretty solid punch/nameflip and a good set-up too. Nice opener.

PLEASE, YOU AIN'T TOUGH KID. I'm a rip you apart from all ANGLES THEN I'LL BUST YAH NOSE
leave ya MANGLED AND WITH NOTHING HO! cuz we only see 'T.O with da Bills' when the BENGALS ARE IN BUFFALO

Im not sure what TO has to do with any of this. This completely misses for me.

if we TANGLE I'M A BUCK THIS JOKE, thats a FACT AND A BRAWLS GREAT i'll leave you STABBED IN A HALL-WAY
In FACT i'VE BEEN CALLED GREAT so i'm a put more 'Red dots on your face' than when ALADAIN DOES BROADWAY

This is a nice punch. Universal though. No personal or nameflip or anything.

your bars WHACK AND THERE ALL GAY; ya'll say i fell off of mah game, but I STILL CAN BREAK THESE CHUMPS
so come up with some new shit ... cuz it seems to be the 'same old gay episode' like WILL AND GRACE RE-RUNS

This shit had me laughing, but universal once again.

i guess we can't blame you for those care bear raps ... cuz thats who someONE YOUR AGE MIGHT-HUG
you should be embarassed of wut ya TYPE-UP cuz your 'Bars only got soft punches' like UNDERAGE NIGHTCLUBS

This was a cool concept, but for some reason Im thinking he's over 21? Either way, universal but still good.

if you asking ILLEST? i'm THE MEMBER TO HATE, but Noble beating Quix is something THEY NEVER WOULD SAY
i'm both CLEVER AND GREAT, so after this battle you'll put the 'Red Dot on yah own chest' like REMEMBERENCE DAY

Another red dot reference...? This is aight. Not as hard hitting as the last one. Once again, nothing personal.

you can't WEATHER THE WAY i rip yah organs out with the GEMS THAT I MAKE to send yah FRIENDS TO YAH WAKE
look, you can pretend to be straight, but like 'Neil Patrick Harris' your still just a FAG at the END OF THE DAY

Lol this was funny. Once again, universal.

i'm a king to you dog ... you should BOW IN-FRONT OF Q your weak so look dog, NOW I'M DONE WITH YOU
you got boy toys and 'Gay Friends' so watch me 'Hang TheN (obleone) like COW-A-BUNGA DUDE

Ehhh this didnt really hit hard to me. I know what you were getting at but it was worded kinda weird.


Personals/Nameflips- NobleOne. Quix used more universal lines.
Punches- Both were solid. While Quix had a couple that made me laugh, Noble was more consistant at directly aimed with his punches. I would rule this a tie.
Flow- Quix had some good multi use, Noble's lines werent as long. In the end, I found both were easy to follow, so I rule this a tie.

Vote- NobleOne. Just more personal, consitant and direct punches. Both had solid battle verses. Nice battle. I enjoyed reading it.

lol @ Murk explaining Nobles "Personals"

1-1 thanks for voting

EXPO:

The T.O line - his initials are (T)heNoble(O)ne hence T.O

I'm not going to comment on the bars, but I will give them a 1 or a 0. Self explanatory what that means. If each bar needs to be explained then I will when I have time.

in Scopes Of Rifles is where im Smokin Rivals, DANG MY FLOW IS VILE/
and dawg you'll get 'beat with bars' like ya NAME WAS GOMER PILE!/

0
you ride with teks? you'll hear laughter when they say this HOMOS A THUG/
i dont think this Guys a Threat, so like a Piru Set ill have em THROWIN UP BLOOD/

1

You aint on the block SLANGIN DRUGS, if theres Beef you wont BANG THEM GUNS/
Yeah Real Recognize Real, so if you dont know who I am then your the STRANGER SON!/

1

Im Grippin a Glock, you trippin if you thinkin you can TEST ME, STOP IT!/
ill Hit em with Shots to put 'Quix' ina Box like a NESTLE PRODUCT/

.5. I like this bar, but the end didn't connect so it is a half.

you a gangsta? nah, never catch the METAL ON THIS DUDES HIP/
only time you get 'Two Thumbs Thrown Up' is when JEFFREY DAHMERS PUKIN!/

1. Nice. Creative with that one.

This bitch is Pissed I voted against him, man ima RIP YOU TO SHREDS/
and after i HIT EM WITH LEAD, he should change his name to QUICK AND THE DEAD!!/

0

To be honest ya RAPPIN IS JUST TOO LAME, ill CLAP AND GET THIS DUDE SLAIN/
so yall can watch 'Q' get put in a hole like SCRATCHING IN A POOL GAME!/

1

Damnit im an Animal, ill beat you with a fuckin HAMMER TILL YOU DEAD BITCH/
or Buck the Gauge an have em Stuck in Place like a Soldier STANDING AT ATTENTION/

1

Overall: Solid verse. 2 of the bars were kind of corny, imo.

5.5

we don't need glasses to SEE THAT YOUR NOTHING; yous a closet fag, we'll never SEE-YA IN PUBLIC
in your DREAMS YOU GET FUCKED-WITH cuz the only time people 'screaming N.O' are BEING ABDUCTED

1


PLEASE, YOU AIN'T TOUGH KID. I'm a rip you apart from all ANGLES THEN I'LL BUST YAH NOSE
leave ya MANGLED AND WITH NOTHING HO! cuz we only see 'T.O with da Bills' when the BENGALS ARE IN BUFFALO

0. See where you're going, but his initials are technicslly T.N.O. so it's irrelevant.

if we TANGLE I'M A BUCK THIS JOKE, thats a FACT AND A BRAWLS GREAT i'll leave you STABBED IN A HALL-WAY
In FACT i'VE BEEN CALLED GREAT so i'm a put more 'Red dots on your face' than when ALADAIN DOES BROADWAY

1


your bars WHACK AND THERE ALL GAY; ya'll say i fell off of mah game, but I STILL CAN BREAK THESE CHUMPS
so come up with some new shit ... cuz it seems to be the 'same old gay episode' like WILL AND GRACE RE-RUNS

0


i guess we can't blame you for those care bear raps ... cuz thats who someONE YOUR AGE MIGHT-HUG
you should be embarassed of wut ya TYPE-UP cuz your 'Bars only got soft punches' like UNDERAGE NIGHTCLUBS

1. To the guys voting against this bar, there are nightclubs that are 18+ that 18 year olds have to leave at a certain time and alcohol cannot be served during that period.


if you asking ILLEST? i'm THE MEMBER TO HATE, but Noble beating Quix is something THEY NEVER WOULD SAY
i'm both CLEVER AND GREAT, so after this battle you'll put the 'Red Dot on yah own chest' like REMEMBERENCE DAY

0. Already used a "red dot" punchline.


you can't WEATHER THE WAY i rip yah organs out with the GEMS THAT I MAKE to send yah FRIENDS TO YAH WAKE
look, you can pretend to be straight, but like 'Neil Patrick Harris' your still just a FAG at the END OF THE DAY

1. Funny and flowed nice.

i'm a king to you dog ... you should BOW IN-FRONT OF Q your weak so look dog, NOW I'M DONE WITH YOU
you got boy toys and 'Gay Friends' so watch me 'Hang TheN (obleone) like COW-A-BUNGA DUDE

0. I see you tried to explain it but it was forced as shit. It's "Hang Ten". No "H" involved even if you added (obleone) there's still no "H" in Ten.

4


Both came pretty solid, Noble had a couple corny bars and Quix had a couple ones that could have been better had it not been for re-using the same concept for a punchline and also forcing a nameplay.

Noble: 5.5
Quix: 4

Overall: Noble

-- 02 Nov 2010 21:23 --

Noble, I deleted your last post on the basis of that some could view that as swaying. I see where you're coming from, but it cannot be said once the battle has commenced.

alright ill just keep quite and let the voting commence

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imma do the same shit bill did give 0's for shit i wasn't feeling and 1's for shit i was


in Scopes Of Rifles is where im Smokin Rivals, DANG MY FLOW IS VILE/
and dawg you'll get 'beat with bars' like ya NAME WAS GOMER PILE!/

0

you ride with teks? you'll hear laughter when they say this HOMOS A THUG/
i dont think this Guys a Threat, so like a Piru Set ill have em THROWIN UP BLOOD/

0 not a bad line but a pretty played concept

You aint on the block SLANGIN DRUGS, if theres Beef you wont BANG THEM GUNS/
Yeah Real Recognize Real, so if you dont know who I am then your the STRANGER SON!/

1

Im Grippin a Glock, you trippin if you thinkin you can TEST ME, STOP IT!/
ill Hit em with Shots to put 'Quix' ina Box like a NESTLE PRODUCT/

1 predictable nameflip but it was worded perfect & flowed really well

you a gangsta? nah, never catch the METAL ON THIS DUDES HIP/
only time you get 'Two Thumbs Thrown Up' is when JEFFREY DAHMERS PUKIN!/

1 like bill said this was real creative, universal but still great wordplay

This bitch is Pissed I voted against him, man ima RIP YOU TO SHREDS/
and after i HIT EM WITH LEAD, he should change his name to QUICK AND THE DEAD!!/

0

To be honest ya RAPPIN IS JUST TOO LAME, ill CLAP AND GET THIS DUDE SLAIN/
so yall can watch 'Q' get put in a hole like SCRATCHING IN A POOL GAME!/

1

Damnit im an Animal, ill beat you with a fuckin HAMMER TILL YOU DEAD BITCH/
or Buck the Gauge an have em Stuck in Place like a Soldier STANDING AT ATTENTION/

1

5

Overall: Solid verse overall a few duds & a few gems didn't have anything forced & everything was structured well

we don't need glasses to SEE THAT YOUR NOTHING; yous a closet fag, we'll never SEE-YA IN PUBLIC
in your DREAMS YOU GET FUCKED-WITH cuz the only time people 'screaming N.O' are BEING ABDUCTED

1

PLEASE, YOU AIN'T TOUGH KID. I'm a rip you apart from all ANGLES THEN I'LL BUST YAH NOSE
leave ya MANGLED AND WITH NOTHING HO! cuz we only see 'T.O with da Bills' when the BENGALS ARE IN BUFFALO

0 nameplay was really forced

if we TANGLE I'M A BUCK THIS JOKE, thats a FACT AND A BRAWLS GREAT i'll leave you STABBED IN A HALL-WAY
In FACT i'VE BEEN CALLED GREAT so i'm a put more 'Red dots on your face' than when ALADAIN DOES BROADWAY

1 punchline was a bit played/weak but the multis flowed well enough to get the 1


your bars WHACK AND THERE ALL GAY; ya'll say i fell off of mah game, but I STILL CAN BREAK THESE CHUMPS
so come up with some new shit ... cuz it seems to be the 'same old gay episode' like WILL AND GRACE RE-RUNS

1 universal but good wordplay


i guess we can't blame you for those care bear raps ... cuz thats who someONE YOUR AGE MIGHT-HUG
you should be embarassed of wut ya TYPE-UP cuz your 'Bars only got soft punches' like UNDERAGE NIGHTCLUBS

0 heard way too many punch-punchlines played as hell


if you asking ILLEST? i'm THE MEMBER TO HATE, but Noble beating Quix is something THEY NEVER WOULD SAY
i'm both CLEVER AND GREAT, so after this battle you'll put the 'Red Dot on yah own chest' like REMEMBERENCE DAY

0 - already used a "red dot" punchline btw never knew you were canadian/british had to look up the holiday(i knew it was veterans day but the red shit threw me) to figure out what you meant


you can't WEATHER THE WAY i rip yah organs out with the GEMS THAT I MAKE to send yah FRIENDS TO YAH WAKE
look, you can pretend to be straight, but like 'Neil Patrick Harris' your still just a FAG at the END OF THE DAY

1

i'm a king to you dog ... you should BOW IN-FRONT OF Q your weak so look dog, NOW I'M DONE WITH YOU
you got boy toys and 'Gay Friends' so watch me 'Hang TheN (obleone) like COW-A-BUNGA DUDE

0 super-mega-holy-fucking-forced

4

Overall: Clearly not your best work, had a few gems but not enough to get the W seems you underestimated noble, also when your rhymes aren't forced you write with a nice flow/style but in verses like this you seem to rhyme way too many syllables then your capable of and end up having a ton of awkwardly worded multis that don't look/sound right

Vote - fairly close but i think Noble clearly got this he was alot more solid and consistent overall

thanks for the breakdown Jesus

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QUIX:

we don't need glasses to SEE THAT YOUR NOTHING; yous a closet fag, we'll never SEE-YA IN PUBLIC
in your DREAMS YOU GET FUCKED-WITH cuz the only time people 'screaming N.O' are BEING ABDUCTED

2/5

PLEASE, YOU AIN'T TOUGH KID. I'm a rip you apart from all ANGLES THEN I'LL BUST YAH NOSE
leave ya MANGLED AND WITH NOTHING HO! cuz we only see 'T.O with da Bills' when the BENGALS ARE IN BUFFALO

too forced for my liking 1/5

if we TANGLE I'M A BUCK THIS JOKE, thats a FACT AND A BRAWLS GREAT i'll leave you STABBED IN A HALL-WAY
In FACT i'VE BEEN CALLED GREAT so i'm a put more 'Red dots on your face' than when ALADAIN DOES BROADWAY

lol, this was aiight, 2.5/5

your bars WHACK AND THERE ALL GAY; ya'll say i fell off of mah game, but I STILL CAN BREAK THESE CHUMPS
so come up with some new shit ... cuz it seems to be the 'same old gay episode' like WILL AND GRACE RE-RUNS

universal. wasnt a direct punch, 2.5/5

i guess we can't blame you for those care bear raps ... cuz thats who someONE YOUR AGE MIGHT-HUG
you should be embarassed of wut ya TYPE-UP cuz your 'Bars only got soft punches' like UNDERAGE NIGHTCLUBS

a lil played, not bad though, 3/5

if you asking ILLEST? i'm THE MEMBER TO HATE, but Noble beating Quix is something THEY NEVER WOULD SAY
i'm both CLEVER AND GREAT, so after this battle you'll put the 'Red Dot on yah own chest' like REMEMBERENCE DAY

yeah, no more red dot lines, 1.5/5

you can't WEATHER THE WAY i rip yah organs out with the GEMS THAT I MAKE to send yah FRIENDS TO YAH WAKE
look, you can pretend to be straight, but like 'Neil Patrick Harris' your still just a FAG at the END OF THE DAY

meh, it was ok. 2/5

i'm a king to you dog ... you should BOW IN-FRONT OF Q your weak so look dog, NOW I'M DONE WITH YOU
you got boy toys and 'Gay Friends' so watch me 'Hang TheN (obleone) like COW-A-BUNGA DUDE (hang 10 ... get it)

too forced. 1/5


total: 15.5



Noble:
in Scopes Of Rifles is where im Smokin Rivals, DANG MY FLOW IS VILE/
and dawg you'll get 'beat with bars' like ya NAME WAS GOMER PILE!/

great movie! original punch, 3/5

you ride with teks? you'll hear laughter when they say this HOMOS A THUG/
i dont think this Guys a Threat, so like a Piru Set ill have em THROWIN UP BLOOD/

1.5/5

You aint on the block SLANGIN DRUGS, if theres Beef you wont BANG THEM GUNS/
Yeah Real Recognize Real, so if you dont know who I am then your the STRANGER SON!/

2/5

Im Grippin a Glock, you trippin if you thinkin you can TEST ME, STOP IT!/
ill Hit em with Shots to put 'Quix' ina Box like a NESTLE PRODUCT/

these lines are too played, the nestle ones. 2/5

you a gangsta? nah, never catch the METAL ON THIS DUDES HIP/
only time you get 'Two Thumbs Thrown Up' is when JEFFREY DAHMERS PUKIN!/

Yeah, original, i liked it. 3/5 multis were off

This bitch is Pissed I voted against him, man ima RIP YOU TO SHREDS/
and after i HIT EM WITH LEAD, he should change his name to QUICK AND THE DEAD!!/

naahhh, 1/5

To be honest ya RAPPIN IS JUST TOO LAME, ill CLAP AND GET THIS DUDE SLAIN/
so yall can watch 'Q' get put in a hole like SCRATCHING IN A POOL GAME!/

much beter, 3.5/5

Damnit im an Animal, ill beat you with a fuckin HAMMER TILL YOU DEAD BITCH/
or Buck the Gauge an have em Stuck in Place like a Soldier STANDING AT ATTENTION/

2.5/5 multies need work

total: 18.5




yall can come WAAAYY harder than this, c'mon now boys!

votes gonna have to go to Noble on this, he was a tad better

appreciate the break down scott, wordup.

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Records updated and thread closed.