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Fuck It, I'm Satanic, Puke In A Bucket, Fuck Up The Whole Planet,
I Just Can't Stand It, I'm Godly, Bring it If I Demand It,

Or Command It, Fuck Floating Like A Butter Fly, I Just Rain Acid,
Fuck A Last Confession, When I Die Ill Wrap Myself In Plastic,

I'm Classic, I Aint A Bitch So September 11th Wasn't Tragic,
If Rap Had Sorcery, Then I Guess I Practice Black Magic,

God Damn It, I'm In The Lead, Everyones Blown Away By My Tail Wind,
Recommend Me As The Best, In Rap, Let Me Know When I Fail Then.


Idk Just Random Shit I Was Thinking. :/

This was ok I think you have flow, multies and creativity nailed. In these self-hyping pieces it's always good to add some wordplay or punchlines in general. I like your rhyme scheme it's similar to my own, you're really good with inner rhymes and that never fails to make a verse more fun for me to read (if it keeps with the flow lol) which it did. Good stuff you got there not perfect but nothing is. Keep it up.

Good Lookin out.