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4 bars, due sometime tomorrow

Czech

Alright cool. Ill have my drop sometime tomorrow.

Idy = I.D.
Pro V = High End Golf Ball
Pro = Professional
Mitchell Reports exposed professionals for steroid use
Whose Line Is It Anyway was an Improv comedy show

Check the stash growin on this half Samoen, fag I'm smoking; Not a cig ya know
Genghis Khan mixed with a hoe; no one's checkin I.D. bar the liquor sto'

I cripple foes, my flow slaughters; this Mongolian won't prosper
He never hangs with hoes see, only people bangin Pro-V...be them Pro Golfers

The show stopper, sick with retorts; My flow can sizzle and scorch
There's a bitch in everyone; I exposed Pro's like the Mitchell Reports

Throw missiles with force, leave enemies torched; he bites the shit he says
I can't stand it y'all; no wonder fans of 'Prov always like "Who's Line Is It Anyways?"

How Did He Win Three Battles? He's Never Torn Bars,
I Rap Full Time, Whiles He's Stuck Fluffing Gay Porn Stars,

I Ain't Len Wein, But Bitch Don't Make Me Erase You,
If This Was A Vocal Battle, William Hung Would Out Pace You,

Sucking Dick's For An A+, Like He Does For His Votes,
So Everybody Take Notes, He's A Hick Having Sex With His Fokes,

I'm The Champ, The Only Time He Fights, Is On Fight Night Round 4,
I Just Slapped You Like A Bitch While I Saying 'Why You Bite Down For?"


Nice glad to see you took the time to know me buddy

-- Wed Oct 27, 2010 11:32 pm --

oh yeah and I'm not Samoan. Or Mongolian lmfao Sorry I just read your post and had to point those out.

Flow tie

personals colossus

Punches colossus

My vote per the cat goes to c I would elaborate but I'm mobile both could do a lot of improving nice to see y'all doing your thing

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Personals: C his verse was just direct of course....
Punches: C again, harder hittin puches and tied into personals here he took this cat too..
Flow: Pro, easier to catch onto...
Creative: C
Enjoyment: C because of the punches and personals he'll take this all day

Vote: C

I agree with Leeroi's cats. Colossus came much stronger in the punch/personal department. That's all that stood between the 2 verses but it's also what wins a battle. Pro's punches were really weak imo, and so were Colossus' 1st and last bars. However his middle 2 bars hit their target so accurately he probably could've won the battle with just those. Vote - Colossus, good battle.

vote-col

word, he just came a bit better with his punches. pro's shit just seemed a bit too basic and didnt really look like he tried too hard.

Cool Nice battle man. Yeah I don't do much text battles, I saw you posted so I just posted on the spot what ever came to mind.

Keep Up

-- Thu Oct 28, 2010 10:43 am --

Cool Nice battle man. Yeah I don't do much text battles, I saw you posted so I just posted on the spot what ever came to mind.

Keep Up

Chalk it up, 4-0