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12 lines.....due tomorrow

Whatever man. Due tomorrow at midnight...


Chiggity check...

-- Tue Oct 26, 2010 9:34 pm --

.....I walk across the sun barefoot lookin' for shade......

Ayo...


Ill beat this dude without tha strap, without a mac to his back, Ill counteract
Defeat the facts, off the top with this like duke's avy the Madd Hatter without the hat...

Psshhh...
Ima take the spot, create the plot and bake it top five hundred in a vacant lot
This muthafucka tryin to live in his sig and shitttt... still couldnt make it hot... Lmfao...

Bring it? I should... Defeat this, I would... Discreet spits? Who could?
What you a lumberjack, you fuckin fag, seems you like seein people slingin the wood...

Well, Ill put the book in its place, this ya last chapter and I took it to lengths
You'll forver search for eternity, Ima shine continous while you looking for shade...

And Im not giving this bitch sympathy, Ill physically bend his knees and let tension weave
Round his hands, tie him up in front of his fans, and clown like I am... Hows that for a symphony??

Fuck this man....
I'll bring the flame to you, explain the truth to Illest's famous dukes about your latest spoof
Those you try to cater to, and Maestro, you still cant get kids to even come and play for you

Fuckin homo... Lol.

I done stood on curbs, sellin everything from pills to herb
but u ? ur avy the only time we see dis nerd flip birds

im vicious wit words, malicious, ima untamed pit
u aint sayn fuck me, u jus showin the finger u pick ur nose wit

im son of sam, i'll kill you, an make u an anagram gladly
radio says mcnasty's murked, television sayn i murked mcnasty

such tragedy displayed when i bruise and bludgeon kids
u donnie brasco, undercover cop, i peeped the badge in ur sig

collectively ill ? ur clearly wrong, ur flow aint even strong
i leave u murk'd, ironically ur emoticon's playin ur slow song

face it pal, u aint had ur ass beat this bad in a while
MURK is food, but this MC is NASTY, i woudnt dare bite his style



NO EXPLANATIONS NEEDED

-Punches - Merv
-Flow - Merv
-Personals - Merv

best lines

im son of sam, i'll kill you, an make u an anagram gladly
radio says mcnasty's murked, television sayn i murked mcnasty

And Im not giving this bitch sympathy, Ill physically bend his knees and let tension weave
Round his hands, tie him up in front of his fans, and clown like I am... Hows that for a symphony??

both focused a lil too much on sigs/avys for my liking but merv was more consistant overall some of his wording needed work but he had enough to take this clearly imo, maestro you didn't do bad you got potential but you need to up your complexity overall and rhyme a lil more

vote - merv

id have to give this to murk yo


i was just feelin his punches a lot more in this battle. i think he was more focused at his opponent then maestro was. maestro was a bit basic at times,his opener line although being an avy flip, it was much too basic for me. i also think like jesus said, yall focused a bit too much on avy's and shit. the pick your nose line also seemed a bit basic to me. it might have worked in a face to face battle but not here. i did like the murk mcnasty line though, prolly maestros best line.

i feel that symphony line is what took it for me. and i also think murks avy and sig flips were a little harder then maestros. the multis also helped a bit, made for a nicer flow. so ima go with murk on this one.

nice battle from the both of you, wordup.

yeah, Murk took this battle in every cat

multis, punches, flow...

yall both did one too many avatar punches which gets redundant after awhile. Maestro - try to develop more of a multi structure when battling, it helps a lot.



vote: Murk

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