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Spell bound by Ambition
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Re: Spell bound by Ambition
Nice track! This is first audio track I've heard from you, and I hope to hear more in the future. Your rhythm and rhyme comes off much better in audio than they do as written verses. These lyrics are real, like em a lot. Kinda wish you had changed up your pace of the flow a little bit here and there, just to give some diversity to the sound. Think with this kinda beat that doesn't change up too much, would sound better if your voice did some changing up. I also kinda wish there was a third verse on the track, when it ends I feel like I wanna listen to it a little bit longer. Overall this is a real nice track Haz, keep it up...


Re: Spell bound by Ambition
Im digging this flow you spitting.. the beat is sick.. the female voice kinda gets annoying after awhile.. but if i had to give you any advice it would be to try on pronunciation specially with all the multi's you got in the 1st verse.. 2nd verse was solid sounded good, not really any flaws i saw
good track man.. im looking for more from you...
good track man.. im looking for more from you...

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Re: Spell bound by Ambition
Shit Man Im Feeling This...Like I.C Said First Audio Iv Heard From You But Judging By That Track It Wont Be The Last...Nice Track Man

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Re: Spell bound by Ambition
this does top the others u've released... good shit... keep em comin
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Re: Spell bound by Ambition
I read the verse but I might as well leave my feedback on the final product. I loved this beat and I think your voice and delivery suited it well. I agree that audio does your verses a lot of justice, but my favorite part of the whole song has to be the chorus, it was perfect for this type of song. Keep it up I'd love to hear more.
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Re: Spell bound by Ambition
beat is nice. veddy nice. man your shit is gettin iller an iller. your flow seemed near flawless dawg. hook is..............prolly could of jus used a lil more. your second verse seemed to have alot more energy, which is what i thought the first verse was missin. lyrics were on point. the whole track had this certain vibe to it which really sinks someone into your lyrics. production seemed pretty good. you keep elevatin man, thats dope. keep pushin this shit. focus more on the mic and i think your game will grow alot quicker. not that theres anything wrong with where your at, but, you got sumtn good dawg. keep shit droppin amigo.
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Re: Spell bound by Ambition
GREAT BEAT, who's it by?
The S's come off really heavy, maybe a mixing problem. Good delivery, love the flow. Good chorus. The feel to the chorus is awesome. Nice and calm. Your quality is good and this is a great track. I'm d/l'ing for sure.
Your style is pretty awesome. This impressed me.
The S's come off really heavy, maybe a mixing problem. Good delivery, love the flow. Good chorus. The feel to the chorus is awesome. Nice and calm. Your quality is good and this is a great track. I'm d/l'ing for sure.
Your style is pretty awesome. This impressed me.
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