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6 bars.
due in 48 hours.
punches
personals
flow
enjoyment.

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Alright here goes....

Your occupation must be fulfilling bro,
Writing dope 6 bar freestyles you must be on mad dough.*

I spit with so much force you will actually spit back my own saliva,
how are you one of the illest lyricists if you’re “lyrically inclined” and your most active topic is a 3 word cypher?

I joined your site coz I’m not legally allowed to write freestyles in my own country anymore.
I’m not really sure what I want to be, see I’m three quarters cooked but I still spit raw.

Man you and your country’s rap style is a blank canvas, just plain,
if you are full of pride I guess I’m the next 9/11 plane.


I’m sort of sick in the head, just sort of not ok
I dream about stingrays, car crashes and dingoes taking babies away.**


I diss guys in my free time as it helps to soothe my demented mind
I’m a fucking creep, a freak of nature, a dictator… of the Hitler kind.
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* ER215 lists his occupation as gettin money!

**Aussie reference... stingrays killed steve irwin, car crash killed peter brock (aussie icons) and dingoes took a baby back in the 80s. Just in case you didnt know this.

Oh shit.. He dropped before me!! I'm fallin off

So you're an Aussie huh? Didn't know you guys could rap... Anyway....

You a boomerang thrower? That really makes me wonder, Sam you really are a fag you on ya knees and stay Down Under/
Hey Sam Hogan "Let me tell you something brother!", the rhymes that I refine will leave you torn asunder/
These punches come natural easily I'll bruise ya, you asked for me so I guess beggers can be choosers/
Must of been a Fosters kid did ur dad abuse ya?, after this battle we'll speak "Sam, Austrailian for loser."/
Your skill is not what u thought it was, ur punches a be better off wit a Kangaroo and boxing gloves/
Don't care where ur from this America u gets no love, this homo inboxed me a thank you and signed the msg Kiss & Hugs/
Is that how they do it there? Is everyone who's Aussie queer?, i'm on top of this "No Sam that don't mean I want your rear"/
You know what it is I am everythin u should of feared, I'm in a different lane and my drive is in a different gear/
Sorry Ass MC a well fit abbreviation, your countries fake I looked it up and it came up in "quotations"/
Even when ur toilet flush it's in a reverse rotation, that means ur ass backwards it ok time for u to face it/
"G'day mate" this isn't ur ordinary play day, wrong spin up on Earths axis is the only time you'll past me/ 
Tryna swim up in this water wit a killer it's ur last day, one strike thru the chest they callin me ER Stingray/  

*Down Under - Nick name for Austrailia
Let me tell u brother ~ Hulk Hogan Slogan
Fosters - Austrailian beer "Fosters, Austrailian for beer" is the slogan

Just in case ppl don't know....   

 

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PUNCHES - ER
PERSONALS - ER
FLOW - ER
ENJOYMENT - ER

Don't really feel the need to break this down as its pretty much a catsweep for ER. Sam's whole verse was basic IMO. A lot of self hype. Not many personals, though I considered the Australia plays personals so I gave it to ER. None of the punches hit too hard for me. Still a weak battle IMO, no diss.

Vote - ER

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Cat sweep for ER. No need to break it down. You don't have to count my vote, but I'm not gonna sit here and analyze the battle... It was pretty one-sided.

Vote-ER

Punches: ER (Hogan didn't really have any.)
Personals: ER
Flow: ER
Enjoyment: ER

Hands down, ER. He had some nice wordplay on the Aussie thing. I liked the ass backwards line. His flow was on point. Hogan's flow was a mess. His shortest line was 11 syllables and his longest was 31.

+1 ER

Yea that's 3-0

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KO its done. Records updated and thread closed.