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Where I Stand(4th Mixtape Track)Complexity

Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 8:41 am
by 16 Micz
Where I Stand - Objective Mixtape

the author of "Where i stand", was probably the greatest man ||
since Columbus raided this land, thats where the debating began ||
just remember his ship hit the sand, by chance many years in advance ||
from when the first europeans, got a glance of seeing freedom ||
centuries later the dictator of france, put armies in command ||
defeating the europeons, like muhamid ali they really beat em ||
the only reason, we believe in treason, is cuz powers deceiving ||
so seizing becomes achieving, hence america going to war with demons ||
which is great or misleading, depends how you twist this reading ||
if it wasn't for human beings bleeding, U.S wouldn't exist even ||
or european settlements, might have been intelligent not devil sent ||
i spit relevant to excellent, like america got the best defense ||
a perfect investment for defecates, understand my testament ||
It can't be contested, like republicans who molest kids ||
so the budget spend is wretched, so are the democrats arrested ||
when there memo fax, were sent to undeveloped kids like virals demo raps ||
my emos back, more complex then income tax, lets spin some tracks ||
Go from the past,to my next match when Evil Geniuses become attached again ||
into fashion like ralph lauren, their bottles we are smashing them ||
to the full throttle, going below earth then hell we curse ||
trust me..we will go "past political" like stem cell research ||
dont' matter who we verse, they'll be seperated like the continents ||
from our convex of complex concepts in context of perfect content ||
compent my confidence, you can't C me, like the skys dense ||
the defiance of our genius, can only be defined by science ||
u think all we spit is mythology cuz we rhymed by mayans ||
thirteen bars n i'm still climbing,keeping my grill shinin ||
my team is pumped up like the giants, if pacs alive I will find him ||
blind side him, and shoot him with a nine, just for killin time ||
diss-still-in-mind, I've had enough ya know, i'm to rough ta flow ||
staying in control like buffalo, without a bluff ta show ||
I'm Untouchable, Rock Is Uncrushable, Kyle will Bust A Skull ||
And Evil Geniuses Are Like Cancer Make You Suffer Slow ||

Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 12:40 pm
by Viral
"were sent to undeveloped kids like virals demo raps"


hmmm...interesting...it happened to be da first thing i saw....i read da first part its not bad..ill read up on it later wen i got time n give u full feed...peace

EDIT:..k so i jst actually read the topic...its toms verse...coo coo...should had tom post it instead...it confused me wen i took a quick glance seein dat Micz posted it...used to da poster being the writer dats all...next time if u do it again jst make it like Writer: so n so and blah blah so yeah dont gotta pay attention to get it..haha...or not doesnt matter

Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 2:26 pm
by complexity
Yah. I'm saying that if your demo raps were sent to some people who knew shit.
They'd be like thats the shit! Feel me?!

NOt that you have actually sent a demo. Its just hypothetical.

Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 12:34 am
by Viral
lol right....i figured it meant somethin on that level....

Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 2:19 am
by precise
this was nice as hell, looks like something that alotta work was put into

Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 2:22 am
by drunken jesus
one of the best pieces i've read from you i can really see my criticism and advice being put to use in this, good shit

Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 2:29 am
by precise
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