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Voted on Murk VS Quix & Orfadox VS leeroi green

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-- Mon Oct 18, 2010 11:10 am --

GIVE YOU SOMETHING TO LOOK AT FOR A REFERENCE... LOL

This dude is foolishly impractical check his definition, I'm smashing lames Quix (quick) wit diabolic repetition/
Is it something I'm missing? Quix be really shittin?, all the battles I've seen him in end with Quix gettin finished/
I'm a buffet of rhymes Quix a paper bag luncheon, at the table askin can we swap a line or somethin/
Quix make letters BIG so it can seem he throwing punches, but everytime opponents steppin up they walk away wit nothin/
Not a cut not a scratch not even a black eye, and Quix a heavy hitter? He must be a fat guy/
Homo throwing weaves in is the only way ur tracks lie, only think you the shit cuz ur man be all in your backside/
xiuQ you to the landfill and toss u wit your trash, you's a lil itch but I'm the ointment for that ass/
Q me anytime U need help wit your craft, I can piece together my rhymes and give you a Xerograph/

Xiuq-, to pull, haul, drag
Xerograph- copy of a graphic matter

ok


Dog you steady MISSING WITH THEM WEAK CORDS you should FIX-EM UP AND READ MORE
i mean, this fags a rookie right? cuz 'ER's just the "pussy, Type" like KITTENS ON A KEYBOARD
you ain't SPITTING PIFF WID ME WHORE .. look this weak ass MANS A BIMBO
prolly a FAN OF DISCO, cuz we see 'more gay bars from this faggot' than in SAN FRANSISCO
I'm a PROBLEM, BEHAVE DYKE or its OFF-WID YAH FAKE NIKES or get POPPED-IN A PAID FIGHT
plus me winning here is a 'Dead give-away' like AUCTIONS AT GRAVE-SITES
you get no PROFIT YOU STAY LIGHT, cuz from you dog...all we 'hear is shit' like we LISTENED TO CRAP
spitting FICTION, NOT FACTS ... Fake nigguh, its its time 'Re-Tire' like FIXING A FLAT



aigh, vote fair

flow- Tie easy to read both
personals- ER wrote "Quix make letters BIG" bout as personal as it got lol
punches- Quix even though they sucked he threw more 'Dead give-away'...AUCTIONS AT GRAVE-SITES lol nothing free at an auction step your lame up
enjoyment-Quix only because i didn't really like ER's fourth bar and it seems like Quix was trying really hard to be clever
word/nameplay- ER scored name play however your opener all Murk,no bueno WP Q had "pussy, Type"&'Re-Tire' as far as that goes actually ER 4th bar saved this cat lol

in my opinion this battle sucked I cant believe Quix uses so much filler tries to hard to rhyme "BEHAVE DYKE or its OFF-WID YAH FAKE NIKES or get POPPED-IN A PAID FIGHT"(Garbage)'hear is shit' like we LISTENED TO CRAP(super garbage)

ER could have come better as well "throwing weaves in is the only way ur tracks lie" would have hit harder had you implied that his tracks were lies and this "think you the shit cuz ur man be all in your backside" hated it that being said it was a fairly even cat fight

my vote ER just because you can remove ER from Quix verse and it's pretty generic so thats my fair vote aight

Flow: ER
Personals: ER
Punches: Tie
Enjoyment: Tie
Wordplay/Nameplay: ER

Quix had some decent punches that were enjoyable to read, but nothing was aimed at ER. A couple of ER's punches were a bit tough to get at first but they were pretty creative. Although,the ointment for that ass line sounded a bit gay,they were at least directed at Quix for the most part. ER also took the flow hands down.

+1 ER

although ER's verse was nothing special i think he got the edge. he had some cool wordplay in his verse. i think he could have worded a few things to make the punches stick a little more.

i think Quix came very generic. i think ive even seen a few of those lines from someone else before, like almost the exact same way. that "pussy/kitten" line is way too basic. and im foreal that san fransisco line ive seen or heard before in a grindtime battle. a little fishy, and like dude said the auction line had a flaw in it. and the "listened to crap" line was wack. the tire line was your best punch i think.

i give this one to ER

Yeah i figured you'd vote for ER ^^ i'm starting to notice a pattern...and for real ... lol thats the only thing fishy round here.



Good battle ER, nice verse.

dont get sore son, your verse was garbage for someone with a 62-21 battle record and with someone like scott to help you out.

(@ NOBLE) right ^ lmfao


Fyi ... Scott and i maybe comunicate once a month if that...and when we do talk its rarely about Text battles .. lol

just because Anti matter sends you bars and ideas for punches ... doesn't mean everyone does that. Most of us write our own shit!

Good Day

what the hell I just log in to?? Lol

Good battle Quix....

Ok mods rap it...

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you can say anti gives me bars but he doesnt lol good for you for turning it aorund faggot.

I have as much proof of Anti Matter giving you bars as you do of "scott helping me"


now pipe down Pathetic lil hommie, your boring me!

i merely said it, you cant even come original, you gotta use some shit i just said lol


funny thing is, everyone in this thread voted against you.

yeah i lost ... and that just goes to show idon't get mad at everyones vote against me ... just the ones that look consistanlly fucked up! ER won, had a nice verse i said that!

BUUUUUT ...

the real funny thing is you dog .. cuz you Really looking scared ducking my call ... you've got 1 wn allready .. .don't say you don't text battle you hipocrit ... you don't text battle people that'll whoooop your ass ... Just tell the people!


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If there is a vote you want discarded then say so, if not this thread is getting closed in 24 hours.

Stop the bullshit free posting too.

no discarded votes ... ER won this battle.


I was meerly commenting on how Noble votes against me in everybattle.


ER = Won

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