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Half wrote, mostly freestyled it. Background: Had a really difficult finance exam...and I wasn't happy hahaha. Anyway tell me what you think.

I don't like how you said " Half wrote, mostly freestyled it."
To me don't post something only 'Half Done' we don't want to listen to something un-completed
If your not 100% happy with it then what makes u think we will want to listen to it?
Work on your voice, delivery, flow and breath control
The sound mixing wasn't the greatest either but even with crap mixing/software/mic
you should be producing something that is eligible that can be considered worth listening

I didn't like it to be honest I wont like, I still think you have a long way to go

~Markb~

Lol, it wasn't "un-completed, nor was it "half-done". I wrote some, didn't write the rest. It was very on purpose because I wanted to see if I could hear the difference between the two...or if someone else could.

I'm glad you could hear the breathing though. That part was intentional as well. When I said I "there's no room to breathe", I gave it away. It was kind of a theme if you noticed all the times I mentioned the air, fly, wings, heights. etc. I honestly don't think I was breathing hard enough, or audacity and my computer's mic wouldn't pick it up like I wanted it to.

Amywho, thanks for the input!

Thanks for the input!