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-I keep on getting better at higher and a faster rate/
-If you feel that your getting confident , I'll trash your faith/
-I'll prove to you that I eat up rappers , just pass the plate/
-They scarred when I "come" , cause i'll bust them like I masterbate/
-Dont hesitate cause im more than positive i'l demonstrate/
-That im getting slept on cause all these niggas meditate/
-Im hella-great , im stepping up meaning that I levitate/
-Making it to heavens gate , & having all these fellas hate/
-These brick hard verses go hard like a heavyweight/
-My thoughts and pencil and my paper all cooperate/
-They opperate w/ this big brain , an uncommon trait/
-Im also known as the main squeeze because I concentrate/
-Doing better things , im no longer at an average rate/
-I can deal with all pressure meaning I can manage hate/
-I aggravate these rappers and leave them in a panic state/
-When they realize that their necks(next) , to decapitate/

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I have to say that this was decidedly average. Not really that weak but nothing about it stood out to me. You got some decent flow. Try and bring a little creativity into your next drop.

-I'll prove to you that I eat up rappers , just pass the plate/
-They scarred when I "come" , cause i'll bust them like I masterbate/

(i liked this line alot..fresh)

Overall it was a pretty solid drop...nothin to special but it was worth the read....metaphors were str8 and i saw sum good wordplay..keep it up and keep droppin.one.

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