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Edit: Due by midnight Thursday

My Vote:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/omega ... 18611.html

Omni doesn't have enough posts vote so I assume he gets to by pass that rule for now...

Consider this my check.

check...i guess???...

"Omni Flow" = "I'm no wolf" so he's no challenge, for a jungle cat, where's the fun in that?
Cause I'll stop Flow like I plug the bath, then hung his ass out to dry on a fucking rack.

Omni wanna bring heat? Blaze a track? So, like your last battle we ask where the Flame is at.
He wants to get big and make paper stack but I only see Omni grow if suddenly I became black.(Think about it)

You're a broken disgrace, hopelessly fake. And your name fits, Your flow's all over the place.
Your mouth is the source of so potent a stank it only felt right to put the "Scope" to ya face.

They exclaim the name of the lord when Flow drop, Not like "O" God, but like "Oh, God! Flow, stop!"
This hoes got no props and gives flow such a bad name, I'd rather have no flow in my whole drop.


I think this is pretty simple but just in case...
"I'm no wolf" is an anagram of "Omni Flow"
Flame Boy no showed in a battle against Omni. I'm Negro.
Omni means all. Scope is a brand of mouthwash.

Plans got fucked up...ill drop by tomorrow/thursday night...

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Not a problem. I edited the due date.

Had to key this pretty quick...

The ‘bell’ DINGS-FOR-THE-RUMBLE, this bitch aint the KING-OF-THE-JUNGLE, I take ya 'throne' with the TECH-AND
Teach ya a LESSON, at this I'm the BEST-SON…the only way this ‘pussy’ will ever be ‘king’ is on TEKKEN

WRECK-EM, I take ya ‘cats’ skins and STRETCH-EM, SELL-EM as floor rugs…don’t BE-MAD-AT-ME
BATTLE-ME I'll turn ya to a CASUALTY, or I'll take it easy and just turn this ‘lion’ to a ‘kau’-b(cub) like BABALITIES

It's time to drill this GATO, kill this ‘pussy’ with the COCK-THOUGH, I knew this guy was GAY-MAN
I ‘rock’ ya like a CAVE-MAN, ‘cat’ wants ‘big balls’ in his face like ‘Sylvester’ on SPACE-JAM

AY-MEN(amen), say ya prayers when I get to AIM-IN’(aiming), I got ya in MY-SIGHTS
HIT-YA-MIND, SPLIT-YA-RHYMES, Now you're as useless as ‘fallopian tubes’ on FIVE-DYKES

-pussy=cat=lion
-Tekken...is a video game where King is a character thats half human/half cat
-babalities...are a finishing move on Mortal Kombat
-theres a scene in space jam where sylvester gets crushed by balls(youtube it)

Kau the Lion wrote:"Omni Flow" = "I'm no wolf" so he's no challenge, for a jungle cat, where's the fun in that?
Cause I'll stop Flow like I plug the bath, then hung his ass out to dry on a fucking rack.

clever wish you would have set up the wolf bar

Kau the Lion wrote:Omni wanna bring heat? Blaze a track? So, like your last battle we ask where the Flame is at.
He wants to get big and make paper stack but I only see Omni grow if suddenly I became black.(Think about it)

lol bit of a basic setup though very nice punch

Kau the Lion wrote:You're a broken disgrace, hopelessly fake. And your name fits, Your flow's all over the place.
Your mouth is the source of so potent a stank it only felt right to put the "Scope" to ya face.

very nice start to finish a suggestion though "hopelessly fake" would become much more descriptive as hopeless and fake imo best bars of the battle

Kau the Lion wrote:They exclaim the name of the lord when Flow drop, Not like "O" God, but like "Oh, God! Flow, stop!"
This hoes got no props and gives flow such a bad name, I'd rather have no flow in my whole drop.

very strong finish

OMNI FLOW wrote: The ‘bell’ DINGS-FOR-THE-RUMBLE, this bitch aint the KING-OF-THE-JUNGLE, I take ya 'throne' with the TECH-AND
Teach ya a LESSON, at this I'm the BEST-SON…the only way this ‘pussy’ will ever be ‘king’ is on TEKKEN

nice opener good flow some basic fillers though punch good but unoriginal

OMNI FLOW wrote:WRECK-EM, I take ya ‘cats’ skins and STRETCH-EM, SELL-EM as floor rugs…don’t BE-MAD-AT-ME
BATTLE-ME I'll turn ya to a CASUALTY, or I'll take it easy and just turn this ‘lion’ to a ‘kau’-b(cub) like BABALITIES

again nice flow kind of basic though and just key cub you dont want the readers to stretch to hard keep the rhythm

OMNI FLOW wrote:It's time to drill this GATO, kill this ‘pussy’ with the COCK-THOUGH, I knew this guy was GAY-MAN
I ‘rock’ ya like a CAVE-MAN, ‘cat’ wants ‘big balls’ in his face like ‘Sylvester’ on SPACE-JAM

i liked the space jam ref but first half of this made "you" seem homo

OMNI FLOW wrote:AY-MEN(amen), say ya prayers when I get to AIM-IN’(aiming), I got ya in MY-SIGHTS
HIT-YA-MIND, SPLIT-YA-RHYMES, Now you're as useless as ‘fallopian tubes’ on FIVE-DYKES

lol finished strong


flow-Omni
name play-Kau
creativity-Kau
punches-Kau

Overall presentation-Kau this was a nice battle for both of you i think there were points you both could have stepped it up and i'm sure you will close battle

Yeah...meant "with a cock-though"...double meaning/wordplay...like gun cocked...but thanks for the feedback...UPPIN'...

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not sure what the cats are and dont feel like breaking this down so here it is

punches: omni(omni had a few lines that i hated, but that tekken line was nice)
flow: kau
personals: neither
nameplay: kau
wordplay: tie
meta's/sim's: omni
creativity: tie
entertainment: kau

vote: kau


overall a crappy battle lol, kau's was smoother, omni's was a little..weird, kau focused too hard on the nameplays, omni focused too hard on the "lion/cat" references, kau lacked a lot but omni kinda destroyed what could've been powerful, so it made it a lot harder to decide, n e ways, i seen better from kau, first battle i think i seen of you omni but u hold potential

Punches: Tie (a lot of fillers and bad setups)
flow: Kau
personals: Kau
Creative: Tie
wordplay: Omni

My Vote: Kau

Pretty close battle really. Lacked some things but it's cool..

Good battle guys....

Also vote on ER vs leeroi green please so we can rap that battle up.. It's 3-1 leeroi right now...

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3-0 Kau gets this via Knockout. Records will be updated and this thread is closed.