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Written to the 2 Words Kanye instrumental. This one wasn't freestyled but the topic is still simply a display of lyrical prowess. If anyone has a topic suggestion I'm open to any and all comments and obviously criticism on this:

One word, one time, one flow (one line)
one verse, one rhyme, one show
then I go, mental fallacio, leave minds blown
enter the stadium, send ya crying home
so mythological, a word smith who has chronicled
the path most economical, for talent astronomical
It's comical, to think I'm not superior
the nearest peers to my level are honestly inferior
so run in rampant fear, get it clear, the champ is here
the illest, you can hear my brilliance, really I'm a lamp to ears
A fixture here, me? Ill never disappear
Make the rhythm a victim and Casper rappers' careers
A rhyme pioneer. Pride? I got the lion's share
Confidence is dominant to every pair of eyes and ears
Merely a natural, lyrically I'm masterful
Every line designed is defined as unsurpassable
The rough drafts of flows I craft are exceptional
In case you think we're equal, equivalent or symmetrical
You're misinformed I'll clear up the misconceptions
I slice rhymes, a verse surgeon, performing operations

Make the rhythm a victim and Casper rappers' careers
A rhyme pioneer. Pride? I got the lion's share

Dope Right Here...

To Be Real Bro i Could Not Find Many Quotable Bars...Lines Were Dope Here And There Buut What Really Kicks Me In The Chest Is The Flow. It Seems Every Drop The Flow Is To The T. Keep Making it Look Ez Bro...1

Mad drop. Ryhmescheme was on point. And punches well thrown lol....only thing wrong I personally see is that the word symmetrical may be used wrongly here. To my understanding it means a force equally distributed to different points, I don't know, I'm a car hoon and when i looked in to the WRX, thats what i understood by their use of symmetrical force in their 4wd system....

But all in all, mad rap homie ya got mad skill....

You're misinformed I'll clear up the misconceptions
I slice rhymes, a verse surgeon, performing operations

Keep on operating cuz lol....

One word, one time, one flow (one line)
one verse, one rhyme, one show
then I go, mental fallacio, leave minds blown
enter the stadium, send ya crying home

good build.

so mythological, a word smith who has chronicled
the path most economical, for talent astronomical

not feeling this.

It's comical, to think I'm not superior
the nearest peers to my level are honestly inferior

Cool

so run in rampant fear, get it clear, the champ is here
the illest, you can hear my brilliance, really I'm a lamp to ears
A fixture here, me? Ill never disappear
Make the rhythm a victim and Casper rappers' careers

lol Like the flow of this.

A rhyme pioneer. Pride? I got the lion's share
Confidence is dominant to every pair of eyes and ears
Merely a natural, lyrically I'm masterful
Every line designed is defined as unsurpassable
The rough drafts of flows I craft are exceptional
In case you think we're equal, equivalent or symmetrical

Strongest point in this verse If you ask Me.


You're misinformed I'll clear up the misconceptions
I slice rhymes, a verse surgeon, performing operations


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in my opinion you could of went harder, but you held your own N kept it consistent so props, drop it as a audio. Keep it up.