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I can take you up to the sun
Run my fingers cross your stars
Mingle in your universe
And sleep the night away on mars
This was all your inspiration
So let's explore your galaxy
I'm solaring your system
And tonight we'll watch a comet be
As beautiful as it is
Flying pass our world
No routed destination
No place to be referred
And now that i know your moon
Has a few pretty rings
I'm certain that this earth
Isn't a place for your dreams

YOUR OUT OF THIS WORLD......

Welcome to the site man, I like this drop, hope to see more from you, it stays consistent from first to last line. Creative written here, and I appreciate that you don't feel a need to rhyme wit it, not all writtens need to rhyme to be ill, and u don't see many non-rhymes on this site, mostly all written raps.

Hey man thx... I like to try something new now and then to see how ppl's reaction would be... I like different as well as the classic so I try to mix them every now and then...
Thx again...

Welcome To The Site

Peace