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The wind blows, the sun glows,
I hear crows, a dead rose,
It seems cold,the world molds,
i see loads, of dead roads,
My eyes hold,Stories told,
by the old,it unfolds
And My past,seems to last,
A brick wall and i gasp,
I Look up and i grasp,
Cement bricks while i cast,
Myself up,i give up, 
Its enuff!....yeaa.. its enuff..listen...yo..
These grey walls seem to b my shadow,
im cast away in this place in a boat..with no paddle,
how am i suppose to b victorious when i cant even battle!,
the chances of me breakin out here seem suicidal,
But then again i guess i never solved lifes riddle,
i wanna go btween these barriers like im the middle,
Just alittle more and my life sentence will disappear,
never thought jail would ever b my tomb but yet i dont fear,
Now i sit back while i taste the salt of my tears, 
I guess its true what the news saids..the end is near....im the worst one.

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This had a sick flow in the beginning... & I liked the wordplay in it..nutting really stood out like "WOW" .. but it was pretty good .. keep dropping

Thanks man...and yea it wasnt ment to be sumthin like WOW just sumthin i had in mind thats y i didnt put so many punches in there i just wanted to be more descriptive...but youll see more coming soon..one.

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this was alright I didnt like the beginning really..it reminds me of a old DMX track so Im like eh it sounds ok but it just didnt seem to hit home till you went in with the verse either way it was a cool lil drop for what it was keep writing

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